Dragon Ball: The Final Battle

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Dragon Ball: The Final Battle

Post by MCDaveG » Thu Jan 21, 2010 2:44 am

Since I have also some artistic skills, I'm announcing free web comic, which will be 15-30 pages long one-shot.
It'll be straight sequel to Dragon Ball manga and I wanted to call it simply Dragon Ball, but because it won't be official, I added The Final Battle/Farewell our dear universe!!

Style will be as much close to the final volumes of original manga and the story will begin right after with Goku departing/training with Uub.
I will also introduce fresh new villains and one cameo on position of ''chief-villain'' from anime and it won't be Brolli nor any villain from movies.
I can tell you, that it will have some plot elements about the case of Makaiyoshin race.
I'm also big fan of classic 70's and 80's anime series, so you will see more of straight martial arts combat and few of plot twists and no Goku-centric actions but oldschool assault team with all the Dragon Ball warriors and to make a tribute to new game and avoid to making some huge (and maybe unpopular) developments like GT did, Vegeta will finally reach the next SSJ form without skipping it to his red overfured himself.

It'll be some more epic overture to classic manga. The story will turn from gag and fun at the end of Buu saga into more serious and darker tone.
If it'll be succesful between DB fans, and you will like it, maybe it'll be a longer story. See ya next week.
Next week, first page
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Re: Dragon Ball: The Final Battle

Post by Maphisto86 » Thu Jan 21, 2010 2:51 am

Sounds interesting. I really like the direction you will seem to taking it.

Good luck! Looking forward to seeing your art work in manga form.

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Post by Freeza Heika » Thu Jan 21, 2010 6:16 pm

Sounds cool. I can't wait to see it.
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Re: Dragon Ball: The Final Battle

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Fri Jan 22, 2010 3:29 am

Good luck but don't bring back any previously defeated villians with new transformations or anything like that, it would just be a bit cliche.

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Post by MCDaveG » Fri Jan 22, 2010 5:55 am

You will be surprised))) And there will be no new trasnformations, I hate chlichés, so the whole stoty will be what you never seen before in DB universe (except for one villain).
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Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Fri Jan 22, 2010 7:06 am

MCDaveG wrote:You will be surprised))) And there will be no new trasnformations, I hate chlichés, so the whole stoty will be what you never seen before in DB universe (except for one villain).
Awesome, I really look forward to it.

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Re: Dragon Ball: The Final Battle

Post by Kiyza » Fri Jan 22, 2010 4:42 pm

I have a feeling I know who the new villan is, but just in case I'm right, I don't want to spoil it for anyone else.

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Post by MCDaveG » Fri Jan 22, 2010 5:20 pm

Kiyza wrote:I have a feeling I know who the new villan is, but just in case I'm right, I don't want to spoil it for anyone else.
If it'll be popular I should make some mini contest for forum users to guess who it is, because his iidentity won't be revealed soon.
Winners will be drawn onto one of titlepages with rest of the heroes :lol:
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Post by Kiyza » Sun Jan 24, 2010 2:46 pm

That sounds pretty cool to me. Either way, I'm looking forward to seeing this.

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Post by MCDaveG » Wed Feb 03, 2010 11:47 am

I shall have the first and second page ready tommorow...... I will use more of my own style rather then simply to copy Toriyama.
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Re: Dragon Ball: The Final Battle

Post by verto » Tue Feb 23, 2010 7:39 pm

So is this ever going to happen? I was interested in seeing this.

Sorry if this is considered a necro-post (although I don't see why it would be).
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Post by MCDaveG » Fri Feb 26, 2010 2:21 pm

I have some concepts and story, but I managed to get work finally and I really have about 3 hours of free time each day, because I'm real estate agent and this profession is flexible a lot.......

Going to sell some flat right next to Prague castle on sunday evening, so there's work even at weekend.
I actually wanted to make this story, because I was pretty annoyed by sitting at home and searching for work.
So sorry, I must rather make some money. It also crosses with my music production and because I'm making electronic music on professional level here I also don't have time for making this comic.
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