DragonBall S fan-manga preview

The Mole · Post by **The Mole** » Sat Jan 07, 2006 3:29 am

Here is the first couple of pages of my fan-manga: DragonBall S (Doragonbôru S

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http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... 1cover.jpg

http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page1.jpg

http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page2.jpg

http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page3.jpg

http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page4.jpg

As you can see, my drawings aren't as good as they've become in later chapters. Too bad I don't have a newer picture to compare to these. And please tell me what you think.

Socar15 · Post by **Socar15** » Sat Jan 07, 2006 5:15 am

Interesting. I could have sworn I remembered someone else on this board mentioning they had written a fic that involved a Cell Jr. coming back, but I could be mistaken. Anyway, I'll have to see more in the future to have a valid opinion.

Chaos Saiyajin · Post by **Chaos Saiyajin** » Sat Jan 07, 2006 8:42 am

Very interesting! I had liked the idea of a surviving Cell Jr. as well, but it never really amounted to anything. (Unless you count a horrible fic I made up when I was 12)

Leotaku · Post by **Leotaku** » Sat Jan 07, 2006 11:07 am

There's a certain charm I find in these kind of pictures. And it takes me back to my earlier days of drawing.

I'm interested in where you're going with this, too. Hope to see more.

Dayspring · Post by **Dayspring** » Sat Jan 07, 2006 11:23 am

Socar15 wrote:Interesting. I could have sworn I remembered someone else on this board mentioning they had written a fic that involved a Cell Jr. coming back, but I could be mistaken. Anyway, I'll have to see more in the future to have a valid opinion.

A lot of people. One of the Cell Jr's was only cut in half at the torso. It could have easily regenerated and ran away.

Bejiita · Post by **Bejiita** » Sat Jan 07, 2006 11:25 am

Yea keep it coming, I wan't to see where this is going. It's coming along nicely.

And I too have seen a fan manga with a surving Cell Jr too, on DBArena I think...maybe you done that also?

Mr. Robot · Post by **Mr. Robot** » Sat Jan 07, 2006 2:17 pm

Looks good, but wasn't the entire point of GT's ending that they had abused the power of the Dragon Balls? Wouldn't it be completely besides the point to create new dragonballs?

The Mole · Post by **The Mole** » Sat Jan 07, 2006 3:06 pm

True, they learned that they abused them. So I tought they could either use them only in extreme emergences (spelling), or let anyone (besides the Z-warriors) who finds them make any wish that they want (that doesn't exceed the creator's power).

Dayspring · Post by **Dayspring** » Sat Jan 07, 2006 3:13 pm

Mr. Robot wrote:Looks good, but wasn't the entire point of GT's ending that they had abused the power of the Dragon Balls? Wouldn't it be completely besides the point to create new dragonballs?

Who cares. "Abusing" them goes against the very nature of the DBs, so what's the big deal about contradicting a contradiction?

The Mole · Post by **The Mole** » Sat Jan 07, 2006 8:37 pm

Here are the next few pages (they are known as the flashback scene)

http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page5.jpg

http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page6.jpg

http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... resize.jpg

http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page8.jpg

http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... -Page9.jpg

http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... Page10.jpg

And I just noticed, on that last page: Cell Jr.'s eyes look weird.

Chaos Saiyajin · Post by **Chaos Saiyajin** » Sat Jan 07, 2006 8:53 pm

Very good flashback, I feel as if I'm watching the anime. So I take it that this surviving Cell Jr is stronger than Yi Xinglong, eh?

The Mole · Post by **The Mole** » Sat Jan 07, 2006 10:16 pm

yes, throughout the time of Buu, Baby (bebi or however you want to spell it), Super Hell fighter 17 (that's what I call him), and the Shadow Dragons; he was busy training. When the Earth was destroyed both times, he simply trained on the moon (since it probably wasn't touched).

B-kun · Post by **B-kun** » Sat Jan 07, 2006 10:54 pm

^^;; Uhm, The Mole? The moon's gone bye-bye.

The S · Post by **The S** » Sat Jan 07, 2006 11:10 pm

Oh, darn. I thought this was going to be a fic about me

But it looks nice. Interesting plot, and totally better than I can draw (DBZ characters, anyway). Reminds me of the unused "What-If?" plotline used for the Saibaman (that fights on Namek and later becomes "The Great Saibaman")

The Mole · Post by **The Mole** » Sat Jan 07, 2006 11:39 pm

1: You can call me Mole for short, and 2: I forgot about the moon.

Dayspring · Post by **Dayspring** » Sat Jan 07, 2006 11:46 pm

The Mole wrote:yes, throughout the time of Buu, Baby (bebi or however you want to spell it), Super Hell fighter 17 (that's what I call him), and the Shadow Dragons; he was busy training. When the Earth was destroyed both times, he simply trained on the moon (since it probably wasn't touched).

Have him get killed by Buu, since everybody Buu killed got revived. As for Baby, he could have hidden his PL when everyone was assimilated. The moon doesn't work as it's been perma-gone since Piccolo blew it up in the Saiyan saga.

Another possibility is just have him leave the solar system altogether. He can survive in space because of Freeza's genes. What I did for my fanfic was have him fly to Freeza's homeworld, absorbing all aliens along the way in the same fashion that Imperfect Cell absorbed humans. After the huge boost and return home, the battle against the Z crew took place post-Buu but pre-28th budoukai.

The Mole · Post by **The Mole** » Sun Jan 08, 2006 12:34 am

Him absorbing more beings is pretty smart, thanks! He also absorbs an android who came back from the future trying to escape Gohan and <CHARECTER NAME WITHELD FOR SPOILER REASONS>.

t-bone135 · Post by **t-bone135** » Sun Jan 08, 2006 2:32 am

In the flashback, you even got the eyes bugging out of #16's head. Now that is attention to detail. I like it too, and that part were the bird was flipping out about Cell Jr. being in the air was funny. Not to be critical, but I thought it was sort of amusing that Gohan looked high in this one.

No offense I hope.

Socar15 · Post by **Socar15** » Sun Jan 08, 2006 2:37 am

t-bone135 wrote:Not to be critical, but I thought it was sort of amusing that Gohan looked high in this one. No offense I hope.

You know, I thought that exact same thing when I first saw that.

Anyway, I thought the flashback scene was pretty good. Keep it coming.

The Mole · Post by **The Mole** » Sun Jan 08, 2006 4:16 am

Technically, he is high. High...in the sky. And no offense taken.

Kanzenshuu

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