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Post by Kenshi » Fri Feb 15, 2008 2:04 am

Well, I'd posted my crap in the other thread earlier, but I see now that this is the right place, so let's rock.

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc14 ... rating.jpg

This one is the latest I've done with my crazy new habit of slapping on ridiculous muscles onto random DBZ characters, and Trunks is my first victim(well, after Vegeta and Goku, anyway)! I notice obvious faults and flubs I made here and there, namely the right(on the character's side) breastplate being oversized and the one next to it undersized, but anyway, if you've got other comments to add, they'd be appreciated.

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc14 ... 3ozaru.jpg
And then, the other one I did ages back, of what I think SS4 should really look like, with one of SS3 chibi Goku on there just for the lulz. I also did him in the one form that has been met with positive reception in the fan community(to my knowledge and reckoning from what I've seen) and yet practically never featured in their series for some inexplicable reason o_0. You can also see the "Ozaru" version of SS3 beside them(vaguely because I never went over it so it'd be visible), because that was what I thought SS4 should be a modification of, you know, the ultimate Super Saiyajin form combined with the classic Saiyajin transformation for maximum the the win-ness. For the record, his whole body is covered in golden fur, the way the "Golden Ozaru" was, but I was just too freaking lazy to convey it.

And then let's do another fantarded picture of a retarded fan character I made like 6 years back when I was ten I drew again about a week ago for the lulz.

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc14 ... racter.jpg

Yes, I do know it looks absolutely retarded, and the weapon's blatantly Riviera-influenced, but meh, it was a decent enough game that captivated my interest for the month or so I would spend trying to get things right with the whole Cierra ending an' whatnot when I was 13. Hating the PSP version, though. Voice acting's next to intolerable and full of freaking fail. >_>

Oh, and you may see that crappy writing all over the first one, but for some reason I felt like putting my name on it like a twelve year old does on his fucking science projects thinking the crappy mobile they did of a mitocondria cell will look like the best thing since sliced bread. Kensei's one of my alliases on other sites.
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Post by Snail » Fri Feb 15, 2008 2:09 am

Kenshi wrote: http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc14 ... racter.jpg

Yes, I do know it looks absolutely retarded, and the weapon's blatantly Riviera-influenced, but meh, it was a decent enough game that captivated my interest for the month or so I would spend trying to get things right with the whole Cierra ending an' whatnot when I was 13. Hating the PSP version, though. Voice acting's next to intolerable and full of freaking fail >_>
Either that's a 'Reiki Sword' or...

Heh, just kiddin with ya. Interesting work there. Keep it up!

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Post by Big Momma » Fri Feb 15, 2008 6:22 pm

Well, it's another week,and I've got new chapters out! I'm not sure what happned. If I forgot to post one last week or something, but I've got other places one chapter ahead of this one, so I've got 2 new chapters this week! Enjoy!
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Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12 - NEW
Chapter 13 - NEW


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I'm getting really behind on that special. I'm currently working on another weekly comic(I'd love to post it, but its really not realated to Dragonball in anyway...besides it being an action comic.) and its really taking up a lot of time.
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Post by El Diabeetus » Sat Feb 16, 2008 6:36 pm

2 new Characters:

SSJ3 Son Goku:
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x43/ ... -LateZ.png

SSJ Furanki:
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x43/ ... uranki.png
His SSJ Hair ended up looking like Broly's LSSJ Hair...

SSJ Pan:
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x43/ ... SSJPan.png
Just like Male SSJ Forms Pan's Clothes, Skin, Etc, get lighter.

Tommy [Original Character] (Named after my little brother, but is Pan's brother [Gohan & Videl's Son] in this:
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x43/ ... /Tommy.png

I will have Vegetto up soon!

SSJ3 Goku will appear in a Special Parody I'm doing it's going to completely make fun of when Goku goes SSJ for the First time.

Special No. 2 will have Vegetto vs. Kid Buu, what would happen if Goku and Vegeta's Bodies didn't separate.

I also have a Joke Fandub, which means I dubbed a real scene but the dialog is completely different:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N38Qys3nku4

I ended up using Faulconer's Music since I don't have any of Shunsuke Kikuchi's music...

There's more info about it on the "About this video section"


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Post by Metalwario64 » Sun Feb 17, 2008 7:48 pm

A couple of drawings I did today.

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I am still relatively new to drawing Female characters, but I think it turned out decent. I still need to learn how to keep proportions in a framed drawing.

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This is something I came up with rather quickly. I made the text to sound like engrish... I like the coloring though. :P

And here is something I came up with last week at school...

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...yah...

I also have a picture of Captain Falcon with Elvis at the Tenth Zone East... but I don't wanna get off-topic! :P
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Post by ultimateemail5000 » Sun Feb 17, 2008 11:14 pm

I made this Goku transformation about 2 years ago,

http://c6yr2002.deviantart.com/art/Supe ... u-29136330

The legs are kind of proportioned wrong but oh well.

