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by dbgtFO » Wed Mar 30, 2011 2:57 pm
Godo wrote:This page looks sloppy for some kind of reason. Check Bra's arms out in the last panel. Urgh.
I personally feel the latest pages have been subpar.
After the Cell special the quality has dropped somewhat IMO.
There's something with the lines that I don't like, but I can't really put my finger on what it is...
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by Piccolo Daimao » Wed Mar 30, 2011 3:47 pm
Oh, she mad now!
Holden Caulfield in [b][i]The Catcher in the Rye[/i][/b] wrote:I hope to hell when I do die somebody has sense enough to just dump me in the river or something. Anything except sticking me in a goddam cemetery. People coming and putting a bunch of flowers on your stomach on Sunday, and all that crap. Who wants flowers when you're dead? Nobody.
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by rereboy » Wed Mar 30, 2011 4:05 pm
dbgtFO wrote:Godo wrote:This page looks sloppy for some kind of reason. Check Bra's arms out in the last panel. Urgh.
I personally feel the latest pages have been subpar.
After the Cell special the quality has dropped somewhat IMO.
There's something with the lines that I don't like, but I can't really put my finger on what it is...
lol, you are demanding

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I'm not saying that you are wrong, I'm just saying that the art is still very good.
Personally, I believe that some pages are not as good as others simply because Gogeta Jr does some of them faster than others. After all, this is done on free time.
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by StarRot » Wed Mar 30, 2011 4:05 pm
No, Zangya, nooo ...!
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by dbgtFO » Wed Mar 30, 2011 4:25 pm
rereboy wrote:dbgtFO wrote:Godo wrote:This page looks sloppy for some kind of reason. Check Bra's arms out in the last panel. Urgh.
I personally feel the latest pages have been subpar.
After the Cell special the quality has dropped somewhat IMO.
There's something with the lines that I don't like, but I can't really put my finger on what it is...
lol, you are demanding

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I'm not saying that you are wrong, I'm just saying that the art is still very good.
Personally, I believe that some pages are not as good as others simply because Gogeta Jr does some of them faster than others. After all, this is done on free time.
No not really, I was just stating my opinion on the current artwork.
I'm not saying that I will stop reading or demand that he draws as he always did, I'm simply stating that it doesn't look as good as it used to in my opinion.
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by Scarz » Wed Mar 30, 2011 5:16 pm
rereboy wrote:She is the daughter of Vegetto and she has already proven when she fought in space agaisnt Buu that her SSJ is pretty much as strong as Mystic Gohan. And her SSJ2 completely surpasses Mystic Gohan (since her blast completely beat Mystic Gohan, who was in perfect shape before her blast, unlike Vegetto).
So... Unless 18 Goku was able to completely surpass Mystic Gohan, why wouldn't she be stronger than 18 Goku and 18 Vegeta?
Was Gohan "Mystic" when he was fighting Buu out in space? I thought He was just... Gohan.
U18 Goku SSJ3 > Bra SSJ2
U18 Everyone Else < Bra SSJ2
At least that's the way I see it.
Godo wrote:This page looks sloppy for some kind of reason. Check Bra's arms out in the last panel. Urgh.
Man, I got this feeling that you guys are going to be brutal when my special chapter goes up.
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by rereboy » Wed Mar 30, 2011 5:18 pm
Yeah, I even agreed with you on these current pages

