Super Saiyan Swagger wrote:I love these two close-ups of Goku and Krillin:
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What also made them great was that awesome orchestral rendition of the latest Super opening theme playing in the background.
I dont like that Pic of Goku, Looks like the image was drawn and then flipped, the balance is off. I noticed it myself when drawing and having to flip something.
Can somebody Flip it horizontally and see if it looks better? not near my Pc with Photoshop on it.
EDIT: i actually just noticed the real problem. I looked at it. It's consistently drawn, and shaded
The problem is the ear is too high up, the top of the ear draws an imaginary diagonal line between it and the bottom edge of the nose, and the shadow/curvature on the chin. it visually skews the image. the bottom of the ear (which on a normal face naturally lines with the bottom of the nose) is where the bottom of the eye is for some reason, and the top of the ear, is god knows where.
Drop the ear down, and we're golden
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Anyway I could write a Mother's Basement esque breakdown of the rooftop scene, was really good, though the rain is such a cheesy cliche that it makes me kinda sad it had to be relied on, and lo, and behold it only last as long as the fight despite the fact that the entire sky is dark, seriously how does weather work in these kinds of things.
most annoying part is there was a solid moment where (like in one Punch Man) the storm clouds wer eknocked away by a character's poersonal action. when 18 knocked Goku's blast up, gaining the 'upper-hand' the blast broke the clouds. couldntve been too much to simply have the clouds and rain break there could it? would have added to the symbolism.
The shots of Goku dodging krillin's blast were nice as well, overall really nice episode, and really glad production seems to be working itself out so well -even some of the janky art. But all this does is make me yearn for a YuYuHakusho style dark tournament of power. the battle royale kills it for me.