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Db Wallpaper

Post by Hanzel » Thu Mar 08, 2012 3:52 pm

I made a DB wallaper and i want some feedback. keep in mind that its my first wallpaper ever and and I'm a noob at photoshop. Also should i reposition characters?
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Re: Db Wallpaper

Post by songohan619 » Thu Mar 08, 2012 4:01 pm

I think that you should get rid of / move Oolong, remove Kami`s staff, and get a new picture of Chaotzu!
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Re: Db Wallpaper

Post by Drabaz » Thu Mar 08, 2012 4:19 pm

I really like it except for the fact that Goku is the only one who is angry in the picture. Do you have another shot of Goku looking joyful like Krillin does?
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Re: Db Wallpaper

Post by Kingdom Heartless » Thu Mar 08, 2012 4:38 pm

I agree about moving Oolong (he looks a little awkward there) and getting a happier Goku, other than that I really like it!
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Re: Db Wallpaper

Post by Hanzel » Thu Mar 08, 2012 4:46 pm

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originally this is where i had oolong but then i moved him to the middle and yeag, he looks a little awkward there. Goku is not smiling here because i found the pictures in some website together and unfortunatly goku was the only one not smiling. Piccolo was also included but i decided to leave him out since he doesnt really fit in because he they didnt meet till goku was older
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Re: Db Wallpaper

Post by Kingdom Heartless » Thu Mar 08, 2012 5:34 pm

Yo! Cal's the name. Nice to meet you!
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Re: Db Wallpaper

Post by Hanzel » Thu Mar 08, 2012 5:50 pm

Thanks! ill use one of those, when I'm finished, ill post it here
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Re: Db Wallpaper

Post by Drabaz » Thu Mar 08, 2012 7:47 pm

I would also flip the picture of the Ox King horizontally so that he's looking the other way. It looks a little weird that he's looking into the crowd. About the positioning of Oolong, you can try placing him where Goku is now and then move Goku to the middle in front of Krillin and Oolong. Or you could make it a really random picture and move Oolong to the middle infront of everybody. :P
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Re: Db Wallpaper

Post by Hanzel » Sun Mar 11, 2012 12:54 am

i did what u guys asked and it looks better. i think I'm going to leave it like that. if anyone wants the seperate image files of the characters just ask and ill give then to you, ot i can post some links to them. Btw this is my desktop background now.
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