The Prince Of Orange Star

[Zionist]

I've started up a New Fan Fic with once again, Gohan as the main character.


Brief Summary: Gohan has grown tired of being pampered and looked over at every waking second. It was by his terms that he go out and experience being a real kid. Not knowing anyone his own age he thought School would be the perfect way to experience being a kid. 3 years Post Cell Games because I hate Gohan's Spikey hair, I'm too much of a fan boy for his Epic Goku Haircut.

This idea popped into my head during the week and it bothered me a bit at work and through me off at times. So since today is a Holiday, New Year's Eve ftw, I decided to write this on down last night and post it up.

So if you are interested in the least and wouldn't mind, please go and check this story out.

The Prince Of Orange Star: Chapter 1 - Starblind <--- Click for story

[fogdark]

Cool idea, I would like to see how it turns out, keep at it...

[Great Saiyaman I]

It's nice. I like it having a fresh view on him going to school, instead of the exact same as the show that most fics have. A couple grammar mistakes kinda took me out of the experience though, like periods where there should be question marks. I'm mostly just nitpicking, I look forward to future chapters.

[Zionist]

Bump for Chapter 8?

Well...I guess. w/e

Chapter 2: Kamehameha - Gohan spills some secrets.
Chapter 3: Sacred Lie - Gohan shows off in Gym
Chapter 4: Even Flow - Gohan unknowingly gets to choose his 4th class, guess who else is in the class?
Chapter 5: Stranger In A Strange Land - Paparazzi troubles
Chapter 6: I'm Not An Angel - Videl finds herself in some trouble at a Bank Robbery
Chapter 7: Better Sorry Than Safe - Not feeling well about how everyone is treating him, Gohan acts out
Chapter 8: Whisper A Prayer For The Dying - Gohan learns a lesson in taking what you desire

:/