General Fan Fiction Thread

[Kanassa]

Currently I have three main fighters on the protagonist side, with six characters that get a few fights, but are usually handling side stuff to help the main three (Because the villains are usually much stronger than them)... And then there`s the Pilaf Gang... I don`t know how`d I describe them in it.

[SilverArmada]

You should focus on a main cast of characters. It's totally find to have a secondary cast of characters that appear often but are not the main focus of the story. It's very hard for any writer, professional or not to manage a large cast of characters while still keeping the reader engaged. If you have too many things going on with too many characters and they don't tie together very well, a reader can get confused and lose focus of what's going on, and ultimately drop the story. Weekly manga like Bleach, for example, suffered from this problem. When main characters don't appear for months at a time, fans grow impatient and lose interest.

Which is not to say, you can't have subplots that tie into your main plot. Example from my own fic: the main conflict is to go after and destroy Organization X. A secondary character, whose story arc only crosses paths with the main cast at a few points, ends up investigating Government Y and finds the connection to Organization X. So that subplot reveals something about the main plot, AND I limit the amount of "screen time" (aka words in the fic) dedicated to this subplot so that it remains interesting but it's not diverting entirely away from the main cast. I'm not a professional writer by any stretch of the imagination, but I think I'm pretty good at coming up with an interesting story. So if anyone wants any help with anything like this, be it beta reading or just "I need help organizing my plot" feel free to PM me. I've been reading and writing fanfic for... holy crap just over seventeen years now, I had to think about that for a minute. Plus I'm always a fan of a good DB fanfic idea, so anything to help people execute those great ideas is something I'm willing to invest time in.

[Doctor.]

Thinking about writing a somewhat short Freeza origin story (this one I promise I'll finish at some point! Especially since I'll try to do it all in one go instead of splitting it into different chapters). It'll be part of my DB reboot project that I'll post here once I get around to finishing the lore and the timeline. Anyway, here's what I'll be dealing with:

• Origin of the Super Saiyan legend
• Origin of Cold's empire, how it functions and does business
• Freeza's birth and his rivalry with Coola in his childhood
• Extinction of the Freeza race

How long do you reckon it should be? I'm thinking of a few pages at least, but I'm not sure.

[Alruneia]

Thinking about writing a somewhat short Freeza origin story (this one I promise I'll finish at some point! Especially since I'll try to do it all in one go instead of splitting it into different chapters). It'll be part of my DB reboot project that I'll post here once I get around to finishing the lore and the timeline. Anyway, here's what I'll be dealing with:

• Origin of the Super Saiyan legend
• Origin of Cold's empire, how it functions and does business
• Freeza's birth and his rivalry with Coola in his childhood
• Extinction of the Freeza race

How long do you reckon it should be? I'm thinking of a few pages at least, but I'm not sure.

Sounds like something that'd take a lot of text to cover. I don't know what your definition of a page is as far as word count goes, so I can't really comment on that, but... Ten thousand words maybe? Twenty? You should probably get more input than just mine here.

[ekrolo2]

Thinking about writing a somewhat short Freeza origin story (this one I promise I'll finish at some point! Especially since I'll try to do it all in one go instead of splitting it into different chapters). It'll be part of my DB reboot project that I'll post here once I get around to finishing the lore and the timeline. Anyway, here's what I'll be dealing with:

• Origin of the Super Saiyan legend
• Origin of Cold's empire, how it functions and does business
• Freeza's birth and his rivalry with Coola in his childhood
• Extinction of the Freeza race

How long do you reckon it should be? I'm thinking of a few pages at least, but I'm not sure.

If you don't want it to be too long, I'd suggest doing this Silmarillion style where it's less of a classical story in structure and more like reading a history lesson or a legend.

[Gog]

Thinking about writing a somewhat short Freeza origin story (this one I promise I'll finish at some point! Especially since I'll try to do it all in one go instead of splitting it into different chapters). It'll be part of my DB reboot project that I'll post here once I get around to finishing the lore and the timeline. Anyway, here's what I'll be dealing with:

• Origin of the Super Saiyan legend
• Origin of Cold's empire, how it functions and does business
• Freeza's birth and his rivalry with Coola in his childhood
• Extinction of the Freeza race

How long do you reckon it should be? I'm thinking of a few pages at least, but I'm not sure.

