Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Eison · Post by **Eison** » Sun Dec 07, 2008 4:54 pm

Yeah, twenty-times is maybe a little to much, I don't even know if a human can stands so much energy. King Kai said that two-times allready was much and dangerous.

New page! http://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/page-69.html
Fantastic page! I wonder what Babidi will do in return.

NeptuneKai · Post by **NeptuneKai** » Sun Dec 07, 2008 4:56 pm

Something tells me Uub is going to turn into a Majin warrior. I wonder why he didn't just take Pan's advice and go seek out a Namek healer.

Maphisto86 · Post by **Maphisto86** » Sun Dec 07, 2008 5:06 pm

Yeah, I figured Dende or another Namek with similar powers would be present and happy to lend a hand

...

. Anyway, this could turn out bad if Goku and company don't warn Uub not to deal with the devil . . . or a pint sized brown goblin.

Saiyan-Professor · Post by **Saiyan-Professor** » Sun Dec 07, 2008 5:17 pm

Since that big Namekian came from the fusion of all the Namekians would he not have the power to heal or was he just all the Warrior Namekians fused together?

I believe that this may be the catalyst that brings everyone together to fight the villain that Salagir somewhat hinted at, most likely a completely new form of Majin warrior will be born. Perhaps he will look like this:

I actually devised something similar in my story. I cannot wait to see how Salagir will pull it off if that is what is going to happen.

Rocketman · Post by **Rocketman** » Sun Dec 07, 2008 6:43 pm

Vegeta's line should probably be more like "You weren't paying attention.".

Bussani · Post by **Bussani** » Sun Dec 07, 2008 6:53 pm

I wonder if Uub can be taken over in the conventional way. He seems more pure hearted than that, like Goku, although I doubt Goku would have KILLED his opponent in a fit of rage even if they could be wished back.

It's probably something different anyway, like the Professor was saying. Maybe he'll offer him the power to regenerate and make him more like Buu?

Saiyan-Professor · Post by **Saiyan-Professor** » Sun Dec 07, 2008 9:10 pm

Bussani wrote:I wonder if Uub can be taken over in the conventional way. He seems more pure hearted than that, like Goku, although I doubt Goku would have KILLED his opponent in a fit of rage even if they could be wished back.

It's probably something different anyway, like the Professor was saying. Maybe he'll offer him the power to regenerate and make him more like Buu?

They may go the route of that are some sort of diminutive traces of the old Buu in him and all Uub has to do is allow Babidi to have access to Uub’s mind/body so Babidi can trigger whatever it takes to cause the necessary reaction.

Scarz · Post by **Scarz** » Sun Dec 07, 2008 11:54 pm

Even though Pan suggested that Uub should see a Namek to heal him (even I thought about that) I don't think they could just heal his arm back in place or Piccolo would said something, or at least I hoped he would.

There's one tiny little thing about page 69 I think would've been a tad better. The last two panels should have been switched, but not the dialog. Panel #5 - "I can fix your arm," then Panel #4 - being the last "But wont be for free." Not that the original placement doesn't work (in fact it works just fine), but visually speaking the close up on Babidi face is better used as the last panel, giving the reader a more intense feeling to his devious plan.

SSJ2bardock · Post by **SSJ2bardock** » Mon Dec 08, 2008 12:12 am

Rocketman wrote:Vegeta's line should probably be more like "You weren't paying attention.".

Or "You suck..... because you suck.

Rocketman · Post by **Rocketman** » Mon Dec 08, 2008 12:23 am

SSJ2bardock wrote:
Rocketman wrote:Vegeta's line should probably be more like "You weren't paying attention.".
Or "You suck..... because you suck.

"Is Vegeta gonna have to smack a bitch?!" then pimp-slap Uub with his own hand.

SSJ2bardock · Post by **SSJ2bardock** » Mon Dec 08, 2008 1:16 am

Rocketman wrote:
SSJ2bardock wrote:
Rocketman wrote:Vegeta's line should probably be more like "You weren't paying attention.".
Or "You suck..... because you suck."
"Is Vegeta gonna have to smack a bitch?!" then pimp-slap Uub with his own hand.

Or "Excuse me, has anyone seen my arm? It's brown, you can't miss it!"

Oh god it's too much!

RandomDbzEnthusiast · Post by **RandomDbzEnthusiast** » Tue Dec 09, 2008 3:33 pm

SSJ2bardock wrote:
Rocketman wrote:
SSJ2bardock wrote: Or "You suck..... because you suck."
"Is Vegeta gonna have to smack a bitch?!" then pimp-slap Uub with his own hand.
Or "Excuse me, has anyone seen my arm? It's brown, you can't miss it!"

Oh god it's too much!

Damn it!
You people and that old gag LOL

Suupaa Gohan 2 · Post by **Suupaa Gohan 2** » Tue Dec 09, 2008 4:17 pm

For some reason when I try to post this on the official site I get a message telling me I look like a spammer and denying my comment. Um...okay. -_-

I'll post it here instead.

