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Post by Innagadadavida » Thu May 13, 2010 3:02 pm

Aren't Haikus supposed to have an onomatopoeia in the second line?

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Post by Sprite Satan » Thu May 13, 2010 3:31 pm

Innagadadavida wrote:Aren't Haikus supposed to have an onomatopoeia in the second line?
Uh, no.

A lot of haikus traditionally use kigo (a word or phrase which implies the season, which is generally a big deal in traditional haikus) and/or kireji (which serves to add further meaning or thoughtfulness to a line) which may be where you're getting this from.

Not that you can't use an onomatopoeia of course. But I never heard of it being a convention of any kind to use them.
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Post by Innagadadavida » Thu May 13, 2010 4:13 pm

Yeeeah. That's right. I remember writing a bunch about winter and spring in school.

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Post by Scarz » Thu May 13, 2010 5:14 pm

I could've sworn I commented but it's not showing up. Oh well I'll just submit it again:

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Post by Rocketman » Sat May 15, 2010 9:21 am

Gohan

WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH
WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH
then free powerup


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Post by LilKokuLink » Sat May 15, 2010 9:50 am

Rocketman wrote:Gohan

WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH
WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH
then free powerup
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Post by Eddie » Sat May 15, 2010 2:55 pm

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Post by Big Momma » Sat May 15, 2010 3:50 pm

Rocketman wrote:Gohan

WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH
WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH
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Post by Silver Sinspawn » Tue May 18, 2010 5:11 am

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