Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

[Kingdom Heartless]

Oh, well ok. I suppose it's something that we're getting 4 pages a week until it's over.

[Heatth]

At this rate with this many pages the special will end in the first day of November, Monday. Meaning the next page of the main story will be up four days latter (I am not counting the cover)

Also, it'd be "didn't understand." Not being mean, but how do you improve if people don't point out mistakes? :p

Thanks. Please don't be afraid to point my errors. As you said, it is the patch to improvement.

Edit: New page is out:


Personal comment: Huh?

Also, the art annoy me more then I thought it would.

[Scarz]

Also, the art annoy me more then I thought it would.

Same here, at first I thought I might dig the new style but it's just not working out.

[LeprikanGT]

1. POST 2000!!!!!

2. I agree, I'm very tred of this random art style, it got old very quickly and they should get back to the tournament and drawing style. I'm losing interest and I know I'm not the only one.

[Xyex]

2. I agree, I'm very tred of this random art style, it got old very quickly and they should get back to the tournament and drawing style. I'm losing interest and I know I'm not the only one.

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Old quickly? What? This is only the second page.

There's so much more I'd say, but there's no way to do it politely, so let's just say I disagree with the entirety of your post and leave it at that, for civility's sake.

[JulieYBM]

Gogeta Jr. is allowed to take breaks, y'know. He just did a whole chapter on a three-a-week basis, that has to be tiring.

[Snail]

Pretty cool! I like how the team has allowed for different art styles to be utilized for the specials now. I'd rather take a different art style as opposed to a bad imitation.

[Heatth]

2. I agree, I'm very tred of this random art style, it got old very quickly and they should get back to the tournament and drawing style. I'm losing interest and I know I'm not the only one.

...Isn't a bit too early to say you are "tired" of the art style? This is the first actual page we got.

Anyway, I figured the most annoying thing on this page art is Pan. She... looks retarded or something (well, her speech didn't help either). The rest is not that bad. I think I can get used to it as long we don't get a retard person every page. Probably.

About the randomness of the plot. Apparently you could understand if you read the official fanfic of Universe 16 (French only). I hope there will be an actual in comic explanation eventually (maybe in the next couple of pages?).

Links for "DBM Univers 16 : La fusion de deux vies" (DMB Universe 16: Fusion of two lives):
First chapter (French)
Translated first chapter (the single chapter translated)

Edit:

Gogeta Jr. is allowed to take breaks, y'know. He just did a whole chapter on a three-a-week basis, that has to be tiring.

I don't think he actually did 3 pages per week. As far I know he draw everything in advance. But, anyway, this specials are whay allow us to have so many pages each week.

[Senzu_Bean]

Anyway, I figured the most annoying thing on this page is Pan.

I think is Bra. I never thought she was your typical, movie teenager. I'm starting to give reasons to all those people bashing her some pages ago.

[Heatth]

I think is Bra. I never thought she was your typical, movie teenager. I'm starting to give reasons to all those people bashing her some pages ago.

Eh, Bra was the best thing on this page for me, actually. And she have been being like that for the whole comic already so I don't see your surprise. (also, I may have not been clear, but I was talking about the art style)

Speaking on her, why is she with the 'wrong' outfits? This one is U18 Bra's isn't it? It don't really fit U16 Bra personality.

[Senzu_Bean]

I think is Bra. I never thought she was your typical, movie teenager. I'm starting to give reasons to all those people bashing her some pages ago.

Eh, Bra was the best thing on this page for me, actually. And she have been being like that for the whole comic already so I don't see your surprise.

She was?! I never saw her in "emo" mode before in the actual story.

[Scarz]

Gogeta Jr. is allowed to take breaks, y'know. He just did a whole chapter on a three-a-week basis, that has to be tiring.

I don't think anyone here said that Gogeta Jr. shouldn't get a break. I just didn't dig the art style.

She was?! I never saw her in "emo" mode before in the actual story.

Wha? Emo in what way?

[rereboy]

I'm losing interest and I know I'm not the only one.

Then check out DBM in about a month or so when its back on the main story.