Sounds interesting... Wait a minute extinction? Don't you mean near eradication or something as if their extinct then it doesn't truly add up having other members of there race, in any of the games. (Also minor nit pick at the extinction part, Freeza makes no reference to being one of the last of his race)

[Nejishiki]

In all fairness, it's fan fiction. Doctor. is not bound to all of Dragon Ball's establishments. That's the fun of it. Now, it you do want to know about Freeza's race for the sake of being informed, Toriyama provided a tidbit claiming Cold & Freeza were mutants compared to the rest of their members. Coola, Kuriza, & Chilled, should you consider them, are not acknowledged as being unique within their species.

[Gog]

In all fairness, it's fan fiction. Doctor. is not bound to all of Dragon Ball's establishments. That's the fun of it. Now, it you do want to know about Freeza's race for the sake of being informed, Toriyama provided a tidbit claiming Cold & Freeza were mutants compared to the rest of their members. Coola, Kuriza, & Chilled, should you consider them, are not acknowledged as being unique within their species.

Yeah I do know that fact, but any way the reason why I had that reaction was because Freeza's race is my favorite race out of them all... (I'm quite biased towards them)

[Kanassa]

In all fairness, it's fan fiction. Doctor. is not bound to all of Dragon Ball's establishments. That's the fun of it. Now, it you do want to know about Freeza's race for the sake of being informed, Toriyama provided a tidbit claiming Cold & Freeza were mutants compared to the rest of their members. Coola, Kuriza, & Chilled, should you consider them, are not acknowledged as being unique within their species.

Yeah I do know that fact, but any way the reason why I had that reaction was because Freeza's race is my favorite race out of them all... (I'm quite biased towards them)

I'm guilty of that as well, Frieza Race just has the most entertaining design and possibilities in battle.

[Polyphase Avatron]

Since I said I would, I might as well give the general outlines for what I planned to happen in my fanfic before I abandoned it.

Anyway, Beerus, Majozo, and Parappas would teleport to the base of the Tree of Might (teleporting up to where the fruit was would be too dangerous and Parappas refused to do it). Beerus and Majozo would begin flying up to the top of the tree, attempting to avoid being seen, but Azazel's demons would notice them anyway. Parappas would provide support by using his spells to take control of some of the demons, while Beerus fought off the rest. At one point one of them almost gets a surprise attack on Beerus but Majozo kills him with her Devilmite Beam.

Eventually Azazel arrives, and although Beerus is able to fend him off for a bit he is soon shown to have the upper hand. The demon soldiers have discovered Parappas' location by now and he has teleported away to safety so he can't help, meanwhile Beerus tries to distract Azazel so Majozo can hit him with the Devilmite Beam, but he easily senses it coming and dodges it. Then as he's about to kill her, Beerus blasts him and saves her, and he turns his attention back to him. They keep fighting and reach the canopy of the tree, and Beerus buys some more time by hiding in the tree, wagering that Azazel won't be willing to significantly damage it for fear of upsetting Kadab. Azazel eventually finds Beerus and it looks like he's about to finish him off, but as he fires the blast intended to kill him, the smoke clear and Beerus is unharmed. Azazel is shocked but then realizes what happened - Beerus is holding one of the fruits from the tree, with a bite taken out of it. He quickly devours the rest of the fruit, finally regaining his previous power - and then some! He effortlessly one-shots Azazel, and then destroys the Tree of Might, causing its energy to be returned to the planet Forn. Majozo celebrates his victory, and even Parappas reluctantly admits that he did a good job. However they feel that Beerus still doesn't have the power to take on Kadab, so they begin working on a plan to help him. Meanwhile Beerus flies off to challenge the Daimakaioshin again.

More to come if anyone is interested.

[Anime Kitten]

*snip*

Depends on how much detail you're going for. If you're doing a detailed description of each point, then yeah, I'd say no more than 5-6 pages if possible. You probably wouldn't want it to drag on too far. I'd personally do 4 chapters, though.

[Kanassa]

Just a quick excerpt from a later fight scene I plan on having, thought it would be good to get some second opinions on how I handle action scenes.

[spoiler]Pan left no time for hesitation before launching herself at the smirking saiyan, charging forward with her fist twisting through the air to slam down against the woman's face, the air around them feeling like icy daggers that graze her skin as they bolt past. Unfortunately the demi-saiyan's fast landed square into the open palm of her still smirking opponent. With a frustrated growl Pan drove her other fist forward, again she only connected with skin made of steel. No matter what force she threw, Torne stood her ground and blocked the upcoming assault, every hit only causing a rupture in the air around them. It was like a pillow hitting a stone wall, but instead of deterring the demi-saiyan, the set back only provided her with a taste of vengeance for her wounded pride.