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But it really depends on the page... Page 370 is looking pretty darn good to me, as you'll see.
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by StarRot » Wed Mar 30, 2011 5:30 pm
Scarz wrote:Man, I got this feeling that you guys are going to be brutal when my special chapter goes up.
You're doing a special chapter? I'm looking forward to it, I like your art.
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by rereboy » Wed Mar 30, 2011 5:36 pm
Scarz wrote:
Was Gohan "Mystic" when he was fighting Buu out in space? I thought He was just... Gohan.
Well, I think he is always "mystic", as in he has his power unlocked and he doesn't need to turn SSJ nor can he turn SSJ.
All he does is increase and decrease his power level normally to his maximum and minimum (and all in between).
Since there would be no reason for him to hold back fighting Buu in space, I believe he was going all out.
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Man, I got this feeling that you guys are going to be brutal when my special chapter goes up.
I like your art, from the little that I've seen. I'm sure we will all like it.
(Especially if you add boobs to it or in an alternate version of the special)
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by JJ94 » Wed Mar 30, 2011 6:28 pm
dbgtFO wrote:Godo wrote:This page looks sloppy for some kind of reason. Check Bra's arms out in the last panel. Urgh.
I personally feel the latest pages have been subpar.
After the Cell special the quality has dropped somewhat IMO.
There's something with the lines that I don't like, but I can't really put my finger on what it is...
I believe that Gogeta jr. is working too hard on the Amilova thing so he is not drawing perfectly for DBM
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by Ussj Future Trunks » Thu Mar 31, 2011 1:15 am
"...She stronger than us too?"
I'm sorry, but I'm calling BULLSHIT!
We've known for a long time Bra is on Ultimate Gohan and Base Vegetto's tier. And Goku didn't actually say Bra is stronger than him.
Simian upstart...none surpass me. No one even comes close! BURN THIS INTO YOUR MIND! I am emperor of the universe. The likes of you are only fit to grovel at my feet. Or better still...to be crushed...LIKE AN INSECT AT THE WHIM OF YOUR MASTER!
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by LeprikanGT » Thu Mar 31, 2011 12:04 pm
This may just be me being 'girls arent strong' although I don't mind then [#18 was pretty cool] but I feel like this is just ludicrous even entertaining the idea that Bra is on the level that they are playing her off as. So far all we have seen her do is explode with some rage and throw a little girly hissy fit.
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by rereboy » Thu Mar 31, 2011 12:23 pm
LeprikanGT wrote:So far all we have seen her do is explode with some rage and throw a little girly hissy fit.
She put Mystic Gohan in a pretty bad shape with a single Ki blast in her SSJ2 that wasn't even aimed at him. And Gohan wasn't tired or injured.
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by JulieYBM » Thu Mar 31, 2011 12:47 pm
LeprikanGT wrote:So far all we have seen her do is explode with some rage and throw a little girly hissy fit.
As opposed to everyone else's 'manly hissy fits'...?
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by Pantalones » Thu Mar 31, 2011 1:11 pm
Well, I think he is always "mystic", as in he has his power unlocked and he doesn't need to turn SSJ nor can he turn SSJ.
All he does is increase and decrease his power level normally to his maximum and minimum (and all in between).
Since there would be no reason for him to hold back fighting Buu in space, I believe he was going all out.
Well, the first time he used the "mystic" power-up, the old Kaioshin told him to try and go Super Saiyan. Gohan did the usual "getting ready for Super Saiyan" powering-up, but instead of going all glowy-golden-hair like usual, he just powered up to his maximum without much of a physical change (besides the "eyes drawn differently" thing.)
So I think the power-up still needs to be activated like a Super Saiyan transformation even though he doesn't use actual Super Saiyan anymore; it's something different than just suppressing and un-suppressing your power depending on whether you're fighting at the moment or not.
But yeah, Gohan would have no reason to hold back super-transformations against somebody like Buu. Maybe if this was happening in the arena and he was afraid of getting disqualified or something, but not way out in the middle of nowhere in space.
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by Godo » Thu Mar 31, 2011 2:14 pm
Scarz wrote:
Man, I got this feeling that you guys are going to be brutal when my special chapter goes up.
Sorry, didn't mean to be brutal.
I just thought that the last panel looked very cartoony. And it's all about consistency, it always bugs me when the author alternates in art style.
It seems "hurried". The other panels look good, though.
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by Snail » Thu Mar 31, 2011 2:42 pm
I don't know if anyone has made mention, but darn it would have been cool to see a fused Goku/Gohan.
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by rereboy » Thu Mar 31, 2011 3:19 pm
Pantalones wrote:Well, I think he is always "mystic", as in he has his power unlocked and he doesn't need to turn SSJ nor can he turn SSJ.
All he does is increase and decrease his power level normally to his maximum and minimum (and all in between).
Since there would be no reason for him to hold back fighting Buu in space, I believe he was going all out.
Well, the first time he used the "mystic" power-up, the old Kaioshin told him to try and go Super Saiyan. Gohan did the usual "getting ready for Super Saiyan" powering-up, but instead of going all glowy-golden-hair like usual, he just powered up to his maximum without much of a physical change (besides the "eyes drawn differently" thing.)
So I think the power-up still needs to be activated like a Super Saiyan transformation even though he doesn't use actual Super Saiyan anymore; it's something different than just suppressing and un-suppressing your power depending on whether you're fighting at the moment or not.
But yeah, Gohan would have no reason to hold back super-transformations against somebody like Buu. Maybe if this was happening in the arena and he was afraid of getting disqualified or something, but not way out in the middle of nowhere in space.
Sure, but in practical terms, it looks no different than any fighter raising his or hers power level.
Snail wrote:I don't know if anyone has made mention, but darn it would have been cool to see a fused Goku/Gohan.
And some Gokan / Chichi / Videl action.
Yeeeewww...
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by Jaruka » Thu Mar 31, 2011 6:40 pm
Zangya looks scared but... wait... There are no coward in Bojack gang!
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by CatouttaHell » Thu Mar 31, 2011 9:52 pm
Yet more Universe 16 wanking.
Let's pray that this great main story that was mentioned isn't going to wind up being Vegetto and Bura powering up and beating up some main villain with 5 pages in between everything that happens showing all of the other universes remarking how cool and all-powerful they are.
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