DragonBall Z Abridged

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Re: DragonBall Z Abridged

Post by SolarBlade52 » Thu Jun 02, 2011 3:49 pm

Did Vegeta yell "Mine mine mine!" in reference to the seagulls from Finding Nemo? XD

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Post by Jackal puFF » Thu Jun 02, 2011 6:29 pm

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Eire wrote:I guess it's from this movie
Ah okay. Makes sense that I didn't get it, haven't seen Jurassic Park in years.
Yeah I didn't get it right away either.. I was like oh.. Does anyone else find it funny that "Captain" sounds a lot like "Kitten" when Jeice says it? Lol

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Re: DragonBall Z Abridged

Post by Codarik » Thu Jun 02, 2011 6:44 pm

I'm not sure who the editor is but I think it would be really cool if they went back to episodes 1-10 and re-edit them with Dragon Box footage.

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Re: DragonBall Z Abridged

Post by BluezaBladeNZ » Thu Jun 02, 2011 6:54 pm

Codarik wrote:I'm not sure who the editor is but I think it would be really cool if they went back to episodes 1-10 and re-edit them with Dragon Box footage.
I did actually plan to do it myself months ago since I started using After Effects and Premiere, but had little time to do it due to course. I think the only thing I ever got done was the Nappafinger commercial.

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Re: DragonBall Z Abridged

Post by Eire » Fri Jun 03, 2011 2:30 am

SolarBlade52 wrote:Did Vegeta yell "Mine mine mine!" in reference to the seagulls from Finding Nemo? XD
Or to Ratcliffe from Pocahontas cartoon?
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Post by Kingdom Heartless » Fri Jun 03, 2011 9:40 am

Considering how much work must go into editing an episode, I really don't think it would be worth it.
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Re: DragonBall Z Abridged

Post by Rob » Thu Jun 23, 2011 4:13 pm

One thing that's got me curious is how Guru - sorry, Super Kami Guru - is going to be handled regarding his initial death and revival. That's got to be an interesting writing challenge.

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Re: DragonBall Z Abridged

Post by Budogenkai » Fri Jun 24, 2011 1:09 am

Rob wrote:One thing that's got me curious is how Guru - sorry, Super Kami Guru - is going to be handled regarding his initial death and revival. That's got to be an interesting writing challenge.
I just want to hear more Guru yelling "NAIL" at the top of his lungs. :lol:
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Re: DragonBall Z Abridged

Post by GotenDaisuki » Fri Jun 24, 2011 1:31 am

Budogenkai wrote:I just want to hear more Guru yelling "NAIL" at the top of his lungs. :lol:
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Re: DragonBall Z Abridged

Post by Satan-Sama » Tue Jun 28, 2011 5:12 pm

I still gotta watch episodes 21-23 but I gotta say episode 20 was simply a masterpiece. It really appealed to being a huge Dragon Ball fan as well as a huge Wrestling fan, simply brilliant. The line that really stood out to me (that I'm sure only a few would actually get) was "Silly Vegeta... The only thing Recoome sells is merchandise!" When Vegeta asked how he got up from that hit so easily. Other things really stood out such as Goku coming out to Jimmy Hart's "Real American," Team Three Star being referred to as a "stable," Vegeta saying "suck it, jabroni," Burter and Jeice's commentary and just Recoome's promo in general. Excellent.
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Post by KaiserNeko » Tue Jun 28, 2011 6:08 pm

Satan-Sama wrote:I still gotta watch episodes 21-23 but I gotta say episode 20 was simply a masterpiece. It really appealed to being a huge Dragon Ball fan as well as a huge Wrestling fan, simply brilliant. The line that really stood out to me (that I'm sure only a few would actually get) was "Silly Vegeta... The only thing Recoome sells is merchandise!" When Vegeta asked how he got up from that hit so easily. Other things really stood out such as Goku coming out to Jimmy Hart's "Real American," Team Three Star being referred to as a "stable," Vegeta saying "suck it, jabroni," Burter and Jeice's commentary and just Recoome's promo in general. Excellent.
Y'know, thank you. It's really nice to see someone who really enjoyed what that episode was all about. It's been a mixed bag with fans because of the theme and, as someone who's not even a wrestling fan (the other two writers, Takahata101 and Lanipator being the real wrestling nuts), I'm always wondering how effective it really was.
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Post by jjgp1112 » Tue Jun 28, 2011 6:26 pm

I too am a wrestling fan and I thought all of the references and general atmosphere were spot-on.
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Post by .:PoetikaL:. » Tue Jun 28, 2011 8:01 pm

It's funny, around the time ep. 20 was released I haven't watched wrestling in years (and by years I mean 6-7 years) and I knew every reference that was made in that episode. I don't think it was this episode that has done so, but as of late I've been slowly getting back into wrestling, even as far as going to NYC with my one friend and seeing NJPW (New Japan Pro Wrestling) live since it was the promotion's first time entering the U.S.