"That's the spirit, Brat. Tap into that animal within" Pan only growled in reply to her opponent's encouragement. You killed all those innocent people, I don't care what you have to say! This time the young warrior brought her knee up to slam her leg into Torne's side, putting enough force behind the kick to send a small shock wave just ahead of it; In a stunning display of flexibility, Torne simply threw her upper body backwards to avoid the kick. The momentum behind her miss pulled Pun into the air for a brief moment, which she quickly utilised to immediately throw her weight around in a turn and launch one last powerful kick on her way down. Success brought a smile to Pan's features, the tip of her feet cracking across a pale face like a deadly whip, sending the full-blooded Saiyan into a small stumble; a noticeable scratch digging into her flesh. " You may be a half-breed, but the rage of the oozaru still burns deep within you"

Pan's small victory didn't last long as Torne quickly recover from her stumble, her smile never waning as her body pivoted on the ball of her left boot, her right leg raised high, dropping down to collide with Pan's still airborne body, her stomach to be exact. Instantly, the wind was knocked right out of her, Torne's heel leaving a clear imprint in her flesh before her body hit the ground, resulting in a small explosion of dust and rock upon impact. The kick threatening to shatter Pan's ribs and squeeze her stomach and lungs together in a painful wheeze. "Even while you're being mercilessly beaten within an inch of your life, I can still see that passion in your eyes. You're loving every moment of this" Again, she let out her sickeningly dark chuckle that only served to piss off Pan even further. "Have you had enough? Or is all your Saiyan heritage leaking away with the rest of your blood?"

The impact of the kick sent Pan through a good few layers of ground, broken remains of the rocky surface ripping her flesh apart in the process. Torne had only hit her once, and Pan was already seeing more blood and bruises, it was clear that she was overwhelmed in this situation. As Torne made her way back towards Pan's broken form, Pan could only spare a fleeting glare, she refused to run or give that monster the satisfaction of her cries. "I'm not done yet... I refuse to end this fight here, after what you've done" When Pan attempted to move she found her body groaning in response, the pain was overflowing to the point bursting. She needed a bit of a boost before she'd be able to get up. Only one move in and my body is already willing to give up, how stupid of me! Trunks would be ashamed of me after all that training. An idea flashed in her mind.

Slowly, she began to channle her ki into the palm of her hand, soon developing a small ball of energy emitted a warm aura. As Torne drew close, the pale Saiyan regarded the ball of ki with confusion. Did that brat really think that pitiful ball would harm her? As soon as the question welcomed itself into Torne's thoughts, Pan flipped her palm so that the ball now face the ground and without hesitation slammed it down, a small blast around Pan's body quickly following. The power from the blast easily launched her body forward at an alarming rate, sending Pan into a mid-air spin right in front of Torne's eyes. The surprise and suddenness of it all restricted Torne from raising her hands to defend herself, allowing Pan's spinning body to drive her foot into Torne's head, pushing the resilient Saiyan back a good few feet.

But Pan wasn't done yet, immediately after the girl managed to land shakily on her two feet, half of her clothes now torn to shreds. Torne was recovering from the hit as Pan began to steady herself, spreading her arms out wide before forming two more spheres of energy in either hands. In an instant Pan appeared mere inches in front of Torne before bringing her hands together in one all might clap. ''ENERGY CLAP!'' Her hands exploded with crimson light that burst outward in a diagonal outburst that completely engulfed Torne as well as a few metres of the ground behind her.

After firing the surprisingly effective attack she made up on the spot, Pan stumbled back a few aces like a drunk man, her shoulders sagging and her back bent, her breathing slowing to a deep pace. She didn't allow herself the delusion that her attack majorly damaged Torne, but it at least maybe gave Pan a horse in this race. True to form, Torne's figure could be seen emerging from the thin lay of smoke that painted the area, the black spandex of her Saiyan armour was now ripped completely clean off of her right arm; exposing more cracks and bruises in her flesh. As always, that smile stayed engraved between her cheeks. "Good, because I'm going to enjoy ripping that Saiyan spirit out of you, piece by piece.[/spoiler]

[SilverArmada]

Thinking about writing a somewhat short Freeza origin story (this one I promise I'll finish at some point! Especially since I'll try to do it all in one go instead of splitting it into different chapters). It'll be part of my DB reboot project that I'll post here once I get around to finishing the lore and the timeline. Anyway, here's what I'll be dealing with:

• Origin of the Super Saiyan legend
• Origin of Cold's empire, how it functions and does business
• Freeza's birth and his rivalry with Coola in his childhood
• Extinction of the Freeza race

How long do you reckon it should be? I'm thinking of a few pages at least, but I'm not sure.

