Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

[Kingdom Heartless]

I love this page... clearly a lot of love went into drawing it.

[Gyt Kaliba]

This is one of my favorite pages yet, though the art in the last two panels seems a little off. I want more than this obviously, but I'm pretty satisfied with just that huge panel at the top of everyone bickering over food.

[dbgtFO]

This is going to be interesting, I hope.

[TonyTheTiger]

I want to know what happened to everybody in U7. You would think that when Gast is born Bulma, Krillin, and Gohan would already be on their way, if not actually there already.

[Gyt Kaliba]

I want to know what happened to everybody in U7. You would think that when Gast is born Bulma, Krillin, and Gohan would already be on their way, if not actually there already.

...I had not thought of that for some reason. Hmm...maybe they're able to get their wishes without a problem (or unable to if the Dragon Balls disappear with the mergure of Gast come to think of it), and thus they're much too weak when the Androids appear on Earth.

Actually, that would fit maybe. The Androids win without problem, Cell is able to absorb them easily, and then when he's destroyed the Earth and is cruising space, he eventually gets to Namek and Gast stops him.

[The Jackal]

I really hope we get some plot, but knowing Salagir, Frieza will turn up on Namek, all the Nameks merge together, kill him and then the next pages are just Super Namek going on numerous kill sprees (I'd love to be proven wrong though). The art looks nice, at least.

[Rukura]

Am I the only one that would rather not have new pages as often instead of getting another "special" chapter after one of two short fights?

I want to know what happened in those other universes too, but I'd rather have both Gogeta Jr and Salagir take care of it. The could still call them Special chapters, semi-separate from the on-going plot.....but they'd be good. (And maybe we wouldn't end up with the odd case of character that looks nothing like a Dragon Ball character nor has a name that follows a well estabilished naming scheme, that they try to pass off as the main character's mom...)
So far, story-wise, only the Bardock chapter had an interesting plot out of all those "special" chapters.

[funrush]

I guess the cover is promising. The coloring is pretty bad, though.

[DBZGTKOSDH]

Bad color and awful nose. At least I hope it will have good story.

[Hellspawn28]

The cover was already on the artist before it was uploaded on the site, so I already knew what the page will look like. Looking forward to the special chapter nevertheless.

[The Jackal]

Great art, wonder when this universe branches off from U18? Hopefuly we get some detail on that, not "Freeza's here", fuse and Gast takes on Freeza, Cell and Buu.

[Gyt Kaliba]

Some questionable translation aside (I'm used to it by this point sadly), I like this page. The art looks really good to me, the shading is nice, and it seems like the story will actually be GOING somewhere maybe. I probably shouldn't get my hopes up but this may be the best special yet...not that that's saying a lot.

[TheDevilsCorpse]

Great art, wonder when this universe branches off from U18? Hopefuly we get some detail on that, not "Freeza's here", fuse and Gast takes on Freeza, Cell and Buu.

I get the feeling it has already branched off. Bulma and the gang arrive on Namek, can't detect the Dragon Balls, and there is a "great power"? Seems to me that Gast was already formed to deal with the threat of Freeza, and the Dragon Balls are now inert...

[Kaboom]

"Why did you came out right away?!"
"We search the Dragon Balls now!"

Oh look, awfully-translated dialogue! Didn't see that one coming!

[jjgp1112]

This translation is godawful, wow.

[TrunksTrevelyan0064]

I don't like to bash, but come on. I actually had to read some of the panels several times before I managed to make sense out of the terrible translation.
The art's fine, though.

[funrush]

I'm just gonna ignore the terrible translation and say that so far, the story and the art is pretty promising.

[TRL]

That may just be bad dialogue. All of it kinda felt awkward.

It's not Toriyama's style but it doesn't feel too alienating like that other special about vegetto was.

[Scarz]

Bulma and the gang arrive on Namek, can't detect the Dragon Balls, and there is a "great power"? Seems to me that Gast was already formed to deal with the threat of Freeza, and the Dragon Balls are now inert...

I hope we actually get to see the all Namekians fuse (even in flashback), otherwise it will be very disappointing if Gast already defeated Freeza and the like.

[funrush]

and the Dragon Balls are now inert...

I don't know what to say!