Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dayspring » Wed Sep 29, 2010 11:09 pm

Piccolo Daimaoh wrote:But why is Vegeto indebted to the Kaiōshin? They should be indebted to him, for saving them from Boo. :?
That's what French fans are bitching about, too. I think it's a matter of acknowledging their role in the cosmos (from the Goku side) and just as thanks for letting him come into existence (by lending Goku and Vegeta the Potara).
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Kingdom Heartless » Thu Sep 30, 2010 4:16 am

I didn't find the "gratitude" thing as off as the word "obey."

Vegetto does not obey. :wink:
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Godo » Thu Sep 30, 2010 5:20 am

Kingdom Heartless wrote:I didn't find the "gratitude" thing as off as the word "obey."

Vegetto does not obey. :wink:
Vegetto gets obeyed.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Shoryuken » Thu Sep 30, 2010 9:06 am

I have no problem with the first panel at all (art-wise that is), but the last two.. Oh boy.
It's the second and third panel. The second panel has no sense of depth what so ever. The TV hardly looks threedimensional and could just as well be wallpaper. The filler-comic isn't too bad though apart from the occasional plundge in quaility.
Why is it that that third panel Vegito reminds me of Shin-chan? And that the second panel features what could be robotic versions of Beavis and Butthead.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Scarz » Fri Oct 01, 2010 2:25 pm

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This page made me chuckle.

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Post by dbgtFO » Fri Oct 01, 2010 2:41 pm

lol Vegetto with normal clothes looks so wrong. And the last panel of him makes him lose all the glory he had in the original story. It looks like he inherited a lot from Goku's ignorant side by the way.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dayspring » Fri Oct 01, 2010 5:47 pm

Blaaaaaaargh! My translation pet peeves all over this page! But it's well-translated so I won't post my alternatives! Blaaaaargh!

Is that a shirt we've seen Vegeta wear?
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by batistabus » Fri Oct 01, 2010 6:25 pm

There's no way around it, Vegetto looks terrible in this art-style.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Fri Oct 01, 2010 6:43 pm

Dayspring wrote:
Is that a shirt we've seen Vegeta wear?
Actually, it is.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TonyTheTiger » Fri Oct 01, 2010 7:26 pm

I guess there won't be anymore handwaving away the issue of Vegetto's living situation. The guy's a playa. 8)

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Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Sat Oct 02, 2010 12:36 am

Congratulations, Multiverse! Your first successful attempt at humour! :D

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Post by Kingdom Heartless » Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:11 am

Piccolo Daimaoh wrote:Congratulations, Multiverse! Your first successful attempt at humour! :D

No way. Multiverse has had plenty of funny moments.

If anything, this is one of its weakest attempts.
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Post by goku the krump dancer » Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:23 am

So I'm guessing that's the bad man shirt Vegetto is wearing.
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Post by Goku100xKamehameha » Sat Oct 02, 2010 6:22 pm

What's with the art on the latest page?

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Post by JulieYBM » Sun Oct 03, 2010 2:07 pm

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Post by jjgp1112 » Sun Oct 03, 2010 2:49 pm

lol, the Badman shirt.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Big Momma » Sun Oct 03, 2010 2:58 pm

Doesn't Bulma already know all Saiyans do that?
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Heatth » Sun Oct 03, 2010 3:28 pm

Big Momma wrote:Doesn't Bulma already know all Saiyans do that?
I think she is asking if Bra will get mad like Goku or not. Remember, Vegeta didn't lose his control as a monkey. Bulma knows all Sayan become giant ape, but do not know if they lose their control. Anyway, considering Bra's power lever, cutting her tail is a wise move. Sure, Vegetto (if not in base, as a super sayan) can stop her with easy, but who knows what she would do if he was not nearby.

By the way, Trunks had a tail in DBM canon (it was mentioned in one of the official fan fics). Bulma probably just keep cutting it until it stop growing.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Senzu_Bean » Sun Oct 03, 2010 3:33 pm

Heatth wrote:By the way, Trunks had a tail in DBM canon (it was mentioned in one of the official fan fics). Bulma probably just keep cutting it until it stop growing.
Thus this page contradicts that. Bulma is surprised how she never saw Trunks's tail.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Sun Oct 03, 2010 3:39 pm

Senzu_Bean wrote:
Heatth wrote:By the way, Trunks had a tail in DBM canon (it was mentioned in one of the official fan fics). Bulma probably just keep cutting it until it stop growing.
Thus this page contradicts that. Bulma is surprised how she never saw Trunks's tail.
I interpreted that line as being spoken by Vegetto (obviously Goku never saw his tail and Vegeta probably never did either because he couldn`t care less about him at the time. He knew he existed, but he just had sex with bulma, he didn`t want a son, he didn`t care enough for being there when he was born and see his tail).

And I still think it was Vegetto who said that, but I can see why you thought that Bulma was the one to say that since the bubble doesn`t point to either of them.
To me, the dialog makes much more sense if that line is being spoken by Vegetto and not by Bulma. Also, she just looks surprised by what Vegetto is saying in that panel, without opening her mouth, which I also interpreted as her just listening and being surprised.
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