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Post by jjgp1112 » Wed May 26, 2010 2:16 pm

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Post by JulieYBM » Wed May 26, 2010 2:22 pm

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Velasa » Wed May 26, 2010 2:47 pm

... so what's happening in that third panel anyway? Is 'clin' suppose to indicate him using an attack with his big eyeballs or something? I've been having fun with the comic again lately but that exchange just confuses me. (of course, I haven't seen Buu <_< So perhaps it's something well known I'm just blank on.)
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Big Momma » Wed May 26, 2010 3:03 pm

Velasa wrote:... so what's happening in that third panel anyway? Is 'clin' suppose to indicate him using an attack with his big eyeballs or something? I've been having fun with the comic again lately but that exchange just confuses me. (of course, I haven't seen Buu <_< So perhaps it's something well known I'm just blank on.)

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Supreme Stephan » Wed May 26, 2010 3:34 pm

Buu was moving a very tiny piece of his body towards Broly. Vegeto noticed it and destroyed it (hence the glare). The last panel is a close up of Buu's leg with the tiny piece of Buu destroyed by Vegeto. It's Buu who's speaking in the last panel. I hope this clears things up a bit :)

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Freeza Heika » Wed May 26, 2010 5:02 pm

Is it just me, or is the dialogue getting progressively more awkward as the comic goes on? I don't know French, so I can't speak about the translation, but whether it is accurate or not, it isn't naturalized very well.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by JulieYBM » Wed May 26, 2010 5:09 pm

Freeza Heika wrote:Is it just me, or is the dialogue getting progressively more awkward as the comic goes on? I don't know French, so I can't speak about the translation, but whether it is accurate or not, it isn't naturalized very well.
I think Salagir's translating himself or has an 'English editor'...but I don't think his editor speaks very good English. One of these days I'd like to go over the pages and send in a more...proper edit of the dialogue. :lol:
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by DNA » Wed May 26, 2010 5:38 pm

JulieYBM wrote:
Freeza Heika wrote:Is it just me, or is the dialogue getting progressively more awkward as the comic goes on? I don't know French, so I can't speak about the translation, but whether it is accurate or not, it isn't naturalized very well.
I think Salagir's translating himself or has an 'English editor'...but I don't think his editor speaks very good English. One of these days I'd like to go over the pages and send in a more...proper edit of the dialogue. :lol:
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Post by rereboy » Wed May 26, 2010 5:42 pm

I`ve sent an email offering Salagir my help to at least check the english and portuguese translations and to suggest corrections. Basically quality control although I didn`t phrase it like that (I don`t want to step on anybody`s toes :lol: ).

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by jackrs113 » Wed May 26, 2010 6:01 pm

shouldn't Buu be a little more cautious since Vegetto "...mastered the only technique that can destroy me"?

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Senzu_Bean » Wed May 26, 2010 6:04 pm

I emailed Salagir about the Portuguese section too. I told him the translation is closer to Brazilian Portuguese rather than to Portuguese Portuguese (like the flag on the headline) but he didn't reply me.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Wed May 26, 2010 6:12 pm

Senzu_Bean wrote:I emailed Salagir about the Portuguese section too. I told him the translation is closer to Brazilian Portuguese rather than to Portuguese Portuguese (like the flag on the headline) but he didn't reply me.
I`ve noticed that there are plans to start a Brazilian translation so they might need PT-PT translators after that, who knows?

Oh, and Salagir stated that he usually takes very long to reply. He did reply to me on that "relative speed" subject.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Zionist » Wed May 26, 2010 6:17 pm

jackrs113 wrote:shouldn't Buu be a little more cautious since Vegetto "...mastered the only technique that can destroy me"?
But at the same time he's still cocky as fuck Buu who thinks he's stronger than Vegetto...because, well he's Buu. Also he assumes Vegetto is still wiped out from using that blast against Broly while in SSJ3
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by DNA » Wed May 26, 2010 6:41 pm

rereboy wrote:
Senzu_Bean wrote:I emailed Salagir about the Portuguese section too. I told him the translation is closer to Brazilian Portuguese rather than to Portuguese Portuguese (like the flag on the headline) but he didn't reply me.
I`ve noticed that there are plans to start a Brazilian translation so they might need PT-PT translators after that, who knows?

Oh, and Salagir stated that he usually takes very long to reply. He did reply to me on that "relative speed" subject.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by goku the krump dancer » Wed May 26, 2010 9:22 pm

Again I think this Buu is EXTREAMLY cocky...he's starting to remind me of Vegeta when he fought Cell or when he(Vegeta) was boasting about being a Super Saiyan when Dende healed him even though he wasnt.

But I do think that the Vargas will manage to send Broly back just in the nick of time.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dayspring » Wed May 26, 2010 9:56 pm

Vegetto used a microscopic Genkidama? Neeaaaaaat. :D

Original: ''You saw that I was secretly sending a small portion of myself after Broly, even though I managed to make it microscopic. Bravo! I imagine it's impossible to sneak anything passed you, Vegetto. And to think you've mastered well the only technique capable of destroying me...''

To be fair, the original is poorly phrased, this time around as well.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Kingdom Heartless » Wed May 26, 2010 10:01 pm

I love the way Buu is being drawn. He looks really good.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Scarz » Thu May 27, 2010 5:07 am

Vegetto's new technique: MIND BULLETS!

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Bussani » Thu May 27, 2010 7:44 am

Herms/Daizenshuu wrote:Kiai Eyes
First Appearance: Chapter 463
Category: ki manipulation
People: Kaioshin, Majin Buu (good)
Special Characteristics: A technique where you blow away your opponent by glaring at them sharply. An invisible attack, it is capable of taking the enemy by surprise. After being hit with this technique by Kaioshin, Majin Buu (good) instantly mastered it, and unleashed it in imitation of Kaioshin.
I find it interesting that it doesn't mention Goku using it to dig Vegeta's grave, but yeah. This is what Vegetto did.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Maphisto86 » Thu May 27, 2010 3:12 pm

Bussani wrote:
Herms/Daizenshuu wrote:Kiai Eyes
First Appearance: Chapter 463
Category: ki manipulation
People: Kaioshin, Majin Buu (good)
Special Characteristics: A technique where you blow away your opponent by glaring at them sharply. An invisible attack, it is capable of taking the enemy by surprise. After being hit with this technique by Kaioshin, Majin Buu (good) instantly mastered it, and unleashed it in imitation of Kaioshin.
I find it interesting that it doesn't mention Goku using it to dig Vegeta's grave, but yeah. This is what Vegetto did.
Oh right! I totally forgot about this technique, which is similar to other telepathic abilities. We see telepathy often throughout Dragonball but it is something that takes a back seat to other ki abilities such as energy beams or flying (although the latter is similar).

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