Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dbgtFO » Mon Sep 27, 2010 3:24 pm

@ the japanese version. it's probably the next page so since we have already seen that one Salagir should just post it right away :P

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by DNA » Mon Sep 27, 2010 3:26 pm

A while ago, we had access to the full chapter, the Japanese page was the original first page, I have no idea why that is not the case anymore.

Edit: Oh wait, that's the next page!

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by batistabus » Mon Sep 27, 2010 4:49 pm

That fat thing was not even creative.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Mon Sep 27, 2010 5:50 pm

That is the next page. They made a mistake.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Captain Awesome » Mon Sep 27, 2010 6:11 pm

Ussj Future Trunks wrote:
it just feels more like an excuse to get characters that otherwise couldn't interact to fight with each other.
That was the entire point the entire time. To show fanservice fights with alternate universe characters while setting up a bigger story.
Ignoring the fact that you're bringing up counterpoints to comments I made months ago, I'm not an idiot. I understand completely what the creators of DBM are going for, my issue is that I find it completely and utterly boring. I think the art is squandered on a story that apart from being totally uninspired, simply isn't going anywhere.
But the story to me just reeks of a bad fanfic,
A fanfic reeks of a fanfic? WOW big contraversial opinion you got there bud.
I know you're busy between ignoring words in sentences, and making spelling mistakes, but I thought I'd just point out that fanfics and web comics are two different storytelling mediums.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Big Momma » Tue Sep 28, 2010 12:13 am

Well, to be honest, isn't most of DBMultiverse based off of some of Salagir's fanfiction?

That, and I'd say that, even though this is a webcomic, it can still be classified as a "fanfiction". No matter how high the production values are.
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Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Tue Sep 28, 2010 12:44 am

That was actually..... sort of funny. Unlike that Mary Sue bullshit.

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Post by Super Saiyajin Luffy » Tue Sep 28, 2010 4:39 am

Piccolo Daimaoh wrote:That was actually..... sort of funny. Unlike that Mary Sue bullshit.
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Post by Ussj Future Trunks » Tue Sep 28, 2010 6:17 am

Is the novel canon? Because it has a lot of interesting stuff not in the comic.
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Post by dbgtFO » Tue Sep 28, 2010 6:52 am

Ussj Future Trunks wrote:Is the novel canon? Because it has a lot of interesting stuff not in the comic.
http://translate.google.co.uk/translate ... 6prmd%3Div
In the introduction above where the links to the parts are, it says it is "verified by salting", since Google is not as good as translating, they didn't see Salagir, as a name and translated it to "salting," so you could assume it is canon to the manga.

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Post by Scarz » Wed Sep 29, 2010 2:58 pm

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Hm, I wonder why he left Goten and Trunks behind?

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Post by Innagadadavida » Wed Sep 29, 2010 3:03 pm

"of all times" you say?

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by JulieYBM » Wed Sep 29, 2010 3:51 pm

OF ALL TIMES~!![/Giant 3D movie block letters]

Ah, this is pretty cool. Making Vegetto such a being is a neat idea...
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TonyTheTiger » Wed Sep 29, 2010 4:57 pm

Last panel be mad creepy. :lol:

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Post by rereboy » Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:05 pm

Even though its not stated in the comic, I like to think that its because of Vegetto`s unique personality that he turned to outer space at the command of the kaioshins.

He has part of Vegeta in him, so he knows and probably likes adventurous journeys through outer space (he only stayed on Earth because of Goku and their rivalry, but that`s not a problem anymore). But he also has Goku in him, so he is a better person overall than Vegeta was, and he probably wants to help people out, while training to better himself. This unique mix might have been the trigger for his actions.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Zionist » Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:34 pm

Creepy Rape face XD
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dayspring » Wed Sep 29, 2010 6:53 pm

That's one creepy face. On the plus side, the original text is less rape-y. Well, a little. :P

There's also no randomly added "on Earth." Sure it doesn't change much, but it's still a completely random and needless change.[/translation bugaboo]

"In 774, two Saiyan warriors, amongst the most powerful of the Universe, fused thanks to the sacred Potalas of the Kaioshins and formed Vegetto, the strongest being of all time.

He agreed to obey the Kaioshins in recognition* and was sent on missions throughout all the Universe to put and end to conflicts and combat evils.

...None would survive.

He quickly became known among the evolved worlds as The Great Hero, seen even as a god...

And he trained and brought two little adventurous girls with him."


*The original is VERY poorly written here, actually translating properly as "He accepted to obey the Kaioshins in reconnaissance." Looks like a lot of French forum goers are hating it not just for the art, but also because nobody can picture the Kaioshins using their deific standings to practically enslave Vegetto, let alone someone like Vegetto agreeing to it because of those same standings. However, it seems to me more like they're using him as a loophole in the whole "we can't interfere with mortal lives" rule by asking an actual mortal to do the interfering.

I would leave "evolved" as is because the better word choice in French would normally also be the French word for "civilized." Since worlds considered "evolved" in DB typically mean worlds with sentient people (meaning aliens like Nameks and Saiyans instead of alien fish and dinosaurs), there's too big a chance the text was referring to the latter than they are using bad diction to warrant a change.

The last line introduces ambiguity when translated into English. The original reads in a way that implies "he trained two little adventurous girls and brought them with him."
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by goku the krump dancer » Wed Sep 29, 2010 8:40 pm

Wow so people pray to Vegetto.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dayspring » Wed Sep 29, 2010 9:45 pm

goku the krump dancer wrote:Wow so people pray to Vegetto.
In case you're not being sarcastic, that's not quite what's being said. Vegetto's strength defies the laws of... well, everything. He makes the most powerful version of Boo look pitiful, while the least powerful version still defies the laws of nature, science and godliness. Elite standings by the Universe's standards is a BP in the low 20,000s. Vegetto is literally a few billion times stronger than that, if not more. As a result, in the eyes of most people in the Universe, he is to Superman as Superman is to a paraplegic with stage four Cancer.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Wed Sep 29, 2010 10:00 pm

But why is Vegeto indebted to the Kaiōshin? They should be indebted to him, for saving them from Boo. :?

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