Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Any general discussion regarding fan-created works of the Dragon Ball franchise, including AMVs, fan-art, fan-fiction, etc.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by funrush » Mon Aug 29, 2011 3:06 pm

I for one would love to go to Planet Steak. :lol:

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Post by Piccolo Daimao » Mon Aug 29, 2011 3:34 pm

I don't particularly like the art here. Freeza's head looks too big in the fourth panel, almost comically so, and Zarbon and Dodoria's heads look too big and odd too.

On the other hand, Planet Steak sounds like some kind of fancy all-you-can-eat space version of Planet Hollywood. Which sounds good to me. :P
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TonyTheTiger » Mon Aug 29, 2011 3:47 pm

I'll be pissed if there isn't a "well done" joke.

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Post by dbgtFO » Mon Aug 29, 2011 3:48 pm

Piccolo Daimao wrote:I don't particularly like the art here. Freeza's head looks too big in the fourth panel, almost comically so, and Zarbon and Dodoria's heads look too big and odd too.
I for one don't like the fact that Zarbon's got 3 arms in the 5th panel. :P
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Post by Piccolo Daimao » Mon Aug 29, 2011 4:06 pm

dbgtFO wrote:I for one don't like the fact that Zarbon's got 3 arms in the 5th panel. :P
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Post by Kingdom Heartless » Mon Aug 29, 2011 9:54 pm

Hm, I wonder whether Harik's unit *giggle* will play any major role?
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Post by SRB2Unleashed » Wed Aug 31, 2011 3:13 pm

This page reminded of TFS' new episode for some reason.

Anyone knows when the next page is due?
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Post by TonyTheTiger » Wed Aug 31, 2011 4:07 pm

Lord Freeza can has slavegirl? :lol:

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Post by nathantheguitarist » Wed Aug 31, 2011 4:55 pm

TonyTheTiger wrote:Lord Freeza can has slavegirl? :lol:
No me.

(I wish they wouldn't be so obvious with that and just have Freeza ask if either Harik's or Baddack's team has the women.)
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Post by MCDaveG » Thu Sep 01, 2011 11:14 am

I don't understand why the creative duo isn't keeping the quality of DBM and let these people, who can't draw nice, doing this specials.
Not only most of those stories is worthless, but when I see the art...... THIS IS THE END.
And I don't wanna read it anymore. Are they ''canon'' to the main DBM?

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Post by bkev » Thu Sep 01, 2011 2:02 pm

I'm enjoying the art, but why do certain panels look, for lack of a better term, blurry? Look at panel 2 on the second most recent page, and 4 on the most.
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Post by Piccolo Daimao » Thu Sep 01, 2011 2:04 pm

I think the art's just flat-out bad.
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Post by Shoryuken » Thu Sep 01, 2011 3:06 pm

I'm shocked over how different Zarbon looks in the fourth panel (p.431) as opposed to the one in the sixth (p.430). Zarbon looks distorted on 430 whilst on 431 he is drawn somewhat normally. It's almost as if there's more than one person drawing each panels. To say the least this is one of the better drawn fan-chapters when compared to the recent Bojack chapter however confusing the current one is with it's art.
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Post by Piccolo Daimao » Thu Sep 01, 2011 4:37 pm

Shoryuken wrote:To say the least this is one of the better drawn fan-chapters when compared to the recent Bojack chapter however confusing the current one is with it's art.
I actually preferred the Bojack chapter's art to this one, because it was different and looked somewhat dark and edgy.
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Post by TrunksTrevelyan0064 » Fri Sep 02, 2011 4:54 am

Maybe this is not the right place to ask this (sorry for off-topicness), but I was wondering how people get their comic pages to look so clean like the Multiverse ones. I love making comics myself, but I'm a complete noob at Photoshop, so whatever I upload is generally low quality. Could anyone explain to me how to improve that?
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by KaiserNeko » Fri Sep 02, 2011 5:47 am

You know, the art here is MUCH better than in the last special, at least...
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TonyTheTiger » Fri Sep 02, 2011 2:19 pm

We have Bardock's wife's name! Is Hanasia vegetable wordplay?

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Post by TheDevilsCorpse » Fri Sep 02, 2011 2:36 pm

TonyTheTiger wrote:We have Bardock's wife's name! Is Hanasia vegetable wordplay?
Dunno. I can tell you that Google has told me its a company that makes beverages (aloe vera drinks, different kinds of tea, etc.). Not all that excited about their choice of name (since we haven't seen her design yet, if we even will), I think I'll just go back to my Bardock-Taanip fanon.
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