Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

[Maphisto86]

Yeah, I'd imagine the impact is somewhat dulled by the fact that DBM-Vegetto was forced to ascend to that stage to overcome freakin' Broly.

Oh, I didn't know that. That sucks Dragon Balls.

I still think Vegetto was just putting on a show for the crowd.

[dbgtFO]

Yeah, I'd imagine the impact is somewhat dulled by the fact that DBM-Vegetto was forced to ascend to that stage to overcome freakin' Broly.

Oh, I didn't know that. That sucks Dragon Balls.

I still think Vegetto was just putting on a show for the crowd.

Nah, he could do the same thing only using his normal form.

[Rocketman]

I still think Vegetto was just putting on a show for the crowd. :wink: :P

Not quite good enough.

Needs to be more like this, where I can hear Broly's terrified scream as his neck slowly rips open.

[Maphisto86]

I still think Vegetto was just putting on a show for the crowd.

Not quite good enough.

Needs to be more like this, where I can hear Broly's terrified scream as his neck slowly rips open.

*snicker* Hopefully without the need for a quick time event.

[Scarz]

What could have been.

[Great Saiyaman I]

I think this might have been funnier if it weren't what we thought was going to happen.

[rereboy]

I think this might have been funnier if it weren't what we thought was going to happen.

This minicomic will show pretty well what most likely would have happened if they had gone with this route, or something very similar to it. This way, the reader doesn`t miss anything.

Btw, I`ve updated my chart to include my predictions on the winners of the fights: http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd4/ ... chart2.jpg

[rereboy]

The new mini comic page isn`t showing like it was supposed to at the moment in the site. Some kind of glitch. But, its already online.

Here it is:

[Piccolo Daimao]

Why do those two Gotenks look sort of...edited on?

[dbgtFO]

Some stuff I noted about this page:
1. Panel 13 Vegeta was copy pasted from panel 5.
2. Goten is visible amongst universe 16 Gohan in panel 3, even though him being there and at the same time being fused with Trunks is impossible. An honest mistake.
3. The shading of Fat & Skinny Gotenks(panel 2 & 4), they just look out of place compared to the rest.
4. Skinny Gotenks is copy pasted from previous page on to 2 of the panels on this page.
5. The art style of panels 7,8,9 & 10 is very different compared to the rest(and also looks worse).

It actually looks like no real effort was put in to create this page, since most of the stuff is copy pasted from previous material, and the original material of this page lacks in quality compared to the rest.
It's not that I completely hate it, I just didn't like, that there was this much copy paste.

But whatever it's Christmas in a week, so I can live with it..

[Godo]

"Montage, Paint & script: Ouv" says it all.

[rereboy]

Why do those two Gotenks look sort of...edited on?

Its pretty obvious that this mini comic is little more than an montage. But, having said that, it works pretty nicely.

Its lazy but since its only a minicomic, who cares? All that matters is that it contains a gag or two, since that is the point of the minicomics.

[Scarz]

I'm willing to excuse the laziness of this comic because A) It's Christmas time and B) Vegeta's lines are pretty damn funny.

[Piccolo Daimaoh]

Yeah, the art is mostly spectacular (except in some of the specials), so I'm not bothered about it aswell.

[rereboy]

Salagir comments on this page:

"This copy-past plus edits was a suggested scenario by Ouv on this fight.
As we are late, we show it to you, instead of showing nothing.

Warning! The character in panel 3 is NOT Son Goten, this is NOT a mistake on our part! He is in fact, er... the twin... evil twin... from the future... of universe 38. Yes. That. Totally as we planed."

"Sorry, all my fault. I've programmed the update to happen on the 27th instead of 17th. Baka."

[Scarz]

Warning! The character in panel 3 is NOT Son Goten, this is NOT a mistake on our part! He is in fact, er... the twin... evil twin... from the future... of universe 38. Yes. That. Totally as we planed."

If that was his evil twin then where's his goatee, huh?

[rereboy]

Warning! The character in panel 3 is NOT Son Goten, this is NOT a mistake on our part! He is in fact, er... the twin... evil twin... from the future... of universe 38. Yes. That. Totally as we planed."

If that was his evil twin then where's his goatee, huh?

In his privats.

[rereboy]

[Scarz]

...Well that's one way to end a match.

[Kaboom]

I hope "I won't flea" is a cat-related joke, and not a typo.