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Post by Shayden » Sun Jul 27, 2008 3:33 pm

Ok Everyone I've read the DBAF manga and I've finished translating the last bit of pages. We(everyone) should make a Show, Put it on youtube make it in DVD's and such then possible show it to Akira and Get him to check it over, We might be able to get it played after the Live action movie hype because everyone will be crazy for it, These are the episodes we shall make:

Xicor Saga
1. Kin to the Savior? The mysterious Xicor's arrival...
- After years of peace, a mysterious space ship lands in Capsule Corp.'s lawn. This new stranger claims he is Goku's son! After announcing himself, Xicor tells the story of how he came to be, and how his planet was destroyed.

2. Find those dragonballs! Xicor's search begins
- Being granted permission by Goku himself to use the dragonballs to restore his planet back to life, Xicor's search begins! With the help of Bulma's Dragon Radar, it isn't long before six of the dragonballs are in his posession.

3. The broadcast to Earth... Xicor's true intentions!
- Catching on to Xicor's true motive, Piccolo quickly sends a broadcast to Goku and the other Z warriors, warning them of Xicor's trickery, but just as Piccolo's broadcast concludes, Xicor himself interrupts and announces that all seven of the dragonballs are now in his grasp!

4. It's too late! Yamcha, Tienshinhan, meet Hitsorashi and Motchani!
- Tien and Yamcha, being the first to arrive at the site, are the first to fall. Xicor's wish was used to revive two underworld Gods! They make quick work of the hapless Earth warriors. But little to they know, Earth has its Gods, as well...

5. A call to action! The Union of Prince and Pauper...
- Moments after Tien and Yamcha meet their end, Goku and Vegeta simultaniously arrive at the area, via Instant Transmission. After a very quick round with the two, even in their Super Saiyan 4 stage, Goku and Vegeta are quickly losing the battle with Hitsorashi and Motchani. In the tranquil moments, Vegeta curses, and whispers his unwilling decision to Goku, which is simply responded to with a smile, and a nod.

6. I will avenge those fallen! Gogeta's Declaration
- Taking Vegeta's cue, Goku and Vegeta immediately fall into the fusion formation, and before Hitsorashi and Motchani knew what to do, Gogeta was born! After demonstrating his amazing power, Gogeta makes a bold declaration that he will honor Tien and Yamcha's death, by bringing death to Hitsorashi and Motchani!

7. Son of Goku, vs. the Son of Vegeta! Xicor and Trunks lock horns...
- Being the fifth to arrive on the battlefield, Trunks calls Xicor out to a one-on-one battle. Xicor is happy to accept the challenge, but it quickly becomes evident who will be the victor in this fight.

8. The Fusion of Evil! Gogeta's Trial of Pain
- After a harsh beating by Gogeta, Hitsorashi and Motchani don't seem to be worried, despite their low chances of winning. After questioning the meaning of their calmness, Hitsorashi reveals to Gogeta that he and Motchani have the ability to mimic their opponents' techniques! Following the same procedure Vegeta and Goku went through, Hitsorashi and Motchani perform the fusion dance before Gogeta has a chance to stop them! Hitsochani is born. It isn't long before the tables have been turned, and Gogeta is on the recieving end of the brutality!

9. A Death on the Battlefield! Trunks Falls...
- After a brutal clash with Xicor, Trunks shows signs of giving out, while Xicor remains unphased, even by the most brutal of Trunks' attacks. Making Trunks' end quick, Xicor overwhelms the sound half-Saiyan with one of his own attacks: Burning Attack! Gogeta senses his son's plight, but is unable to intervine, as he is in his own struggle with Hitsochani.

10. The Seperation of Mind and Body... Gogeta fails
- In desperation, Gogeta launches his final attack: The mighty Big Bang Kamehameha! After the smoke clears, Hitsochani remains intact, while Gogeta, drained of most of his power, unwillingly splits in two. Vegeta curses Goku for not finishing them while they were vulnerable, but Goku doesn't respond; instead, he lowers his head, trying to hatch a plan.

