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RemiLeopold
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by RemiLeopold » Sat Jun 13, 2009 12:15 am

I'm still pretty bad when it comes to shopping things.
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by bkev » Sat Jun 13, 2009 12:19 am
Interesting way to market it, to be sure. Simple critiques:
-I like the "legends never fade away" idea, but I think you're going about it wrong. Maybe try a different effect that would do something similar? That picture of Goku doesn't work, yet neither would a simple turning down of opacity.
-Use higher-res screens, or at least try and shrink down the ones you use better so they're not so jaggedy.
-Text could use some work.
-Perhaps more of a background?
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by VenomSymbiote » Sat Jun 13, 2009 1:06 am
I like it. It's pretty sweet.
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by JAPPO » Sat Jun 13, 2009 2:04 am
The background shouldn't be white, other than that it looks pretty decent.
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by Haseowolf » Sat Jun 13, 2009 3:14 am
But...if they never fade away...why is Son Goku faded?

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by The Tori-bot » Sat Jun 13, 2009 6:37 am
The Soarking! games were critically acclaimed...?
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by Kuhan » Sat Jun 13, 2009 12:28 pm
The font for the actual ad copy could use some work. As could the one for the release date
The pictures are ridiculously pixely
The 360 and PS3 logos need to be more centered with the ad copy and the X logo should be to the left, not above.
I really don't like what you did with Goku...
You have to remember, Namco Bandai is doing these now, not Atari :p
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