I also prefer the main story to the specials, but as it has been pointed out, they are pretty much necessary.

She was?! I never saw her in "emo" mode before in the actual story.

Emo because she finds a diplomatic mission boring...?

[Heatth]

She was?! I never saw her in "emo" mode before in the actual story.

You post to fast! I edit my previous post a bit.

Anyway, look at this cover. I wouldn't call it 'emo' but it is pretty much the same as the current page (that I also wouldn't call 'emo').

[Senzu_Bean]

Emo because she finds a diplomatic mission boring...?

No, it's her attitude. I won't have problem if it was Pan or Vegetto with such attitude. But she is a teenager. This is like when the parents of a 15 years old kid make him go with them somewhere and he acts all annoyed cause he wanted to be somewhere else , doing something.

Speaking on her, why is she with the 'wrong' outfits? This one is U18 Bra's isn't it? It don't really fit U16 Bra personality.

You're right. She is using the other Bra outfit. Maybe a mistake?

[LeprikanGT]

That was a gauge on how much I hate the new drawing style, 2 second after I saw the first page I hated it, and it seems that it's going to be a trend for awhile. Call me when they get back to the story and the way the drawing is supposed to be.

[Heatth]

No, it's her attitude. I won't have problem if it was Pan or Vegetto with such attitude. But she is a teenager. This is like when the parents of a 15 years old kid make him go with them somewhere and he acts all annoyed cause he wanted to be somewhere else , doing something.

So, it is worse for Bra 'cause she is acting as her age... what? Anyway, you have the right to dislike her because of that, since this is a pretty annoying attitude. I am just pointing she have always been like that. But I guess it is not much noticeable since we haven't have that many not fighting scenes with her.

You're right. She is using the other Bra outfit. Maybe a mistake?

It was the same last page.

That was a gauge on how much I hate the new drawing style, 2 second after I saw the first page I hated it, and it seems that it's going to be a trend for awhile. Call me when they get back to the story and the way the drawing is supposed to be.

Forgive me if I don't care. I don't like the art either, but just shooting it in two pages is not very useful. Sometimes you just need time to get used to it.

[Senzu_Bean]

So, it is worse for Bra 'cause she is acting as her age... what? Anyway, you have the right to dislike her because of that, since this is a pretty annoying attitude. I am just pointing she have always been like that. But I guess it is not much noticeable since we haven't have that many not fighting scenes with her.

Not every teenager act like that. I know I didn't. Anyway, I'm not saying she annoys me, just in this particular page. She has been great in the actual story.

It was the same last page.

Maybe this Bra uses the same clothes as the other Bra when not training/fighting?

Forgive me if I don't care. I don't like the art either, but just shooting it in two pages is not very useful. Sometimes you just need time to get used to it.

I don't like the art either. But I don't think is justifiable to bash and rant about the art on a special, specially when the art is anything but bad.

[Heatth]

Not every teenager act like that. I know I didn't. Anyway, I'm not saying she annoys me, just in this particular page. She has been great in the actual story.

But some do (and this kind of attitude is more common between then). And Bra is one of these. I agree with Bra being great, though.

It was the same last page.

Maybe this Bra uses the same clothes as the other Bra when not training/fighting?

I suppose... But it don't really fit her, I think. Maybe it was her mother who gave her? That would make sense.

Forgive me if I don't care. I don't like the art either, but just shooting it in two pages is not very useful. Sometimes you just need time to get used to it.

I don't like the art either. But I don't think is justifiable to bash and rant about the art on a special, specially when the art is anything but bad.

So... you agree with me? (except I think the art is bad, at last in the panels Pan appear)

You need give those quotes to the right person. I was me, not LeprikanGT, who said the last two.

[rereboy]

Not every teenager act like that. I know I didn't. Anyway, I'm not saying she annoys me, just in this particular page. She has been great in the actual story.

She is bored because she is not interested in diplomatic missions or whatever. Its boring for her. She likes to fight, become stronger and train, which is kind of almost the opposite of a diplomatic mission.
And she is not making a scene, btw, like some teenagers do. She is just bored because it doesn`t interest her.