11. Do that again... Xicor's Unheralded Decision!
- Arriving on the battlefield, it seems as though Goku and Vegeta will be killed in earnest, but, to their surprise, Xicor wanted to challenge Gogeta himself, and allowed them to recover their power! After a visit to Korin's tower, Goku returned and distributed Senzu beans to everybody - even Xicor and Hitsochani. Vegeta questions Goku's meaning, but Goku simply smirks, and says he's not worried in the least bit, that he came up with a plan.

12. The Saiyans in Hiding! Gogeta's Tact
- After an hour of waiting, it was once again time to fuse. Hitsorashi and Motchani had refused themselves a short time before Goku and Vegeta did the same. Immediately after the fusion, Gogeta pulled a surprise move - Solar Flare! Taking this oppertunity, Gogeta zapped out of the area, using Instant Transmission. Appearing on the top of a distant mountain, halfway across the planet, Gogeta took a familiar stance...

13. Coming to Fruition! Gogeta's Pleas are Fulfilled
- Slowly, but surely, Gogeta's plan is coming to pass! As Xicor and Hitsochani struggle with their temporary blindness, Gogeta works fast as creating a gigantic Spirit Bomb! Just as Xicor arrives on the battlefield, Gogeta smiles, and announces that his attack is completed.

14. Xicor! Meet Chou Genki-Dama!!
- Before Xicor had much of a chance to react, Gogeta heaved the spiritual behemoth directly toward him! Catching the Spirit Bomb, Xicor struggles with all of his might! But at last, Xicor's power fails, and the Spirit Bomb swallows himself whole - along with a large portion of the planet!

15. The Final Phase! Hitsorashi and Motchani Divided...
- Just as the enraged Hitsochani arrives, he launches his attack on Gogeta! Throughout his beating, Gogeta doesn't seem the least bit worried. Later in the bout, Gogeta raises his finger and scolds Hitsochani. Just as Gogeta finished informing Hitsochani that it isn't wise to fuse so long before a battle, their fusion breaks!

16. Picking up the Pieces... The Evil Duo Falls!!
- Gogeta, pleased with his plan's turnout, launches a rage-fueled assault on the terrible twosome! After ending their lives with a savage Double Dragon Fist, Gogeta's fusion breaks as well! The battle has been won! But not without its losses...

17. Gohan's Split-Second Intervention... Trunks Lives On!
- Having no time to even mourn for his son's death, Vegeta is shocked to see Trunks arrive on the scene, with Gohan at his side! Trunks tells the short story of Gohan pulling him from the path of the attack that was supposed to end his life.

18. Peaceful days ahead! Goku's sudden disappearence...
- Everything is once again at peace! After summoning the Eternal Dragon, both wishes are used to revive Tien and Yamcha from death. Bulma holds a celabratory picnic on the Capsule Corp. grounds, but oddly enough, Goku is nowhere to be found! Where has the care-free Saiyan disappeared to?


Once we are done those we would work on more. I Have the voices and Voice actors in mind, Ill take care of that if you guys can get the animations.
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Post by NeptuneKai » Sun Jul 27, 2008 3:39 pm

A. Mr.Toriyama isn't your friend, you do not know him personally, please show a little respect and at least call him by his last name.

B. How do you plan to show Toriyama your show? Are you even aware of
his contact information? What makes you think he'll give a shit?

C. If you sell those "DVDs" enjoy your lawsuit.

D. What do you mean we can "Get the animations" you want us all to animate the show for you? Any of us....randomly....sure let me get out my good ol' M.S paint. Are you even aware of how animating a show works? What about the script, do you want us to write that too?
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Post by Raki » Sun Jul 27, 2008 3:41 pm

Doesn't somebody else translate the DBAF manga? Anyway, we are getting a TV Special this year. If it's successful, we could get one every year Lupin style. But none of this AF nonsense.
The series doesn't start with the arrival of Raditz. Stop being lazy and watch Dragonball.

