Fan Manga

LaRésistance · Post by **LaRésistance** » Tue Aug 02, 2005 10:29 am

Gamingdevil wrote: (not really sure about what the alien says, I'm not sure what "il ne serait pas prudent de" means )

(not sure what "enfait" means with the second Goku)

"Il ne serait pas prudent de" can be translated into: "it wouldn't be wise to". As for "en fait", it can be translated into: "actually".

Gamingdevil · Post by **Gamingdevil** » Tue Aug 02, 2005 10:32 am

Thanks, so that makes:

Vegeta: That's out of the question, I'm not your creation!!
Goku: Vegeta is right, we'll never go with you!

Alien: No, no...it wouldn't be very wise to attack us... Let us show you.

Trunks: What the...

Krillin: Oh my god! The mountains!!

And the other one is correct, isn't it?

LaRésistance · Post by **LaRésistance** » Tue Aug 02, 2005 11:09 am

Yeah, it's correct.

Metrite · Post by **Metrite** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 3:18 am

It's been a few days, is somebody going to translate the next few pages soon?

Gamingdevil · Post by **Gamingdevil** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 4:35 am

Oh what the hell:

p9

Narator: Chaptre 2: The Trials
Narator: Goku and Vegeta are heading towards the planet of the Protoss.
Narator: Protossia
Alien 1: Bring them to the Hall of Trials!
Alien 2: Ok!
Alien: Go stand over there!
Goku: In this thing?
Goku: Wow, it's like Instantanious Movement!
Alien: Follow me!
Goku: We're coming!!

p10

Vegeta: Come on! Pass on to the action!
Alien: First of all we will test you, after that, if you succeed, we will start cloning you on large scale so that we can have an army worthy of that name.
Vegeta: They don't know that I am an army all by myself!
Alien: The robots should be useless against you. Well then...
Goku: Look out! I sense large powers!
Goku: Unbelievable!!
Alien: We have recreated the Saiyans, but we need pure genes to have thousands of them.
Vegeta: Bring it on!

Metrite · Post by **Metrite** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 5:58 am

Gamingdevil wrote:Oh what the hell:

p9
Narator: Chapter 2: The Trials
Narator: Goku and Vegeta are heading towards the planet of the Protoss.
Narator: Protossia
Alien 1: Bring them to the Hall of Trials!
Alien 2: Ok!
Alien: Go stand over there!
Goku: In this thing?
Goku: Wow, it's like Instantaneous Movement!
Alien: Follow me!
Goku: We're coming!!
p10
Vegeta: Come on! Pass on to the action!
Alien: First of all we will test you, after that, if you succeed, we will start cloning you on large scale so that we can have an army worthy of that name.
Vegeta: They don't know that I am an army all by myself!
Alien: The robots should be useless against you. Well then...
Goku: Look out! I sense large powers!
Goku: Unbelievable!!
Alien: We have recreated the Saiyans, but we need pure genes to have thousands of them.
Vegeta:[insert translation of untranslated line here]
Vegeta: Bring it on!

*Respells a couple of words correctly and points out an untranslated line in the quote*

Now the race in on to see who translates the line of Vegeta's that was missed there and then the next two pages which should be quite easy considering there's only about three short lines in all on them.

Gamingdevil · Post by **Gamingdevil** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 8:01 am

Metrite wrote:
Gamingdevil wrote:Oh what the hell:

p9
Narator: Chapter 2: The Trials
Narator: Goku and Vegeta are heading towards the planet of the Protoss.
Narator: Protossia
Alien 1: Bring them to the Hall of Trials!
Alien 2: Ok!
Alien: Go stand over there!
Goku: In this thing?
Goku: Wow, it's like Instantaneous Movement!
Alien: Follow me!
Goku: We're coming!!
p10
Vegeta: Come on! Pass on to the action!
Alien: First of all we will test you, after that, if you succeed, we will start cloning you on large scale so that we can have an army worthy of that name.
Vegeta: They don't know that I am an army all by myself!
Alien: The robots should be useless against you. Well then...
Goku: Look out! I sense large powers!
Goku: Unbelievable!!
Alien: We have recreated the Saiyans, but we need pure genes to have thousands of them.
Vegeta: He takes us for products useful only for battle! He will pay for that! Let's get them Kakarot!
Vegeta: Bring it on!
*Respells a couple of words correctly and points out an untranslated line in the quote*

Now the race in on to see who translates the line of Vegeta's that was missed there and then the next two pages which should be quite easy considering there's only about three short lines in all on them.

Sorry about the "Chaptre" by the way, it's because Chapter is Chapitre in French

p 11

Goku: Woah! They didn't miss our cousins*!!
Goku: Anyway...!
Goku: It has begun!!

