Fan Works Explosion

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Snail » Thu Oct 20, 2011 9:38 pm

Depends on what you're going for.

Are you trying to mimic Akira Toriyama's style to the 'T'?

Are you trying to create your own rendition to the style?

Either way,

Not a big deal with this image, however you should work on pinpointing your light source in order to implement shade upon the right areas, as tiny sections of this particular image is a little ambiguous. Furthermore, work on the positioning of the subject within the frame. For instance, by cropping out the hands of the subject, the image is now awkward in it's presentation, and it implies that you withhold a certain inability or aversion in your skill.


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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Li'l Lemmy » Mon Nov 07, 2011 9:39 pm

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Goten: "Do you mean me?"

A minor doodle of my favorite character. It's cute for a sketch, so I figured I'm share. ;p


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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Drabaz » Tue Nov 08, 2011 4:28 pm

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I like this a lot Lemmy! And it's just a doodle? Bravo.
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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Li'l Lemmy » Fri Nov 11, 2011 3:51 pm

Thank you for your kind comment. ^_^

I like this doodle a lot more, actually.

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Super-Duper World Champion Black Belt Smile Master. ;p


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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Scarz » Fri Nov 11, 2011 11:41 pm

Li'l Lemmy wrote:Thank you for your kind comment. ^_^

I like this doodle a lot more, actually.

[SNIP]

Super-Duper World Champion Black Belt Smile Master. ;p


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Honestly, he looks so adorable here. Good job!

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Shiyonasan » Sat Nov 12, 2011 12:39 am

Li'l Lemmy wrote:Super-Duper World Champion Black Belt Smile Master. ;p
A smile that definitely can't be beaten. ;P

Good job on both of your doodles! I really like both of them.

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by StarRot » Sat Nov 12, 2011 7:10 pm

I like both of them, Lemmy.
Great work.

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Li'l Lemmy » Sat Nov 12, 2011 8:24 pm

Scarz wrote:Honestly, he looks so adorable here. Good job!
It really is the better of the two. I like the first one, but the second is unquestionably "Goten". The facial features are unintentionally perfect.

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Shiyonasan wrote:A smile that definitely can't be beaten. ;P

Good job on both of your doodles! I really like both of them.
Truly, his smile is enduring. 'Tis a Son family trait.

A new Goten avatar. Another image I don't recognize. You bastard. ;p
StarRot wrote:I like both of them, Lemmy.
Great work.
Coming from you in particular, it is appreciated.

Perhaps I'll throw up something else before the day is out. The second image might even deserve a coloring.

In the meantime, who's next? ^_^


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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Li'l Lemmy » Sun Nov 13, 2011 5:47 pm

More Goten practice. A few headshots.

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Yeah, I know. Super Saiyan stuff. Like there's any shortage of SSj artwork out there. ;p

Not super-happy with the bottom right. Lovin' the upper left, as well as the profile shot. All of it just random sketchwork, so nothing to get particularly worked up about.


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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by StarRot » Sun Nov 13, 2011 5:56 pm

Li'l Lemmy wrote:Coming from you in particular, it is appreciated.
Oh? Why's that?

I like the head shots too! More Goten fanart make me happy ~

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Goku100xKamehameha » Tue Nov 15, 2011 1:21 pm

Fixed.

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Gohaz » Tue Nov 15, 2011 3:18 pm

Am I allowed to post some drawings here too?

I'm not nearly as good as Lemmy, but I try ._.

I have an annoying hard time with profile drawing
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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Li'l Lemmy » Wed Nov 16, 2011 2:59 pm

StarRot wrote:Oh? Why's that?
I follow you on Twitter and like the shit you say! Otherwise I probably had no real reason... unless you draw. o_o;
StarRot wrote:I like the head shots too! More Goten fanart make me happy ~
I have this disease where I need Goten to live. It's not contagious, but it is incurable.
Gohaz wrote:Am I allowed to post some drawings here too?
This thread is for all forum members to share any and all sorts of Dragonball-related creativity, so you are most certainly allowed (and encouraged!) to toss up all the drawings you like. ^_^
Gohaz wrote:I'm not nearly as good as Lemmy, but I try ._.
Oh, hush.
Gohaz wrote:I have an annoying hard time with profile drawing
I rather enjoy it, actually. Show us what you can do!

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SSj2 Goten? Or just the hair being tricky on us? ZOMG no one knows...

Realistically, though. Goku and Goten share the exact same hairstyle, so presumably Goten's SSj2 would probably look like Goku's.


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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by StarRot » Wed Nov 16, 2011 3:04 pm

Li'l Lemmy wrote:
StarRot wrote:Oh? Why's that?
I follow you on Twitter and like the shit you say! Otherwise I probably had no real reason... unless you draw. o_o;
Oh!
Well, I'm glad someone liked the bullshit I post.
Yeah, I do draw actually. I'm just a beginner though, not that great.
I should do some fanart and some point and post it up here.

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Scarz » Wed Nov 16, 2011 3:25 pm

StarRot wrote:
Li'l Lemmy wrote:
StarRot wrote:Oh? Why's that?
I follow you on Twitter and like the shit you say! Otherwise I probably had no real reason... unless you draw. o_o;
Oh!
Well, I'm glad someone liked the bullshit I post.
Yeah, I do draw actually. I'm just a beginner though, not that great.
I should do some fanart and some point and post it up here.
You have a twitter? *Looks at your signature* Oh... Well, don't I feel silly. I need to open up a twitter account so I can follow you.

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Gohaz » Wed Nov 16, 2011 5:29 pm

The only thing I found that is remotely nice enough to show, is this:

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It's been a while since I've sit down and actually started working on something, but will try... feel miserable with Lemmy's drawings though

Edit: Did this right now, I'm a little rusty, mouth doesn't look really good, and one ear is bigger than the other but I think it'll all come back to me in a while lol ^^

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And Lemmy, do you have a deviantART album?
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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by StarRot » Thu Nov 17, 2011 6:33 pm

Scarz wrote:I need to open up a twitter account so I can follow you.
:'D
Gohaz wrote:feel miserable with Lemmy's drawings though
Whaaaaat? You're stuff isn't bad. Just keep at it. I like that Vegeta.

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Li'l Lemmy » Mon Nov 21, 2011 12:58 am

So, Gohaz. There's absolutely nothing wrong with what you've tossed up. In fact, you should toss up more. The thing about drawing is, whether you're new to it or just out of practice, it becomes easier and more fluid the more times you do it. The only person you should compare yourself to is... well, yourself. ^_^

Also, I'm a sucker for Gohan. Do more of that, plz. ;p

...

So, here we have:

The original drawing, which you've seen before...

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And the result of having tried to do something with it in Paint.

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Goten's a cute kid no matter what, of course. But oddly, I actually like the basic sketch a lot more. I'm not sure why, but somehow it seems to have lost just a touch of its charm in the transition... as though there were something just the slightest bit off.

I blame the method of transference. If I had a tablet, this wouldn't be an issue-- what I draw would simply be what appears, and I could simply color it in. Instead I have to trace over the sketch with my laptop touchpad, like so...

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And then refine the lines so that they don't look squiggly. And when I do that, I think I slightly alter the drawing somehow. With a tablet, I could skip this step, but alas...

Then again, perhaps I'm just crazy. I've never really met a sane artist, after all.

'Til next time. ^_^


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