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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Fri Sep 24, 2010 2:39 am

Big Momma wrote: Dayspring posted the joke in good english a few posts later. Also, this joke isn't so much on the words, it's the character in and of herself.
I know; I was joking before. I still don't find the joke funny, though.

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Post by Heatth » Fri Sep 24, 2010 3:14 am

Ussj Future Trunks wrote:You make it sound like she can't control it cos she's so incompetent. Yeah right. Vegetto forbade her from using it, preventing any chance she had of mastering it. Is it really so unbelievable that Bra can match her father after 12 years of nothing but training? When Gohan barely trained at all and STILL surpassed SSJ3?
Dude, I was not attacking the character. She is one of my favorite characters in this comic. Why are you acting like that? Note I didn't ever said it is not believable she was so powerful.

Anyway, her control over her power in SSJ2 mode sucks. He almost killed her father and Gohan pointed out she usually destroy the surroundings as well (and that is a lot of destruction, considering how powerful she is). I was just pointing out we need a flashback to show this properly.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by ShiningMoon » Fri Sep 24, 2010 12:30 pm

Kingdom Heartless wrote:I think seeing Goku completely unaffected would have made it even funnier. :lol:
Bahaha, I think you're right, now that you mention that. Though Vegeta's "shut up, Kakarotto" comment also made me laugh.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Heatth » Fri Sep 24, 2010 1:16 pm

@Kingdom Heartless and ShiningMoon

Eh, I am not sure if you get it, but the one who said "Bear my child" is not Goku. It is Kakarotto from U13. Remember his fight against Kat? At last for now Goku can be just as unaffected as Gohan and Pan.

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Post by rereboy » Fri Sep 24, 2010 1:18 pm

Heatth wrote:It is Kakarotto from U13. Remember his fight against Kat? At last for now Goku can be just as unaffected as Gohan and Pan.
Exactly.

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Post by JulieYBM » Fri Sep 24, 2010 2:03 pm

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Post by Scarz » Fri Sep 24, 2010 2:10 pm

I... got nothing. To be honest I don't really care about U16's Bra. I have nothing against her character I just don't want to read a whole special chapter about her. I rather read a special about the other Bra, the one that seems more stuck up and spoiled. She's awesome!

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by ShiningMoon » Fri Sep 24, 2010 5:07 pm

Heatth wrote:@Kingdom Heartless and ShiningMoon

Eh, I am not sure if you get it, but the one who said "Bear my child" is not Goku. It is Kakarotto from U13. Remember his fight against Kat? At last for now Goku can be just as unaffected as Gohan and Pan.
Oh! I see. Eh, I've been reading this really casually, so I've not been keeping very good track of the universes. Thanks for pointing this out to me. :oops:

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Post by Kingdom Heartless » Fri Sep 24, 2010 5:42 pm

Oh, I knew that was Kakarotto, and that Goku wasn't shown.... I just think it would have been funny to see him.
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Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Sat Sep 25, 2010 12:07 am

So it has begun......



I'm not a fan of the art, either. But maybe this special will be actually interesting.

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Post by TonyTheTiger » Sat Sep 25, 2010 3:26 am

Aw. I don't want to see this Bra topless... :cry:

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Post by TrunksTrevelyan0064 » Sat Sep 25, 2010 7:57 am

Hmm. It says heiresses. I would guess Pan is another one, but she's Gohan's daughter, not Vegetto's.
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Post by Heatth » Sat Sep 25, 2010 7:59 am

TrunksTrevelyan0064 wrote:Hmm. It says heiresses. I would guess Pan is another one, but she's Gohan's daughter, not Vegetto's.
So what? In U18, Pan is not Goku daughter either, but it is quite obviously his heiress. Not to mention Uub, who is not related to him at all.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dayspring » Sat Sep 25, 2010 10:01 am

Heatth wrote:
TrunksTrevelyan0064 wrote:Hmm. It says heiresses. I would guess Pan is another one, but she's Gohan's daughter, not Vegetto's.
So what? In U18 Pan is not Goku daughter either, but it is quite obviously his heiress. Not to mention Uub, who is not related to him at all.
In English, these days "heiress" is socially meant to mean a cross between "daughter" and "wealthy inheritor" instead of just "female inheritor." So your right, but it's just not what everybody instantly thinks of anymore in Eglish. I blame Paris Hilton and shows like The Hills.

