Toriyama had three chapters finished by the time publication began and reportedly had no idea what he was going to do for Chapter #4 and onward, so I feel like the question of intention is kind of pointless.AliTheZombie13 wrote: Sun Nov 17, 2024 7:50 pm "OG DB was this slow, but it had more episodes."
It was originally supposed to end at Pilaf, so "originally," it had 13 episodes, and nothing super impactful happened either until the last three. And I'm fine with this, good storytelling works by slow rising action setting up things so they have a good payoff at the end, not constant mindless action.
That being said, a lot of these past three or so episodes have felt like taking a single 15-page chapter's worth of plot and stretching it out across a single 20 minute episode. That didn't really work with Dragon Ball (1986), I don't really see it suddenly working here. The first five episodes really would work better as three—maybe four, but without the Gokuu and friends scenes in the first episode.
Anyway, to get back on the subject of Episode #6 specifically: I wish the build up to Gokuu and Glorio sparring had been more emotionally charged. Let there be conflict and tension! Let Glorio be upset with Gokuu! If Gokuu can't change, do radical work with Glorio and Panzy!







