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Post by Super Ghost Kamikaze » Mon Jan 19, 2009 7:35 pm

I hope nobody minds me making another thread for this, but I finally got off my ass and finished the translation for Chapter Two of this comic and I wanted to be able to edit the first post in the thread.

Now, I'd like to thank Eison for finding the comic, and Sprite Satan for putting my translation on the pages.

If anyone wants to take a look at Chapter One, there is a translation in the original thread. Because the artist is re-doing the art for that chapter and I'm planning on smoothing over some aspects of that translation, I'm not going to put it here. But a translation for all three available chapters(and the cover page for Chapter Four) should be posted here within a few days.

Original Comic (in Spanish)

My Translation:

Chapter Two

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Post by SSJ Helldog » Mon Jan 19, 2009 7:46 pm

Glad to see someone tackling this! Mucho appreciado!

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Post by SSj_Rambo » Tue Jan 20, 2009 1:03 am

I went to chapter one, and all I can think is... WHERE IS THE MUSIC COMING FROM?!

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Post by MajinKing » Sun Feb 08, 2009 6:28 pm

It has a pretty good story, the art resembles toriyama. Just cant stand goten being SSJ3 already. It woud have been tolerable if vegeta woud have taken both goten and trunks to train without them turning SSJ3 and just get stronger for the fusion dance.
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Post by peterx » Tue Apr 07, 2009 5:36 pm

Anyone working on this manga's english translation? :)

It looks promising but I don't understand spanish :(

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