This is definitely a really cool idea! Just remember, unless you doing more of a history lesson like ekrolo2 wrote, you need to have a fully realized plot. So there needs to be some central conflict to make the story interesting, and to provide a framework for you to move forward through the plot, to the climax and ultimately resolution. You could make it something like how Freeza is the younger brother and so Coola was always going to inherit everything, etc., so it's Freeza's struggle to overcome his brother and prove his worth to his father, which is accomplished when he does X which earns him his father's respect relative to Coola (X being whatever you come up with). It doesn't have to be a conflict that is only settled with Freeza killing Coola, I guess is what I'm trying to get at.

If you need help expanding the ideas, feel free to PM me. I like to help other fanfic authors with this kind of stuff.

[Doctor.]

Thinking about writing a somewhat short Freeza origin story (this one I promise I'll finish at some point! Especially since I'll try to do it all in one go instead of splitting it into different chapters). It'll be part of my DB reboot project that I'll post here once I get around to finishing the lore and the timeline. Anyway, here's what I'll be dealing with:

• Origin of the Super Saiyan legend
• Origin of Cold's empire, how it functions and does business
• Freeza's birth and his rivalry with Coola in his childhood
• Extinction of the Freeza race

How long do you reckon it should be? I'm thinking of a few pages at least, but I'm not sure.

This is definitely a really cool idea! Just remember, unless you doing more of a history lesson like ekrolo2 wrote, you need to have a fully realized plot. So there needs to be some central conflict to make the story interesting, and to provide a framework for you to move forward through the plot, to the climax and ultimately resolution. You could make it something like how Freeza is the younger brother and so Coola was always going to inherit everything, etc., so it's Freeza's struggle to overcome his brother and prove his worth to his father, which is accomplished when he does X which earns him his father's respect relative to Coola (X being whatever you come up with). It doesn't have to be a conflict that is only settled with Freeza killing Coola, I guess is what I'm trying to get at.

If you need help expanding the ideas, feel free to PM me. I like to help other fanfic authors with this kind of stuff.

The central conflict would be about Cold trying to find a way to get ahead of his rivals and competitors in other galaxies, which he would manage to do once Freeza is born with his extremely high power level. Freeza and Coola's rivalry would serve as motivation for for Coola as Freeza's abnormally large powerlevel inspired him to train and surpass his brother. And, well, a bunch of other ideas I'm thinking on how to execute.

I appreciate the help, but I usually work alone, plus I don't even know if I'm gonna finish it

[Kanassa]

Just a quick excerpt from a later fight scene I plan on having, thought it would be good to get some second opinions on how I handle action scenes.

[spoiler]Pan left no time for hesitation before launching herself at the smirking saiyan, charging forward with her fist twisting through the air to slam down against the woman's face, the air around them feeling like icy daggers that graze her skin as they bolt past. Unfortunately the demi-saiyan's fast landed square into the open palm of her still smirking opponent. With a frustrated growl Pan drove her other fist forward, again she only connected with skin made of steel. No matter what force she threw, Torne stood her ground and blocked the upcoming assault, every hit only causing a rupture in the air around them. It was like a pillow hitting a stone wall, but instead of deterring the demi-saiyan, the set back only provided her with a taste of vengeance for her wounded pride.

"That's the spirit, Brat. Tap into that animal within" Pan only growled in reply to her opponent's encouragement. You killed all those innocent people, I don't care what you have to say! This time the young warrior brought her knee up to slam her leg into Torne's side, putting enough force behind the kick to send a small shock wave just ahead of it; In a stunning display of flexibility, Torne simply threw her upper body backwards to avoid the kick. The momentum behind her miss pulled Pun into the air for a brief moment, which she quickly utilised to immediately throw her weight around in a turn and launch one last powerful kick on her way down. Success brought a smile to Pan's features, the tip of her feet cracking across a pale face like a deadly whip, sending the full-blooded Saiyan into a small stumble; a noticeable scratch digging into her flesh. " You may be a half-breed, but the rage of the oozaru still burns deep within you"

Pan's small victory didn't last long as Torne quickly recover from her stumble, her smile never waning as her body pivoted on the ball of her left boot, her right leg raised high, dropping down to collide with Pan's still airborne body, her stomach to be exact. Instantly, the wind was knocked right out of her, Torne's heel leaving a clear imprint in her flesh before her body hit the ground, resulting in a small explosion of dust and rock upon impact. The kick threatening to shatter Pan's ribs and squeeze her stomach and lungs together in a painful wheeze. "Even while you're being mercilessly beaten within an inch of your life, I can still see that passion in your eyes. You're loving every moment of this" Again, she let out her sickeningly dark chuckle that only served to piss off Pan even further. "Have you had enough? Or is all your Saiyan heritage leaking away with the rest of your blood?"