Just a note: I don't think any word in English can be used as an alternative to avoid this social confusion. The original reads as either "The 'inheritoresses' of Vegetto" or "Vegetto's 'inheritoresses'". Since "inheritoresses" isn't a word, you'd use "heiress."
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Post by Heatth » Sat Sep 25, 2010 1:12 pm

Then, I guess you can't say Uub is Goku heir either?

I didn't know 'inheritor' existed, though I don't think I would have trouble figuring it meaning. Anyway, "inheritoresses" is indeed, not a word. But inheritresses is. I suppose that would be the better translation then? Would "Vegetto's inheritresses" works?

Btw, there is any difference between "The 'inheritresses' of Vegetto" and "Vegetto's 'inheritresses'"? I figured that, since English don't use 'the' as much as most Latin languages you would use the latter, but the former has the same meaning, right?

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dayspring » Sat Sep 25, 2010 6:41 pm

Heatth wrote:Then, I guess you can't say Uub is Goku heir either?
Depends on the context. What is Uub inheriting? His fighting spirit? His role as Earth's protector? Unless Goku dies or retires and then Uub picks up where he left off, then Uub is not is heir in any meaning of the word.
I didn't know 'inheritor' existed, though I don't think I would have trouble figuring it meaning. Anyway, "inheritoresses" is indeed, not a word. But inheritresses is. I suppose that would be the better translation then? Would "Vegetto's inheritresses" works?

Btw, there is any difference between "The 'inheritresses' of Vegetto" and "Vegetto's 'inheritresses'"? I figured that, since English don't use 'the' as much as most Latin languages you would use the latter, but the former has the same meaning, right?
"Inheritress" is a word? Yuck, my vocabulary needs to get bigger; I thought inheritor was gender-neutral. :oops:

It's more a matter of diction at that point, like saying "cease your current action at once" over "stop that right now." While both work grammatically, you'd probably say either "The inheritresses of Vegetto" or "Vegetto's heiresses." Since the short's going to be a gag-manga, I want to lean towards the latter, but it's too soon to tell if the higher diction was intentional or not.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Heatth » Sat Sep 25, 2010 6:57 pm

Dayspring wrote:Depends on the context. What is Uub inheriting? His fighting spirit? His role as Earth's protector? Unless Goku dies or retires and then Uub picks up where he left off, then Uub is not is heir in any meaning of the word.
He is meant to be Goku successor isn't he? If Goku dies or retire and Uub still have conditions to fight (we don't know how long a sayajin lives rght?) then Uub picks the bat as the 'protector of Earth' and follow Goku's fighting style.

While on it, Kuririn is Kame's 'heir' isn't he? It is the same thing for Uub and Goku (and Pan and Goku, at last in DBM).
Dayspring wrote:It's more a matter of diction at that point, like saying "cease your current action at once" over "stop that right now." While both work grammatically, you'd probably say either "The inheritresses of Vegetto" or "Vegetto's heiresses." Since the short's going to be a gag-manga, I want to lean towards the latter, but it's too soon to tell if the higher diction was intentional or not.
Eh, I don't get it. ^^; Why the latter is better for a gag-manga? I didn't understand the "cease your current action at once" and "stop that right now" either (sorry my bad English). Is that the first phrase is less natural?
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Xyex » Sat Sep 25, 2010 10:21 pm

Heatth wrote:
Dayspring wrote:Depends on the context. What is Uub inheriting? His fighting spirit? His role as Earth's protector? Unless Goku dies or retires and then Uub picks up where he left off, then Uub is not is heir in any meaning of the word.
He is meant to be Goku successor isn't he? If Goku dies or retire and Uub still have conditions to fight (we don't know how long a sayajin lives rght?) then Uub picks the bat as the 'protector of Earth' and follow Goku's fighting style.
Saiya-jins live as long as humans do, they just stay in their primes longer and then rapidly age into wrinkly old people at the end.
Heatth wrote:I didn't understood the "cease your current action at once" and "stop that right now" either (sorry my bad English). Is that the first phrase is less natural?
Yeah. The first one is more wordy, more 'stiff', and "cease" is not something you hear in common every day conversation too often. It sounds more like something you'd see in a legal document. While the second sounds more like what your average person might say.

Also, it'd be "didn't understand." Not being mean, but how do you improve if people don't point out mistakes? :p
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Kingdom Heartless » Sat Sep 25, 2010 11:53 pm

I'm hoping this is one of the shorter specials, because I want to get back to the main story. :P
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Post by Ussj Future Trunks » Sun Sep 26, 2010 12:04 am

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