DeadlyChestnut's "Universe F" fan comic

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Re: DeadlyChestnut's "Universe F" fan comic

Post by Sun-Wukong » Fri Jul 23, 2010 8:29 pm

I have one question: When are we getting back to the Ginyu Force?

Obsession with them aside, the comic is great.
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Post by SSJSteve » Mon Jul 26, 2010 10:33 am

New page:

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Post by rereboy » Mon Jul 26, 2010 1:05 pm

Nice page. That pose is a nice touch.

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Post by JulieYBM » Mon Jul 26, 2010 1:39 pm

Very, very good. I love Kuriza and Prince Vegeta so much in this series. :)
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Post by Godo » Mon Jul 26, 2010 2:53 pm

Sun-Wukong wrote:I have one question: When are we getting back to the Ginyu Force?

Obsession with them aside, the comic is great.
They are indeed an untapped potential source that's not used that much in fan comics.
I would like to see them more too.

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Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:50 am

Great, so I'm hoping that this thread will be updated with new pages as they come out.



Anyways, Kreeza is going to get Galick Hō'd. :P

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Post by Shiyonasan » Tue Aug 10, 2010 12:53 am

Page 38:

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Unfortunately, it doesn't look like we'll be getting another page for a while:
DeadlyChestnut wrote:Really lame page. Lame alliterations, lame shout-out to TFS, lame racial slurs... you just know, it's all downhill from here.

I don't expect another page next weekend, and neither should you. Thanks for sticking with me, though. I hope you still enjoy this page, despite it's lameness.

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Post by Big Momma » Tue Aug 10, 2010 1:22 am

Sounds like someone's in a depressive slump...:?


Well, guys, you'd better get to commenting on that page to cheer her up!
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Post by Shiyonasan » Tue Aug 10, 2010 1:27 am

Big Momma wrote:Well, guys, you'd better get to commenting on that page to cheer him up!
Actually, DeadlyChestnut is a girl. But yes, you guys should go cheer her up!

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Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Tue Aug 10, 2010 1:50 am

I actually thought "slimy space salamander" was sort of funny. :wink:

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Post by Snail » Tue Aug 10, 2010 6:52 am

This is flippin' fantastic! Fun and fresh.

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Post by SSJSteve » Sat Sep 04, 2010 1:09 pm

Page 39!
It's been a while since the last page.

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Loving that last panel. :D

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Post by JulieYBM » Sat Sep 04, 2010 1:31 pm

Or my, how the colors for this comic are always gorgeous!!
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Post by Scarz » Sat Sep 04, 2010 2:22 pm

I like the fancomic so far but I'm not crazy over it. I guess it's because we're 39 pages in and I just don't see where this story is going. I like the new characters so far, especially Nappa's grandson, but it's going to take a lot more than fight scenes and pretty colors to win me over.

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Post by batistabus » Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:18 pm

When my only complaint is that Kuriza is red instead of brown, you can guess how I feel about this.

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Post by ShadowDude112 » Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:20 pm

See, this is why you don't warn you're enemy when you want to do a sneak attack. They know you're there so of course they're going to counterattack.
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Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Sun Sep 05, 2010 1:16 am

Scarz wrote:I like the fancomic so far but I'm not crazy over it. I guess it's because we're 39 pages in and I just don't see where this story is going. I like the new characters so far, especially Nappa's grandson, but it's going to take a lot more than fight scenes and pretty colors to win me over.
Agreed. Oh well, at least the flashy colours look nice. :P

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Post by SSJSteve » Mon Sep 06, 2010 5:19 pm

Page 40. :)

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Re: DeadlyChestnut's "Universe F" fan comic

Post by JulieYBM » Mon Sep 06, 2010 5:22 pm

Great, great page. Can't wait for more, espicially when it comes to the plot.
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Re: DeadlyChestnut's "Universe F" fan comic

Post by ShadowDude112 » Mon Sep 06, 2010 6:43 pm

Like I said earlier, this is why you don't warn your opponent of your sneak attack. He could've hit Kuriza if he didn't.
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JacobYBM wrote:No, why would it? It's fiction. The strength of the characters is not possible to reach in reality.
I mean, you're pretty open about looking at cartoon porn. Why would you do that? It's fiction. The proportions of these women are not possible to reach in reality.

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