Gohan, The Hopeless Chronicles

Forgotten Hero · Post by **Forgotten Hero** » Sat Feb 07, 2009 5:11 pm

Hey guys, I'm not well known for being a fanfic guy, but I put up my first one today.
It's called "Gohan, The Hopeless Chronicles." The story discuss perhaps a very shadowed history of Trunks' destroyed time a~la jinzonigan 17 and 18.
The time line goes from Goku's arrival on Earth after battle on planet Namek to the events of "Dragon Ball Z: Resistance to Despair!! The Remaining Super-Warriors, Gohan and Trunks." So that covers about thirteen years of material in the Dragon World.
This story will have some off-shut stories too. These stories will still have Gohan in them but may focus on another character rather than Gohan.

I'd also like to also thank Rocketman from the forums. He gave me many ideas for this story, and I can't thank him enough.
I hope y'all enjoy, and please due give some feed back!
~ Forgotten Hero

edit: oops, I kinda dropped the ball. I forgot to link to the fanfic.
http://www.fanfiction.net/~forgottenheros

The Tori-bot · Post by **The Tori-bot** » Sat Feb 07, 2009 5:30 pm

Er... wouldn't it have been better to actually write something before making a topic about it? ^^;

Nevertheless, the premise sounds interesting; I'm intrigued.

jda95 · Post by **jda95** » Sat Feb 07, 2009 5:31 pm

The Tori-bot wrote:Er... wouldn't it have been better to actually write something before making a topic about it? ^^;

Nevertheless, the premise sounds interesting; I'm intrigued.

Silly Tori-bot, that blurb WAS the fanfic.

Sounds interesting.

Forgotten Hero · Post by **Forgotten Hero** » Sat Feb 07, 2009 5:31 pm

The Tori-bot wrote:Er... wouldn't it have been better to actually write something before making a topic about it? ^^;

Nevertheless, the premise sounds interesting; I'm intrigued.

I just edited that in...I dropped the ball!!

Forgotten Hero · Post by **Forgotten Hero** » Sat Feb 07, 2009 5:32 pm

jda95 wrote:
The Tori-bot wrote:Er... wouldn't it have been better to actually write something before making a topic about it? ^^;

Nevertheless, the premise sounds interesting; I'm intrigued.
Silly Tori-bot, that blurb WAS the fanfic.

Sounds interesting.

The chapters are pretty short but there will be many of them. I think this will be a long running thing.

jda95 · Post by **jda95** » Sat Feb 07, 2009 5:36 pm

Good intro chapter, even though it's basically a recap of implied events in the other timeline. The dialouge format is annoying, but it's alright for action and stuff. Keep it coming.

Forgotten Hero · Post by **Forgotten Hero** » Sat Feb 07, 2009 5:40 pm

jda95 wrote:Good intro chapter, even though it's basically a recap of implied events in the other timeline. The dialouge format is annoying, but it's alright for action and stuff. Keep it coming.

There are three chapters up right now, so there is more new stuff.
I'll be sure to change the dialogue format, I'm still not sure how I'm going to format yet.
Thanks for the tips!

jda95 · Post by **jda95** » Sat Feb 07, 2009 5:42 pm

The formatting doesn't really matter that much for a fanfic. Sometimes it gets hard to think of 500 different ways to express 'he said' too!

I'll check out the other two chapters today.

Kanzenshuu

Gohan, The Hopeless Chronicles

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