*This should be right, but it just sounds so weird, can anyone second this?

p 12

Goku: I see...! You are very tough.

There you go, just as you asked, with a few uncertainties...

Xyex · Post by **Xyex** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 8:22 am

Bejiita wrote:
Holken wrote:it is true that normally they are super Saiyajin, but The story is not of me
It was a fan-fiction which I illustrated.
I see, so the manga is based on a Fan Fic written by someone else.

I'd love to find someone willing to make a Fanmanga out of one of my Fanfics. (Namely either Of Angels and Demons or my AH series.

)

Bejiita · Post by **Bejiita** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 9:39 am

Thumbs up for those translations, it's nice to read this comic in English.

I've just put up page 14 of my manga on the 1st page of this thread, it's the last of the 1st chapter, but there's is more to come.

Xyex, loads of Fan mangas sometimes are based on Fan Fics written by someone else, I chose to just create my own storyline, that way if it fails I've got myself to blame, and if it's a success, then, I've got myself to be proud of.

If I was to do a manga based on a Fan Fic it'd probably have to be about the early story with Vegeta as a bad guy and Frieza still being around, but I wouldn't really devote myself to that, one reason is if I want to stop I can just quit doing it.

Anyway, hope you like the last page.

askani son · Post by **askani son** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 10:14 am

Nice, Bejita! It made me wonder, "Trunks, with a warning or a vengance?"

Gamingdevil · Post by **Gamingdevil** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 10:46 am

askani son wrote:Nice, Bejita! It made me wonder, "Trunks, with a warning or a vengance?"

Nice indeed, great plot twist and your drawing keeps improving

and it was already very good to begin with

Holken · Post by **Holken** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 10:54 am

still thank for the translation!

Gamingdevil wrote:* I can only asume he means Kakarot here, but why would he say "Hit us Kakarot"?

Végéta wants to say: "battons nous contre eux Kakarot!"="Let us fight against them" you understand? (I don't know if I wrote it well)

it does not want to say that it want to fight against Kakarot

Bejiita: Wow, Trunks!

it is really well drawn!

Demi · Post by **Demi** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 11:03 am

Wow, Future Trunks! Can't wait to see what happens next. ^^

LaRésistance · Post by **LaRésistance** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 11:39 am

Oh... A Mirai Trunks-Goten fusion... Or a Mirai Trunks-Goten fight... I wonder where this story is going.

Bejiita · Post by **Bejiita** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 12:23 pm

I'm glad you all like where my story is going...vengance or a warning? You'll see soon, in the next chapter.

Nice of you to say my art is improving Gamingdevil and Holken, thank's for saying that Tunks is well drawn, since all these pictures are drawn off the top of my head, too many people noticed some of the pictures I used from the manga, so I try the off-by heart method, I did use the manga to draw the time machine though.

Mirai Trunks won't fuse with Goten though, their powers are too different.

Off topic here, does anyone watch Takeshi's Castle (MXC in the US)? Yesterday I saw two contestants dressed up like DB characters, one was dressed as(none other than) Goku, is was a woman dressed in the Kamesenin orange Gi(symbol and all) and she even had an accessory tail, the other contestant was a man dressed as Muten Roshi! He had a big shell on he's back and a turtle hat on, the woman also had this hat on too. Nice to see Dragonball in the real world a few times.

Sadly the woman slipped and plunged into the water, was quite funny though.

Also, I start work soon, so pages will probably less frequent(not like they are frequent anyway), but I won't just pack up and quit this manga...it's going somewhere.

Gamingdevil · Post by **Gamingdevil** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 2:34 pm

Holken wrote:still thank for the translation!

Gamingdevil wrote:* I can only asume he means Kakarot here, but why would he say "Hit us Kakarot"?
Végéta wants to say: "battons nous contre eux Kakarot!"="Let us fight against them" you understand? (I don't know if I wrote it well) it does not want to say that it want to fight against Kakarot

Bejiita: Wow, Trunks! it is really well drawn!

Ok I altered that, what about page 11? What's up with that? I thought "rater" was "to miss" as in "I missed my train"

Son Goku · Post by **Son Goku** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 4:39 pm

Will Future Trunks talk to the Trunks of the regular timeline?

Holken · Post by **Holken** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 4:41 pm

Gamingdevil wrote:Ok I altered that, what about page 11? What's up with that? I thought "rater" was "to miss" as in "I missed my train"

"rater" it is the opposite to succeed. ="I have missed my drawing" for example.
It is "They didn't miss them the cousins" I think.

Gamingdevil · Post by **Gamingdevil** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 5:09 pm

Erm, that makes even less sense

I propose we just wait for LaRésistance to arrive

LaRésistance · Post by **LaRésistance** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 5:34 pm

How can I help, what's the problem?