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Post by Shayden » Sun Jul 27, 2008 3:54 pm

I wrote the script. I want help Making the animation. And yes as a younger child i made a cartoon for a school project. Someone else did but there was a few more pages they didnt translate.
Hes not my friend but i dont need to go calling people by there last names. You knew who i ment. I do know how anymating works. And MS paint wont help. We cant sell dvd's Until we Publish them some how. Lots of people want DBAF its searched 15 thousand times minimum a day.
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Post by Kid Trunks » Sun Jul 27, 2008 5:04 pm

NeptuneKai wrote:A. Mr.Toriyama isn't your friend, you do not know him personally, please show a little respect and at least call him by his last name.
Why does everyone get so irritated by that?

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Post by Cartman Blues » Sun Jul 27, 2008 5:38 pm

Shayden wrote:I wrote the script. I want help Making the animation. And yes as a younger child i made a cartoon for a school project. Someone else did but there was a few more pages they didnt translate.
Hes not my friend but i dont need to go calling people by there last names. You knew who i ment. I do know how anymating works. And MS paint wont help. We cant sell dvd's Until we Publish them some how. Lots of people want DBAF its searched 15 thousand times minimum a day.
Oh no he di'nt! (Yes it's spelled like that on purpose. :lol: ) You chose the wrong forum to talk about Dragon Ball AF. No offense. And you can't just publish a DVD all willy nilly(What the eff? :P ). There's copyrights and stuff.
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Nothing is ever mentioned that being part human would impede the transformation to SSj4. Vegeta's body was literally invaded by an alien being

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Post by Shayden » Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:11 pm

Cartman Blues wrote:
Shayden wrote:I wrote the script. I want help Making the animation. And yes as a younger child i made a cartoon for a school project. Someone else did but there was a few more pages they didnt translate.
Hes not my friend but i dont need to go calling people by there last names. You knew who i ment. I do know how anymating works. And MS paint wont help. We cant sell dvd's Until we Publish them some how. Lots of people want DBAF its searched 15 thousand times minimum a day.
Oh no he di'nt! (Yes it's spelled like that on purpose. :lol: ) You chose the wrong forum to talk about Dragon Ball AF. No offense. And you can't just publish a DVD all willy nilly(What the eff? :P ). There's copyrights and stuff.
I know. And no i didnt its an idea i had about wishing DB was still on.
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Post by Raki » Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:14 pm

Shayden wrote:
Cartman Blues wrote:
Shayden wrote:I wrote the script. I want help Making the animation. And yes as a younger child i made a cartoon for a school project. Someone else did but there was a few more pages they didnt translate.
Hes not my friend but i dont need to go calling people by there last names. You knew who i ment. I do know how anymating works. And MS paint wont help. We cant sell dvd's Until we Publish them some how. Lots of people want DBAF its searched 15 thousand times minimum a day.
Oh no he di'nt! (Yes it's spelled like that on purpose. :lol: ) You chose the wrong forum to talk about Dragon Ball AF. No offense. And you can't just publish a DVD all willy nilly(What the eff? :P ). There's copyrights and stuff.
I know. And no i didnt its an idea i had about wishing DB was still on.
There aren't enough Dragonball media out there already?
The series doesn't start with the arrival of Raditz. Stop being lazy and watch Dragonball.

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Post by Shayden » Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:15 pm

Raki wrote:
Shayden wrote:
Cartman Blues wrote: Oh no he di'nt! (Yes it's spelled like that on purpose. :lol: ) You chose the wrong forum to talk about Dragon Ball AF. No offense. And you can't just publish a DVD all willy nilly(What the eff? :P ). There's copyrights and stuff.
I know. And no i didnt its an idea i had about wishing DB was still on.
There aren't enough Dragonball media out there already?
Not on TV.
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Post by NeptuneKai » Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:20 pm

Edit:

Actually nevermind, good luck with your "project" there.
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Post by Zuhalter2000 » Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:22 pm

I love your enthusiam for a DB revival but I wouldnt work. Its too large scaled and complicated to be produced by a few people on this site.
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Post by Shayden » Sun Jul 27, 2008 7:50 pm

Zuhalter2000 wrote:I love your enthusiam for a DB revival but I wouldnt work. Its too large scaled and complicated to be produced by a few people on this site.
As long as i have people willing to help me we can communicate, And ill pull a few All Nighters, I have the scribts, Detailed descriptions of each episodes, Pictures of charecters, Whats going to happen i just need a good artist and animator or a few.
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Post by SSj_Rambo » Sun Jul 27, 2008 8:21 pm

Shayden wrote:As long as i have people willing to help me we can communicate, And ill pull a few All Nighters, I have the scribts, Detailed descriptions of each episodes, Pictures of charecters, Whats going to happen i just need a good artist and animator or a few.
Probably the easiest thing you'll find here are voice actors. As far as animators go, it took an entire professional team to make the Dragonball anime, as well as tons and tons of expensive materials and equipment. Even though we do have some amazing Photoshoppers and video editors the majority of the members here specialize only in MS Paint.

