DBZ: BL - Legendary Warrior [Fandub] (Freeza Only)

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DBZ: BL - Legendary Warrior [Fandub] (Freeza Only)

Post by El Diabeetus » Sun Apr 18, 2010 2:03 am

I've been constantly trying to re-do Freeza's voice to sound more Nakao-eqse and now I've attempted to take the tips others have given me like try to sound more "sophisticated" or use a Posh accent, while I didn't do the Posh accent at least I don't think I did, I think it sounds better than before when I just straight up used my real voice:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E24gm_VtP9c

So, this is just for fun to try and get an English Freeza voice/interpretation more like the original (but not exactly the same) as the Original Japanese.

I changed "What is... this?" to "Wait... what the hell?" to make it fit better with mouth flaps and I could see Freeza saying this since he's supposed to be in shock.

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SSJ4 Furanki: Freeza
Goku: Seán Schemmel (Actual English audio used)
Krillin: Sonny Strait (Actual English audio used)

Hopefully, it's okay at least.

Also, I found music this time, but, I probably could've done a better job mixing it though, but, I'm happy with it for now.
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Re: DBZ: BL - Legendary Warrior [Fandub] (Freeza Only)

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Sun Apr 18, 2010 8:11 am

Whoa, that was pretty good. Normally fandubs turn out crap. My only complain is the voice was too deep for Freeza.

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Re: DBZ: BL - Legendary Warrior [Fandub] (Freeza Only)

Post by Metalwario64 » Sun Apr 18, 2010 3:16 pm

I'm going to give some honest constructive criticism.

It's a bit better than your previous attempts, but you still sound a bit flat and unemotional. You didn't sound surprised at all when you said "wait... what the hell?" (and what's with you always adding cussing when there originally wasn't any?) so you need to work on adding emotion to your performance, for it sounds quite uninspired.

I kind of thought the chuckle was a decent attempt at recreating Nakao's but it needs more emotion and range. As it is now, it sounds a bit flat.
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Re: DBZ: BL - Legendary Warrior [Fandub] (Freeza Only)

Post by El Diabeetus » Sun Apr 18, 2010 6:40 pm

Piccolo Daimaoh wrote:Whoa, that was pretty good. Normally fandubs turn out crap. My only complain is the voice was too deep for Freeza.
I guess, well before I was told it was too generic and high pitched. So, that's why it ended up that deep.
Metalwario64 wrote:I'm going to give some honest constructive criticism.

It's a bit better than your previous attempts, but you still sound a bit flat and unemotional. You didn't sound surprised at all when you said "wait... what the hell?" (and what's with you always adding cussing when there originally wasn't any?) so you need to work on adding emotion to your performance, for it sounds quite uninspired.

I kind of thought the chuckle was a decent attempt at recreating Nakao's but it needs more emotion and range. As it is now, it sounds a bit flat.
Thank you, I actually like it when I get honest criticism. I added the Wait... what the hell? Because it originally said "What... is this?" but when watching the mouth movement wasn't 100%. Plus, Freeza could be a character to say hell. Plus, Hell really isn't that bad.

The next Freeza dub, if I try another. I'll try and use your advice.
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Re: DBZ: BL - Legendary Warrior [Fandub] (Freeza Only)

Post by Silver Sinspawn » Thu Apr 29, 2010 2:46 am

And now its totally removed from Youtube. I wanted to see it :(
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Re: DBZ: BL - Legendary Warrior [Fandub] (Freeza Only)

Post by El Diabeetus » Thu Apr 29, 2010 4:35 pm

Silver Sinspawn wrote:And now its totally removed from Youtube. I wanted to see it :(
Ah, I will re-add it shortly. My account got removed due to getting 3 copyright infringements. I'm going to re-do a few lines, mainly the ones Metalwario64 brought up, then, I'll re-upload it.

And now I've switched the link on the first post. It's up again.

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Re: DBZ: BL - Legendary Warrior [Fandub] (Freeza Only)

Post by Silver Sinspawn » Fri Apr 30, 2010 12:40 am

You do know you can override copyrights. That's pretty good though
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Re: DBZ: BL - Legendary Warrior [Fandub] (Freeza Only)

Post by El Diabeetus » Fri Apr 30, 2010 4:24 pm

Silver Sinspawn wrote:You do know you can override copyrights. That's pretty good though
Oh, I'm aware, but last time when I went and tried to override that with my first account, I proved evidence how the copyright claim (final one) was total bullshit, they didn't even check into it. So, I'm not gonna even try with my second one (this one was a legit claim this time), so I moved on to account no. 3 (current one).

Thank you. Glad you seemed to like it.

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