The impact of the kick sent Pan through a good few layers of ground, broken remains of the rocky surface ripping her flesh apart in the process. Torne had only hit her once, and Pan was already seeing more blood and bruises, it was clear that she was overwhelmed in this situation. As Torne made her way back towards Pan's broken form, Pan could only spare a fleeting glare, she refused to run or give that monster the satisfaction of her cries. "I'm not done yet... I refuse to end this fight here, after what you've done" When Pan attempted to move she found her body groaning in response, the pain was overflowing to the point bursting. She needed a bit of a boost before she'd be able to get up. Only one move in and my body is already willing to give up, how stupid of me! Trunks would be ashamed of me after all that training. An idea flashed in her mind.

Slowly, she began to channle her ki into the palm of her hand, soon developing a small ball of energy emitted a warm aura. As Torne drew close, the pale Saiyan regarded the ball of ki with confusion. Did that brat really think that pitiful ball would harm her? As soon as the question welcomed itself into Torne's thoughts, Pan flipped her palm so that the ball now face the ground and without hesitation slammed it down, a small blast around Pan's body quickly following. The power from the blast easily launched her body forward at an alarming rate, sending Pan into a mid-air spin right in front of Torne's eyes. The surprise and suddenness of it all restricted Torne from raising her hands to defend herself, allowing Pan's spinning body to drive her foot into Torne's head, pushing the resilient Saiyan back a good few feet.

But Pan wasn't done yet, immediately after the girl managed to land shakily on her two feet, half of her clothes now torn to shreds. Torne was recovering from the hit as Pan began to steady herself, spreading her arms out wide before forming two more spheres of energy in either hands. In an instant Pan appeared mere inches in front of Torne before bringing her hands together in one all might clap. ''ENERGY CLAP!'' Her hands exploded with crimson light that burst outward in a diagonal outburst that completely engulfed Torne as well as a few metres of the ground behind her.

After firing the surprisingly effective attack she made up on the spot, Pan stumbled back a few aces like a drunk man, her shoulders sagging and her back bent, her breathing slowing to a deep pace. She didn't allow herself the delusion that her attack majorly damaged Torne, but it at least maybe gave Pan a horse in this race. True to form, Torne's figure could be seen emerging from the thin lay of smoke that painted the area, the black spandex of her Saiyan armour was now ripped completely clean off of her right arm; exposing more cracks and bruises in her flesh. As always, that smile stayed engraved between her cheeks. "Good, because I'm going to enjoy ripping that Saiyan spirit out of you, piece by piece.[/spoiler]

Sorry to post basically the same post again, but; opinions?

[Polyphase Avatron]

Seems good to me.

Anyway, the next part I was planning was for Beerus to go looking for Kadab, but being unable to find him he decides to let him come to him, by powering up to attract his attention. Kadab teleports to his location and is surprised he's still alive. They start fighting again, and Beerus seems to have the upper hand at first. Kadab is surprised at how much stronger he's gotten, but he still isn't worried, even when Beerus breaks his swords.

Beerus starts to get overconfident now, and brags about how he ate the fruit and is going to use its power to defeat Kadab. The Daimakaioshin just laughs, and points out another nearby planet with another Tree of Might, and says that Beerus is a fool for thinking that eating just one fruit would give him enough power to win, because Kadab had been making them a regular part of his diet for months. He then powers up and quickly begins to overwhelm Beerus. At one point Beerus fires a ki blast at him, but he easily dodges it, and then mocks Beerus for his bad aim. Beerus reveals that he wasn't aiming at him, as the planet with the tree on it explodes behind him. Kadab doesn't care, however, as he has many more planets with trees and seeds.

Meanwhile, Parappas, at the urging of Majozo, is working on a way to help Beerus. He's created a concentrated liquid drink from the Tree of Might fruits, which should give the drinker as much power as eating 100 fruits. However, the battle between Beerus and Kadab is so intense and dangerous that they can't get close to give him the drink.

