Any general discussion regarding fan-created works of the Dragon Ball franchise, including AMVs, fan-art, fan-fiction, etc.
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Einstein001
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by Einstein001 » Wed Sep 28, 2011 5:22 pm
For those who have only seen few pages, and already gave up hope with my project - I already uploaded 11 pages
I'm trying to upload one page per day, but I don't always have time. You know how it is.
Making one page is really long...
I'm still waiting for your opinions
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by Gonstead » Thu Oct 20, 2011 7:37 am
Pretty good and interesting, I'll be sure to stay on board.
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by Perfect » Thu Oct 20, 2011 11:12 pm
I'm nearly 100% sure Goku would effortlessly kill them all in a single hit. I imagine it'd be like Goku fighting the Ginyus in Hell in the anime filler. I'd also work on the artwork, because in all honesty, it looks like it was drawn with the maker in paint and the lines were etched out a little.
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by Einstein001 » Fri Oct 21, 2011 4:24 pm
hah, you guys have no idea how glad I am that someone have finally comment my fan manga. I don't care if it is a critic. I'll take everything!:)
Anyways - @Perfect I use a "fat" pen to draw, so it's more difficult. And a reason is simple - it's easier to get, and it's cheaper. I don't have too much money for equipment... I'm sorry.
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by Perfect » Fri Oct 21, 2011 7:09 pm
A pencil generally goes a long way and looks a lot better.
Fox666 wrote:It seems you have pissed a lot of people on this forum, and I am quite sure they would like to call you stupid and say that's the designated adjectives for you. But they don't do that because of there are rules in this community.
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by Einstein001 » Tue Oct 25, 2011 1:55 pm
Final page of first chapter on deviantart!
@Perfect
OK , I took your advice to heart (:D), and I've used normal pencol, but I don't think it looks better. Well I'm not the one who should judge.
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by Great Saiyaman I » Fri Oct 28, 2011 3:12 pm
I like it! Its a mindless little battle comic, but its still fun.
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by Hellspawn28 » Sun Oct 30, 2011 4:53 pm
Pretty good so far. The artwork is not too bad, at least it's not a total copy off of Toriyama's art style like most fan manga's try to do. Keep up the good work so far.
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by Einstein001 » Sun Oct 30, 2011 5:32 pm
Thank you very much guys! This really means a lot for me
And just to inform you - first page of second chapter is on deviantart.
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by Einstein001 » Sun Oct 28, 2012 5:40 pm
Hey everyone
I've decided to return and give it another try. There are already 29 pages.
And now I'm redrawing first few pages, because they were horrible(not that the new ones aren't xD).
Sooo I hope u'll enjoy it guys!
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by Gonstead » Sun Oct 28, 2012 6:18 pm
I actually forgot entriely about this comic, hehe.
Good to see it's come back.
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Mayuri Kurotsuchi wrote:"In this world, nothing perfect exists. It may be a cliche after all but it's the way things are. That's precisely why ordinary men pursue the concept of perfection, it's infatuation. But ultimately I have to ask myself "What is the true meaning of being perfect?" and the answer I came up with was nothing. Not one thing. The truth of the matter is I despise perfection! If something is truly perfect, that's IT! The bottom line becomes there is no room for imagination! No space for intelligence or ability or improvement! Do you understand? To men of science like us, perfection is a dead end, a condition of hopelessness. Always strive to be better than anything that came before you but not perfect! Scientist's agonize over the attempt to achieve perfection! That's the kind of creatures we are! We take joy in trying to exceed our grasp, in trying to reach for something that in the end, we have to admit may in fact be unreachable!"
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by Einstein001 » Mon Mar 04, 2013 9:42 am
Ok guys. I know this thread just dissapeared, not just because I didn't update it.
Anyways - I just wanted to inform you guys that i'm still uploading new pages.
My next big update (which will be the last one) is on it's way somewhere in this week. The ultimate battle is almost over!
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by Saiga » Mon Mar 04, 2013 10:00 am
It's first time seeing this fan comic, so I just did a binge of the 4 chapters so far. I like it.
I thought it was neat having Goku reference Piccolo when he saw Luffy's abilities, by the way.
Looking forward to seeing how it plays out from here.
I'm re-watching Dragon Ball GT in full on
my blog. Check it out if you're interested in my thoughts on the series as I watch through it!
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by Einstein001 » Thu Mar 07, 2013 11:18 pm
aaaand it's finished. Last page of my work is uploaded on deviantart. ~
I hope you guys'll enjoy it.
Many thanks to everyone for all the comments and views!
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