As a person if is fairly uneducated in the current animation process, are you planning to do all of the drawing, sketches and motion sequences by hand (like with cels, like how the original show was made) or are you planing on doing this all digitally? Because if you are planning on doing it with individual cels it will be very expensive and all of your animators will have to be constantly shipping their work to wherever the proper equipment is. If you are planning to do it all on the computer than it will probably look nothing like the original anime and you will need some professional experts that will demand pay to do the work if you expect to make something that looks like a real cartoon/anime.

Yes getting your works into the media would be hard, but it would be great for publicity and I wish you the best of luck on that idea. Howe er, if you were to make any money off of your Dragonball work what-so-ever you would be instantly sued for copyright infringement.

In the end I give you my support and wish you luck (no offense but I think you'll need it) and I guess I could help out with some things, even though I have absolutely no experience in any of the required fields.

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Post by Shayden » Sun Jul 27, 2008 8:26 pm

Well, I have experience in a school project. I had to make a movie called Spongebob the lost treasure, But it was more like a cross between spongebob-DragonballZ- And boondocks. It took 3 months for 1 hour but it was just me.. Heres what i think. If we can make all the backrounds first. Thats accomplishment. Then Finish the voices. Then Charecter Designs and different postures, Then animations of them, Flying, Jumping, Running, Attacking and such. No matter how crappy the first 18 episodes are we will have fans willing to help then we can remake them until there great then show Akira Toriyama.
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Post by Shayden » Sun Jul 27, 2008 8:39 pm

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Post by SSj_Rambo » Sun Jul 27, 2008 8:43 pm

Shayden wrote:Well, I have experience in a school project. I had to make a movie called Spongebob the lost treasure, But it was more like a cross between spongebob-DragonballZ- And boondocks. It took 3 months for 1 hour but it was just me.. Heres what i think. If we can make all the backrounds first. Thats accomplishment. Then Finish the voices. Then Charecter Designs and different postures, Then animations of them, Flying, Jumping, Running, Attacking and such. No matter how crappy the first 18 episodes are we will have fans willing to help then we can remake them until there great then show Akira Toriyama.
First off, can we see this "school project" just so that we can understand what you are capable of and what you expect?

Once again I ask, how are you planing on making these "backrounds, Charecter Designs, animations", I assume that you plan to do it all on the computer (as apposed to hand drawing everything then scanning it and animating it from there), so what program to you plan to use?

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Post by Shayden » Sun Jul 27, 2008 8:51 pm

SSj_Rambo wrote:
Shayden wrote:Well, I have experience in a school project. I had to make a movie called Spongebob the lost treasure, But it was more like a cross between spongebob-DragonballZ- And boondocks. It took 3 months for 1 hour but it was just me.. Heres what i think. If we can make all the backrounds first. Thats accomplishment. Then Finish the voices. Then Charecter Designs and different postures, Then animations of them, Flying, Jumping, Running, Attacking and such. No matter how crappy the first 18 episodes are we will have fans willing to help then we can remake them until there great then show Akira Toriyama.
First off, can we see this "school project" just so that we can understand what you are capable of and what you expect?