Beerus is pulling out all the stops and trying every trick he knows, but Kadab is still much stronger and it's all he can do merely to stay alive.

I'll post more later if anyone's interested.

[Rumanid]

Here's a simple question/request: Hit me with your favourite attack/technique that you've come up with yourself!
Not literally, though, please.

Compression Cannon:

Basically, a really compressed ki blast. While anyone who can launch a ki blast can at least do this decently, it is usually started by charging a Kamehameha in my story.

Below is using the Kamehameha to start:

- - -
First, you charge a standard Kamehameha. Then, right after you say the 'hame', you start compressing the entirety of your ki into either a singular point (like a laser) or a small circle in front of you.

As the ki is compressed, you place most of your energy and stamina into the attack, converting it into pure energy. While similar to a Kikoho, it does not drain your life energy. However, in exchange, it literally leaves you with no energy remaining if untrained, and if your gathering gets interrupted, you end up with an explosion in your face and a large ki depletion.

When fired, it somewhat resembles the OTL Special Beam Cannon, going at a ridiculously fast speed due to general physics + ki propelling the beam. It is, however, much more usable and versatile than the SBC, for two reasons: one, as the beam is merely being compressed, it can be 'unzipped' into a momentary surprise during a beam struggle; and two, there are multiple 'modes' of using the Compression Cannon. Though not all, some examples are the 'light' (redirecting but not compressing a ki blast), 'mega' (converting all usable ki, not just your own, around a certain area into energy), and 'super' (same as Mega, but 'unzipping' ki after gathering it).

- - -

I've got other ones, but this one has been in draft form for a few months now. Anyways, feel free to use it if you so desire! I'm more of a planner than an actual writer at DBZ fanfiction.

[Doctor.]

So I'm here to shill the first chapter of that Freeza fanfiction I talked about. It's probably going to be 4 or 5 chapters long and not as ambitious as I initially thought, but hopefully you'll all still be able to enjoy it.

[Alruneia]

Here's a simple question/request: Hit me with your favourite attack/technique that you've come up with yourself!
Not literally, though, please.

Compression Cannon:

[spoiler]Basically, a really compressed ki blast. While anyone who can launch a ki blast can at least do this decently, it is usually started by charging a Kamehameha in my story.

Below is using the Kamehameha to start:

- - -
First, you charge a standard Kamehameha. Then, right after you say the 'hame', you start compressing the entirety of your ki into either a singular point (like a laser) or a small circle in front of you.

As the ki is compressed, you place most of your energy and stamina into the attack, converting it into pure energy. While similar to a Kikoho, it does not drain your life energy. However, in exchange, it literally leaves you with no energy remaining if untrained, and if your gathering gets interrupted, you end up with an explosion in your face and a large ki depletion.

When fired, it somewhat resembles the OTL Special Beam Cannon, going at a ridiculously fast speed due to general physics + ki propelling the beam. It is, however, much more usable and versatile than the SBC, for two reasons: one, as the beam is merely being compressed, it can be 'unzipped' into a momentary surprise during a beam struggle; and two, there are multiple 'modes' of using the Compression Cannon. Though not all, some examples are the 'light' (redirecting but not compressing a ki blast), 'mega' (converting all usable ki, not just your own, around a certain area into energy), and 'super' (same as Mega, but 'unzipping' ki after gathering it).

- - -[/spoiler]

I've got other ones, but this one has been in draft form for a few months now. Anyways, feel free to use it if you so desire! I'm more of a planner than an actual writer at DBZ fanfiction.

Oh, are we bringing this back? I'm all for it.
I've been working on a classy one myself: The Grace Fouetté.
If you're familiar with ballet, you know what movement I mean. If not: A fouetté is essentially a pirouette (the spin with the legs in that p-position) with a kick added in. With practice you can kick every time you spin around, and when you apply Dragon Ball speed and energy usage to that, you get the Grace Fouetté. Superpowered rapid-fire kicks striking the exact same point in an elegant fashion.
...Yeah, it's just a dance move turned into an attack. It has a grandiose name because of the user's personality, that's all. Megami Shimi thinks very highly of herself.
If only she wasn't twenty chapters away...

[Freeza9000]

I'm honestly thinking about writing a story following the events of Future Trunks and Mai departing to this new timeline Whis created for them. On the top of my head, this will involve Trunks and Mai to interact with their duplicate selves and Future Bulma, Trunks training Trunks, Trunks and Mai having a child, etc. About how all of this is gonna be executed, I don't know as I'm currently thinking about it.