Amazingly, I went into this thinking it was going to be absurd, based on the premise, but you actually handle it really well. Things that could be littered with plotholes in a simple A/U fic work here solely because of the mulitiverse idea. Very clever, and the art is fantastic!!

However, the only real problems I have with this comic are both right here at the end:

A) Uubu, being trained by Gokou and the 'good' reincarnation of Buu, would not be so quick to vaporize his opponent. Gokou only killed when he had to, and no doubt Uubu would have done the same, and simply knocked his opponent out. I have a problem with him so quickly killing his foe.

B) Senzu can't heal all wounds. They wouldn't regrow a severed arm, so it's strange that Uubu asks for one (though maybe he doesn't know a senzu's powers don't go that far, though someone should speak up about it or it seems odd). Dende's healing powers most likely could, as it filled in the hole Kuririn got when Freeza gored him as well as the hole Kuririn blasted through Vegeta. The only other thing in the DB canon that really ever restored severed (non-Namekseijin) limbs was being killed and then revived with the Dragonballs, as though death canceled out all bodily anomalies and rebuilt the body good as new.

But really, those are the only faults I found with this...and I tend to be very critical of such fantastic ideas as this comic is based on. But you manage to make it work, so I'm very impressed!! Keep up the good work, guys!!

--SG2

Wojak · Post by **Wojak** » Tue Dec 09, 2008 4:49 pm

SG2: What about the senzu that healed the hole in Yamcha's chest, or the hole in Goku's shoulder?

Xyex · Post by **Xyex** » Tue Dec 09, 2008 4:53 pm

Senzu can't heal all wounds. They wouldn't regrow a severed arm, so it's strange that Uubu asks for one (though maybe he doesn't know a senzu's powers don't go that far, though someone should speak up about it or it seems odd). Dende's healing powers most likely could, as it filled in the hole Kuririn got when Freeza gored him as well as the hole Kuririn blasted through Vegeta.

The Senzu that Yamcha ate at the start of the Android saga healed up the hole that Gero had punched through his chest. Though I do agree that a Senzu shouldn't be able to regrow missing limbs. Sealing a hole is like sealing a big cut and repairing broken bones, but a limb is something else. Considering that Uub brought his arm over with him, though, I don't think regrowing the limb was what he had in mind. Probably planned to hold the two ends together so that the healing power of the Senzu would reattach it.

kei17 · Post by **kei17** » Tue Dec 09, 2008 4:57 pm

Suupaa Gohan 2 wrote:B) Senzu can't heal all wounds. They wouldn't regrow a severed arm, so it's strange that Uubu asks for one (though maybe he doesn't know a senzu's powers don't go that far, though someone should speak up about it or it seems odd). Dende's healing powers most likely could, as it filled in the hole Kuririn got when Freeza gored him as well as the hole Kuririn blasted through Vegeta. The only other thing in the DB canon that really ever restored severed (non-Namekseijin) limbs was being killed and then revived with the Dragonballs, as though death canceled out all bodily anomalies and rebuilt the body good as new.

Mirai Gohan said like this when he's telling about his arm to Mirai Trunks.
"if there had still been senzu in that time..".
In addition, senzu healed and filled in the hole Goku'd got when he fought Majunior in the 23rd Tenkaichi Budokai

Bussani · Post by **Bussani** » Tue Dec 09, 2008 7:46 pm

I think senzu can regrow limbs so long as you take them within a certain amount of time, or am I remembering incorrectly?

Suupaa Gohan 2 · Post by **Suupaa Gohan 2** » Wed Dec 10, 2008 10:51 am

Xyex wrote:Considering that Uub brought his arm over with him, though, I don't think regrowing the limb was what he had in mind. Probably planned to hold the two ends together so that the healing power of the Senzu would reattach it.

True; I hadn't considered that.

Still, I stand by my feelings on Uubu so quickly killing the guy, and then just kinda calmly running to the group and saying 'hei guise my arm came off halp plzkthx?' as though he didn't just kill the guy. He's Gokou's pupil, and I find it hard to believe he wouldn't have some reservations to killing the enemy. Gokou wouldn't care if someone sliced off both his arms and a leg; he'd still try to find it in himself to show mercy. It just seems odd to me Uubu wouldn't, and then immediately after killing act as though it was just your average run-of-the-mill sparring match.

Eison · Post by **Eison** » Wed Dec 10, 2008 3:12 pm

Actually it makes some sense that Uub killed him quickly because he is human and every human has his limit. Also Goku did train Uub but Uub never had a live or die fight before, or maybe Uub just didn't want the fight to take longer because he lost an arm and was bleeding pretty bad...

New Page!
http://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/page-70.html
Again an unexpected twist.

RandomDbzEnthusiast · Post by **RandomDbzEnthusiast** » Wed Dec 10, 2008 3:33 pm

Eison wrote:Actually it makes some sense that Uub killed him quickly because he is human and every human has his limit. Also Goku did train Uub but Uub never had a live or die fight before, or maybe Uub just didn't want the fight to take longer because he lost an arm and was bleeding pretty bad...

New Page!
http://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/page-70.html
Again an unexpected twist.

Loved that twist.
And that Buu looks really cool.....for a Buu!!