Dragon Ball Z Kai - Freeza's Vermin Line (Fandub)

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Dragon Ball Z Kai - Freeza's Vermin Line (Fandub)

Post by DB_Fan1991 » Sun Aug 01, 2010 9:06 pm

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Y7qqYezY4Y

This is my attempt at this scene. Sorry that there are no sound effects as I don't have them. I tried to match the lips as closely as possible. As you can tell this is a different take than what Chris Ayres did.
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Post by Big Momma » Mon Aug 02, 2010 12:40 am

Don't shy away from that mic. Put your throat behind it. It's not worth doing if you shy away. :D
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Post by DB_Fan1991 » Mon Aug 02, 2010 1:13 am

Big Momma wrote:Don't shy away from that mic. Put your throat behind it. It's not worth doing if you shy away. :D
Thanks for the advice. I did 5 attempts before I got that one and shouting VERMIN!!! 5 times really strained my voice.
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Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Mon Aug 02, 2010 4:16 am

Ah, you did the whole "soft shout" thing that I see in a lot of abridged series and fan dubs. Might I suggest actually screaming into the microphone and not shying away from it, like what Big Momma said.

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Post by DB_Fan1991 » Mon Aug 02, 2010 4:34 am

Piccolo Daimaoh wrote:Ah, you did the whole "soft shout" thing that I see in a lot of abridged series and fan dubs. Might I suggest actually screaming into the microphone and not shying away from it, like what Big Momma said.
I did a very loud shout on the 1st take, but I messed up a few lines, so as I did more takes my voice got strained.
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Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Mon Aug 02, 2010 4:37 am

DB_Fan1991 wrote:
Piccolo Daimaoh wrote:Ah, you did the whole "soft shout" thing that I see in a lot of abridged series and fan dubs. Might I suggest actually screaming into the microphone and not shying away from it, like what Big Momma said.
I did a very loud shout on the 1st take, but I messed up a few lines, so as I did more takes my voice got strained.
Oh, right. After your voice heals, you should have another go at it.

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Post by DB_Fan1991 » Mon Aug 02, 2010 5:01 am

Piccolo Daimaoh wrote:
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Piccolo Daimaoh wrote:Ah, you did the whole "soft shout" thing that I see in a lot of abridged series and fan dubs. Might I suggest actually screaming into the microphone and not shying away from it, like what Big Momma said.
I did a very loud shout on the 1st take, but I messed up a few lines, so as I did more takes my voice got strained.
Oh, right. After your voice heals, you should have another go at it.
I will, but this time I'll do it on my porch where I have no company, so I can scream louder.

Here's my second attempt.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Ts7nOYBUQM
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Post by El Diabeetus » Tue Aug 03, 2010 3:46 am

The second one was much better. But, don't be afraid to get loud with the other lines. Still can use work. But, practice makes perfect.

Doesn't mean it's bad. Plus, you can stand away from the mic when yelling so it doesn't pop about the mic.
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Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Tue Aug 03, 2010 3:51 am

DB_Fan1991 wrote:
Here's my second attempt.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Ts7nOYBUQM
Nice work, it sounded much better. :P

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Post by Big Momma » Tue Aug 03, 2010 12:48 pm

Holy crap, that yell literally punched me in the face.

Still, much better, haha. When I said go for it, you really went for it. And that's good!

Furanki's advice on stepping back really helps, too when you're yelling. Keep at it :D
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