Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Godo » Sun Oct 17, 2010 7:20 am

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I don't like it; there are too much swirls for my tastes.
Yeah, why are there so many swirls?
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Ussj Future Trunks » Sun Oct 17, 2010 9:25 am

Dunno about anyone else but I hope King vegeta or Raditz fights next cos I'm FAR more interested now in that universe than any other. Even Bra is becoming boring. Unless she has a decent battle in this round against one of the Gotenks. For U13 I just hope their special is the best one. I wanna know how the hell King Vegeta and Kakarot found the secret of SSJ and got stronger than Cell jr. I hope there will be an Oozaru Raditz vs King Cold battle. Maybe King Cold cuts off his tail and Raditz gets so mad he turns SSJ and kicks King Cold's ass. I'm getting really tired of this god forsaken "special".
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by jjgp1112 » Sun Oct 17, 2010 4:13 pm

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Jaruka » Sun Oct 17, 2010 5:24 pm

*groans*
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by batistabus » Sun Oct 17, 2010 6:12 pm

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I'd kill for some Broli at this point...

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Rocketman » Sun Oct 17, 2010 6:42 pm

I'd kill for this "side" story to become the main plot and for all the retarded tournament shit to be quietly forgotten.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Great Saiyaman I » Sun Oct 17, 2010 7:38 pm

I thought this was a pretty obvious joke. Not very funny, but I look forward to seeing this develop.

Also, that is definitely Vegeta's side talking.
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Post by bkev » Sun Oct 17, 2010 8:04 pm

I don't see why you guys don't enjoy it. I think it's a fun change of pace... and the art style's unique, if a bit unpolished.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Big Momma » Sun Oct 17, 2010 10:05 pm

bkev wrote:I don't see why you guys don't enjoy it. I think it's a fun change of pace... and the art style's unique, if a bit unpolished.
This.

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Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Mon Oct 18, 2010 3:48 am

bkev wrote:I don't see why you guys don't enjoy it. I think it's a fun change of pace... and the art style's unique, if a bit unpolished.
The only character that I have a problem with, is Videl. The artist just can't seem to get her right.

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Post by SHINOBI-03 » Mon Oct 18, 2010 4:47 am

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Afr0Blu3 » Mon Oct 18, 2010 12:47 pm

I'll be honest, I'm not enjoying the current side-story. The art style, though different, just doesn;t sit right with me, and the writers can't decide what to do with Vegito. He seems o be overly Goku or overly Vegeta, switching back and forth rather than being a combination of the two personalities.

OK, the tournament stuff isn't highly original but it is holding some of my interest - I mainly like the fan comic for the artwork and I'm not getting that right now

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Scarz » Mon Oct 18, 2010 3:26 pm

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I just know if I was assigned to do this page I would have drawn Videl in leopard tights, bending in places you didn't even know she could.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by nathantheguitarist » Mon Oct 18, 2010 3:49 pm

Her legs are too long... She really does look like Luffy, but with boobs and a bob-cut.
Scarz wrote:I just know if I was assigned to do this page I would have drawn Videl in leopard tights, bending in places you didn't even know she could.
But then it wouldn't be in continuity with the other pages. :P

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dbgtFO » Mon Oct 18, 2010 4:19 pm

Scarz wrote: I just know if I was assigned to do this page I would have drawn Videl in leopard tights, bending in places you didn't even know she could.
... Another reason for hating Pof? :lol: JK!
I think he(or should I write 'she'?) drew Videl better in these few panels, that he did on that awful page 298.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Godo » Mon Oct 18, 2010 6:17 pm

nathantheguitarist wrote:Her legs are too long... She really does look like Luffy, but with boobs and a bob-cut.
Yeah, like a female Luffy. Her name would be: "Luffa". Yep.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by JJ94 » Mon Oct 18, 2010 9:38 pm

Afr0Blu3 wrote:I'll be honest, I'm not enjoying the current side-story. The art style, though different, just doesn;t sit right with me, and the writers can't decide what to do with Vegito. He seems o be overly Goku or overly Vegeta, switching back and forth rather than being a combination of the two personalities.

OK, the tournament stuff isn't highly original but it is holding some of my interest - I mainly like the fan comic for the artwork and I'm not getting that right now
I feel the same way.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dayspring » Tue Oct 19, 2010 10:18 pm

I really can't figure out why everybody has problems with his view of Videl. This story takes place around the time of this universe's 784 at the earliest...meaning when Videl looked like a Luffy with boobs and bob-cut. PoF's getting annoyed with this criticism and I don't blame him; he snipped the headshot of her from the days of 784 and his bob-cut is spot-on.


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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by nathantheguitarist » Wed Oct 20, 2010 12:39 am

She's supposed to be short though, isn't she? :|
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Wed Oct 20, 2010 12:42 am

nathantheguitarist wrote:She's supposed to be short though, isn't she? :|
Yeah, and not be incredibly lanky aswell

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