As for non-DBZ related animations I wanted to show off a storyboard for my upcoming anime type cartoon called "Armored Hero 10x Horse Power!!!"

Due to the nature of this cartoon, I am supposed to warn everybody the bad guy's dialogue is pretty intense. So if you're the type that gets offended easily, I'm sorry.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=xvT1dteh5E4

If anybody is interested in doing some additional voice overs, be free to ask.

Also, I have another video, that is a shot by shot re-make of a Varient Nintendo one page comic strip of Mario Bros: Kitchen Kraziness

http://youtube.com/watch?v=LoFXzevT6nI

Once again, sorry if this is not DBZ related artwork animations,

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Post by Kenshi » Mon Feb 18, 2008 4:49 am

Metalwario64 wrote:A couple of drawings I did today.

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I am still relatively new to drawing Female characters, but I think it turned out decent. I still need to learn how to keep proportions in a framed drawing.

Image

This is something I came up with rather quickly. I made the text to sound like engrish... I like the coloring though. :P

And here is something I came up with last week at school...

Image

...yah...

I also have a picture of Captain Falcon with Elvis at the Tenth Zone East... but I don't wanna get off-topic! :P
Well, overall the drawings are fairly decent, though you might want to undersize the eyes and head, though ultimately that's really up to you. Give me some critiques on my work too.

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Post by Snail » Mon Feb 18, 2008 1:22 pm

Didn't we already do that on the other thread? :?

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Post by SonEric84 » Mon Feb 18, 2008 4:09 pm

Well, we tried to anyway...
Trans rights, now!

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Post by Rocketman » Mon Feb 18, 2008 4:30 pm

Metalwario64 wrote:A couple of drawings I did today.

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I really like your style, but do something about the irises, because they are creeping me out.

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Post by Metalwario64 » Mon Feb 18, 2008 6:54 pm

Rocketman wrote:
I really like your style, but do something about the irises, because they are creeping me out.
Yah, I know... I can't ever get them to look right! I am going for a slightly more realistic approach so it won't look like I am copying anyone else's style... But every time I come up with something that looks original it looks awful! Have any tips to how I can fix this?

And Kenshi, your art may have some potential, but you badly need to study some muscle anatomy to get everything to flow better. http://www.bakaneko.com/howto/figure/an ... index.html is a good place to start. I suggest you check it out if you want to improve. It helped me! :)
Also I recall you stating that you got lazy on some of your drawings. But you need to know that if you want to be an artist then you cannot afford to be lazy and rush some details, because it could ruin a whole piece of art.

Good luck!
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Post by Rocketman » Mon Feb 18, 2008 7:22 pm

Metalwario64 wrote:Have any tips to how I can fix this?
Make the pupils a bit larger and shrink the irises, because right now she's kinda got opiate-eyes. :wink:

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Post by Metalwario64 » Mon Feb 18, 2008 11:30 pm

Rocketman wrote:
Metalwario64 wrote:Have any tips to how I can fix this?
Make the pupils a bit larger and shrink the irises, because right now she's kinda got opiate-eyes. :wink:
Will do.
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Post by Snail » Thu Feb 21, 2008 2:22 am

A person by the username of 'Comicfan' made this really awesome 'americanized' interpretation of Dbz. Check it out.

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2112 ... resfd6.jpg

I found it while browsing the SSH forums.

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Post by NeptuneKai » Thu Feb 21, 2008 8:12 am

Snail wrote:A person by the username of 'Comicfan' made this really awesome 'americanized' interpretation of Dbz. Check it out.

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2112 ... resfd6.jpg

I found it while browsing the SSH forums.
That single comic made my life. Awesome shit right there.
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Post by Big Momma » Fri Feb 22, 2008 8:46 pm

Chapter 14 is out this week, just check below!

As for the special, its coming along well now, I may be done with Part 1(of 3) when Chapter 15 comes out!

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14


Written Chapters(Fanfic.net)
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Post by Shenron » Mon Feb 25, 2008 3:54 pm

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Post by Metalwario64 » Mon Feb 25, 2008 5:11 pm

Wow, nice. What program did you use for the line-art and the coloring? How did you get such smooth lines? Me like!
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Post by Shenron » Mon Feb 25, 2008 5:16 pm

Metalwario64 wrote:Wow, nice. What program did you use for the line-art and the coloring? How did you get such smooth lines? Me like!
Only Photoshop and my mouse :)

I used this tutorial to draw the lines :
http://begger4mcgregor.deviantart.com/a ... l-36601490
It's really easy when you get used to it. And it saves a lot of time !

Thanks !

Edit : oh, and to be fair, I used this picture to help me :
http://console-league.com/soulcalibur/g ... r2/186.jpg
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