Once again I ask, how are you planing on making these "backrounds, Charecter Designs, animations", I assume that you plan to do it all on the computer (as apposed to hand drawing everything then scanning it and animating it from there), so what program to you plan to use?
Well as for me, I could draw it, For i suck with Computer animation. I could give it a whirl though, I'm hoping others can draw and ill collect it get the voices, and such. I dont have it anymore. But it wasnt that good. I should have re done it, And it wouldve worked better. Here is the Script for the first episode:

Episode 1: Xicor's Arrival
Narrator: It's been 125 years since the end of Dragon Ball GT. All the mighty warriors of Earth were extinct, or so it was thought. Two young warriors, Goten and Trunks, who used the new dragon balls, created by Dende, for forever youth, still watched over the planet.
Up on the look-out tower, Dende, Goten, and chibi Trunks are training.
Goten: Dende Being immortal is great and all, but I miss everyone!
Chibi Trunks: Yeah....
Dende: Well, we could revive them with the dragon balls!
Chibi Trunks reaches into his pocket and pulls out the dragon radar.
Chibi Trunks: Goten, lets fly!
The two fly off. Once they are out of sight, Dende bigins to sence something.
Dende: AHHH!!!...Wha...What power!
A streak of light flies across the sky. The fire englofed space ship lands on the planet below the look-out tower. Then, chibi Trunks and Goten come up the side of the look-out carrying a large orange ball.
Goten: We couldn't find the dragon balls! The radar was only able to locate this big one.
Dende: The Alfa ball! It's all the dragon balls combined! We better get busy before that thing gets out of the ship!
Goten & Chibi Trunks: Right!
Dende places the Alfa ball on to the floor of the look-out.
Dende: Shenron! I call upon thee!
The Alfa ball begins to glow as Shenron emerges from the ball.
Shenron: What is your wish?
Dende: I wish that all the Z wariors and their families be brought back to life at the age they were 126 years ago!
Shenron's eyes begin to glow red.
Shenron: Your wish has been granted!
Shenron returns into the ball, which then flies into the air and seperated into 7 balls. The balls head off into different directions of the earth once again. Suddenly the Z warriors appear.
Chibi Trunks: Hey everyone!
Goten: Where's my dad!?
Everyone looks beside them.
ChiChi: I wasn't able to find him anywhere in other world!
Dende: That's odd....
Then suddenly, everyone sences a huge power level, and looks up. A kid with long silver hair, silver fur covering his body, and ancient, mysterious looking clothes, is floating there. His siver tail waves around as he floats down to the look-out floor. A beautiful woman fallows close behind the stranger.
Vegeta:(thinking) Another Saiyan?
Krillan: RRR! i'm probably going to die, so i might as well try!
Krillan charges at the kid. The kid easily knocks Krillan to the ground.
Tien: Krillan, are you okay?
Krillan doesn't reply. He just gets up and rubs his sore head.
Xicor: I'm not here to waste my time fighting you weaklings! I have come to seek training from my father! which one of you is my father?
Bulma: It would help if we knew his name you know!
Xicor: Fine, if you must know. His name is Goku.
Everyone: What!?
Narrator: Could it be true? Could his father really be Goku? And why didn't Goku apear with the others? So many questions to be answered on the next episode of Dragon Ball AF!!
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Post by Shayden » Sun Jul 27, 2008 8:58 pm

So what you see is we need, Kami's Lookout angle pictures, Sky backround, A Space Ship, Adult Dende, An alpha ball, Chibi adult trunks, Adult Goten, Xicor, Shenron, Goten, Chi Chi, Vegeta, Krillin, Tien, Bulma, Yamcha. Draw each one of them in A few different postures. And then Animation of them running, Talking, Blinking, Walking, Flying, And Charging.
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Post by SSj_Rambo » Sun Jul 27, 2008 9:03 pm

Shayden wrote:So what you see is we need, Kami's Lookout angle pictures, Sky backround, A Space Ship, Adult Dende, An alpha ball, Chibi adult trunks, Adult Goten, Xicor, Shenron, Goten, Chi Chi, Vegeta, Krillin, Tenshinhan, Bulma, Yamcha. Draw each one of them in A few different postures. And then Animation of them running, Talking, Blinking, Walking, Flying, And Charging.
It sounds like you are planning on making a show where when the characters talk they stand completely still and nothing moves but their mouths.

And are you trying to say that you expect to get people to draw out this entire thing by hand? Because that's going to be tough.

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Post by Shayden » Sun Jul 27, 2008 9:07 pm

No this is just the intro episode, Soon it gets to be fighting. I just realized people can draw it anyway as long as its good quality.
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