Back OT: I found it to be quite hilarious, loving the commentary of Burter and Jeice. :D
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Re: DragonBall Z Abridged

Post by batistabus » Wed Jun 29, 2011 12:20 am

I think wrestling is just plain stupid, but I can appreciate the general comedy, deliveries, and top-notch editing.

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Post by Attitudefan » Wed Jun 29, 2011 2:22 am

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Satan-Sama wrote:I still gotta watch episodes 21-23 but I gotta say episode 20 was simply a masterpiece. It really appealed to being a huge Dragon Ball fan as well as a huge Wrestling fan, simply brilliant. The line that really stood out to me (that I'm sure only a few would actually get) was "Silly Vegeta... The only thing Recoome sells is merchandise!" When Vegeta asked how he got up from that hit so easily. Other things really stood out such as Goku coming out to Jimmy Hart's "Real American," Team Three Star being referred to as a "stable," Vegeta saying "suck it, jabroni," Burter and Jeice's commentary and just Recoome's promo in general. Excellent.
Y'know, thank you. It's really nice to see someone who really enjoyed what that episode was all about. It's been a mixed bag with fans because of the theme and, as someone who's not even a wrestling fan (the other two writers, Takahata101 and Lanipator being the real wrestling nuts), I'm always wondering how effective it really was.
That was one of THE best episodes out there! "Silly Vegeta... The only thing Recoome sells is merchandise!" was brilliant! Brilliant!
The following episode was not to my liking as much, the gags just seemed "off", in general it was good. I love how Vegeta represented the "haters" per se, and everyone else played along. The chemistry between the characters were great and the writing and gags were above excellent! MORE I say! More :lol:
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Re: DragonBall Z Abridged

Post by caejones » Wed Jun 29, 2011 6:24 am

Oh, it hurts so much going from TFS's wrestler Recoom back to FUNi's retard Recoom.

I keep forgetting that Freeza had henchmen still in the ship by the time the Ginyu Force arrived. It always seemed like Vegeta and the Namekians wiped them all out pretty quickly.
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Re: DragonBall Z Abridged

Post by Fionordequester » Wed Jun 29, 2011 11:43 pm

You know KaiserNeko, I was never even a wrestling fan, and I STILL loved the wrestling Episode. I loved the general atmosphere present in that Episode, I really liked the music (although I really wished you had used Hell's Bells for Vegeta's theme), I thought the lines were hilarious, all in all, I thought it was just a really fun Episode. Maybe it wasn't "Ha, Ha" good like other Episodes are (although it did have funny moments to), but it was still really entertaining. I actually sort of wish you had kept it up until Recoome had been defeated, but, I guess that's just me.

The Episode after that was kind of meh in comparison, both because it was extremely short, and because a lot of the jokes felt really forced (the way Goku's lines about "Grand Slams" were delivered felt unnatural, the Jeice and Burter bit went on for too long, and Vegeta's comment about what Mass Effect "alignment" he's on felt really cheesy. It was like hearing all those corny, anochronistic jokes Vegeta and Frieza would make about being "really good photographers" and how their opponents were "like a pack of Boy Scout troops" all over again).
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Re: DragonBall Z Abridged

Post by Attitudefan » Thu Jun 30, 2011 12:03 am

The episode after was pretty brutal. It was my least favourite also, and everything said above is why. The jokes were stale....
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Re: DragonBall Z Abridged

Post by Attitudefan » Thu Jun 30, 2011 1:38 am

Best episode ever! The new one was absolutely on the ball everytime! I laughed for hours!

Okay, one thing. Kami's voice IS MUCH DIFFERENT... yeah, going to keep it that way or what?


Everything was fantastic! Vegeta's moments were the best mind you... :P
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Re: DragonBall Z Abridged

Post by KaiserNeko » Thu Jun 30, 2011 1:59 am

Attitudefan wrote:Best episode ever! The new one was absolutely on the ball everytime! I laughed for hours!

Okay, one thing. Kami's voice IS MUCH DIFFERENT... yeah, going to keep it that way or what?


Everything was fantastic! Vegeta's moments were the best mind you... :P
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