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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Kanassa » Sat May 02, 2020 7:03 pm

Brikikoz wrote: Sat May 02, 2020 5:25 pm
Kanassa wrote: Sat May 02, 2020 5:09 pm
Or because it looked good, flowed well and it was small things in a fun fight? In Multiverse's case it's a fight against an annoying character who isn't fun to watch with repetitive action and rather than feeling like anything is progressing, it just feels like everything's softly resetting every time it looks like something's going to happen.
Fun is a very subjective quality and really can't be comparable between people.
And? That doesn't affect my point, especially considering your defence has just been 'No, no, no. This is the REAL reason you're complaining, not your actual complaint.'
When Super apparently shoves Goku down our throats:

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dbzfan94 » Sun May 03, 2020 12:23 pm

Brikikoz wrote: Sat May 02, 2020 12:20 pm
Fionordequester wrote: Thu Apr 30, 2020 9:12 pm
Dbzfan94 wrote: Thu Apr 30, 2020 5:32 pm Not nearly to the same degree, no.
I don't see much of a difference between the two. I mean, it's there, but, the difference is so slight...

Be honest: Are you sure the issue isn't just that an unlikable character is doing something awful to a likeable character?
That definitely is the issue, because there's plenty of blood to the same degree when Toriyama did it.

Coloring makes it clearer:

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I don't even like Bra as a character, but then I'm not supposed to, she's villainous; but guys tend to have issues with overpowered female villains. I wonder if this thread were in 1998, we'd be having the exact same "THAT IS A GARBAGE ASSPULL" when Cell kept on magically pulling powers out of nowhere to keep killing.

In the final Cell battle: Cell suddenly produces offspring? Cell suddenly goes Ultra SSJ? Cell turns into a time bomb? Cell regenerates from his nucleus? The nucleus that Goku destroyed already, way to write your Gary Stu, Toriyama. Cell regenerates to perfect form after blowing up? Cell can teleport too?

DBM is actually very consistent with Toriyama's-making-it-up-to-extend-the-tension style of villain writing.
I’d appreciate if you stop making baseless underhanded accusations against me. I already explained once before that wasn’t my issue, but people like you keep harping on it. Just stop.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Brikikoz » Sun May 03, 2020 2:03 pm

Today's page isn't done yet, had to be delayed to later.

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Post by FoolsGil » Sun May 03, 2020 3:08 pm

Took me a second to realize this was a minicomic page.

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Post by It_Is_Ayna_You_Flips » Sun May 03, 2020 7:13 pm

Pour one out for a real one.
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Post by Fionordequester » Wed May 06, 2020 2:01 pm

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Ha! No more beans! Bra's end is nigh!
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TobyS » Wed May 06, 2020 2:04 pm

Well unless Cell teleports mid blast he's done.

There's no reason he couldn't port right up to or even inside cell. This is contrived and dumb.

Although really he should have regenerated from that by now, he came back from a nucleus or legs it's weird....

So the torture porn continues at a snails pace. :crazy:

Longass break, pointless gag page.... tiresome.

Even if Buu kills Babidi right now we don't know if she'll keep fighting and if she keeps the power up.
And even if she's powered down she's probably still gonna win.
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Post by TobyS » Wed May 06, 2020 2:08 pm

Fionordequester wrote: Fri May 01, 2020 2:14 pm
And there we go. Bra the empty-handed sadist, went for Piccolo when she should've went for the bean. There was, indeed, a point to the violence last page.

Now will it make it to Cell? We'll see.
She was easily able to stop the cell jr that ported stupidly far away.
So if it was a tactical error she wasn't punished for her shortcomings as normal :problem:
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Post by Fionordequester » Wed May 06, 2020 2:14 pm

They drew special attention to the fact that his nucleus could survive a "wide attack", showed him prepping a Kikoho in the previous cover, and also had Bra destroying the last Senzu (which she could've pocketed).

It's too early to predict anything, yet.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by jjgp1112 » Wed May 06, 2020 2:28 pm

Fuck's sake.
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Post by Bebi Hatchiyack » Wed May 06, 2020 5:03 pm

I keep reading by force of habit but I am Frankly tired of their story. They drag it too long. :yawn:
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dbzfan94 » Wed May 06, 2020 8:41 pm

I know this isn’t really relevant to the page still stand by the idea that Bra let herself get controlled like Vegeta did. It’s not out of character either. I know Salagir won’t let his princess be killed and she’s gonna get redeemed like everything’s fine, but man I want this to end already. Just kill or absorb her and move on.

I really hope what Cell said about being able to survive a wide attack was for nothing. After him all that’s left is Buu, U18 Gohan and the Heliot girl (forgot her name)

But Cell doing a Tri Beam and a seemingly shirtless Piccolo being on the cover is interesting. Maybe they’re not dead after all

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Koitsukai » Wed May 06, 2020 9:50 pm

Where is Vegito? I forgot what happened to him, but I remember he was about to come back, is he still awaited or what?

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Post by FoolsGil » Wed May 06, 2020 10:07 pm

He better protected his nucleus this time too. Stupid Deus ex Machina, I'd be really annoyed if its a one and done.

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Post by Kamiccolo9 » Thu May 07, 2020 2:17 am

Dear God this is dull.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by FlpShimizu » Thu May 07, 2020 9:13 am

First it was just some specials having this "let's kill everyone in an edgy and gory manner" plot, now it's in the main story too.

Really bad.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TobyS » Fri May 08, 2020 8:03 am

If Buu can heal Cell and maybe Piccolo I'd go from mad to just bored. But even then I just want this battle to end now.

I wanna see what happens when Babidi dies, I wanna see what happens when everyone comes back and I wanna see what happens now seemingly the control tower is destroyed and the organisers are dead... Also wanna see U9 again.
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Post by jjgp1112 » Fri May 08, 2020 2:14 pm

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FUCK'S SAKE
Yamcha: Do you remember the spell to release him - do you know all the words?
Bulma: Of course! I'm not gonna pull a Frieza and screw it up!
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by ZeroNeonix » Fri May 08, 2020 3:06 pm

And I guess everyone else has just been standing there gawking the last 15 panels...? They're just going to stand there off screen and take it? I don't even follow this comic very closely, and even I feel like this has been going on forever and is incredibly dull.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TobyS » Fri May 08, 2020 3:38 pm

ZeroNeonix wrote: Fri May 08, 2020 3:06 pm And I guess everyone else has just been standing there gawking the last 15 panels...? They're just going to stand there off screen and take it? I don't even follow this comic very closely, and even I feel like this has been going on forever and is incredibly dull.
I feel like there's been a tonne of standing around and this is just the worst example.

Buu hasn't done literally anything at all has he?
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