Some Toriyama drawings of mine.

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Some Toriyama drawings of mine.

Post by UristtheGreat » Wed Feb 03, 2010 6:19 pm

This is my newest drawing I've done, It's not completely done. I still need to do the damn sword.
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This is an older drawing I did which I really don't like to look at now because I fucked up the face and proportions
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Re: Some Toriyama drawings of mine.

Post by IncompetentOverlord » Wed Feb 03, 2010 6:42 pm

I really like your take on Son's SSJ form. It seems sort of YYH-ish, but in a good way. The other one is good too, but it seems like you stuck too close to the original design. You should let your own style shine a bit more :P .
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Re: Some Toriyama drawings of mine.

Post by Metalwario64 » Thu Feb 04, 2010 4:33 am

IncompetentOverlord wrote:...it seems like you stuck too close to the original design. You should let your own style shine a bit more :P .
That's because he copied official artwork.
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Re: Some Toriyama drawings of mine.

Post by O-chan30 » Fri Feb 05, 2010 1:36 am

My personal advice is if you want to do fanwork try finding some design sheets of the characters online and instead of "tracing" the artwork try drawing it on your own and putting your own spin on things. Check out the Dev link below for my own personal example.

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Re: Some Toriyama drawings of mine.

Post by IncompetentOverlord » Fri Feb 05, 2010 5:38 pm

Metalwario64 wrote:
IncompetentOverlord wrote:...it seems like you stuck too close to the original design. You should let your own style shine a bit more :P .
That's because he copied official artwork.
That's what I meant by 'stuck too close to the original'. I think it's okay to trace the basic outline and features in fanart, as long as you modify it in some noticeable way. The SSJ Goku is a good example.
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Re: Some Toriyama drawings of mine.

Post by Jaetinh » Fri Feb 12, 2010 4:32 pm

Is this tracing?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q-trM7e4 ... re=related

Because I have no idea what 'tracing a picture' exactly is.

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Re: Some Toriyama drawings of mine.

Post by UristtheGreat » Fri Feb 12, 2010 8:55 pm

That's going over something in marker. Also, I didn't trace these like paper over paper if that's what you guys are implying
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Re: Some Toriyama drawings of mine.

Post by UristtheGreat » Mon Mar 15, 2010 7:09 pm

Sorry for the double and the necro posts. This is just a quick sketch of Bardock, sorry if you can't see it, my scanner sucks.
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LeprikanGT wrote:...I LOVE that we are getting the Dragonboxes, but the JP ones are HUGE ones are noticably taller and the dicks dont overlap.

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