Fanmanga- Who wants to be a superhero? (completed)

jjgp1112 · Post by **jjgp1112** » Fri Mar 16, 2012 10:24 pm

THAT

WAS

AWESOME.

Xevious · Post by **Xevious** » Fri Mar 16, 2012 10:36 pm

Michsi, you're seriously awesome! *_*
There's a lot of well-drawn backgrounds with amazing detail in this last batch of pages, and your sense of humor is still rocking.

Thank you, and keep up the good work.

Chuquita · Post by **Chuquita** » Fri Mar 16, 2012 11:45 pm

This is amazing. X3
I'm so happy there's more.

"Director" Goku along with Piccolo's fear of rice cookers, plus Vegeta standing around there 'looking pretty' along with the worm bit at the end. XD

Gyt Kaliba · Post by **Gyt Kaliba** » Sat Mar 17, 2012 1:42 am

I don't know if I've posted her or not, but I've been following your pages ever since you first started this. Oh man...this last batch was even more glorious than any before it.

And that's high praise after the Mr. Satan stuff from a while back.

Godo · Post by **Godo** » Sat Mar 17, 2012 3:37 am

It's still holding strong. The art has improved a lot. I especially like how you put so much detail in the panick-stricken face of that crook!
The jokes are really funny. Especially the whole original part about rice cookers and the flashback where Piccolo accuses them for wanting to imprison him again.
Piccolo and Vegeta's interactions are genius.

Kingdom Heartless · Post by **Kingdom Heartless** » Sat Mar 17, 2012 3:51 am

I think what makes this so amazing is that it manages to be such silly fun without distorting the character's personalities.

Michsi · Post by **Michsi** » Sat Mar 17, 2012 5:09 am

I see that people have commented on the art. This makes me happy. I did try to put more effort this time since it kinda started to bother me how the previous pages looked . I know there is plenty of room left to improve and I won't lie and say I'm good with backgrounds and perspective and so on, but I will try and be more professional from now on, since I also want to use this fancomic to practice..

Anyway, thank you very much for the comments

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Godo wrote: the flashback where Piccolo accuses them for wanting to imprison him again.

Actually, I was thinking more of accusing just Chichi. I kinda have this idea of how these two were "getting along" while he stayed with them. It's kind of another story I might do, after I finish this. Not really original though, since I think there I've seen another fancomic with this idea some years ago somewhere on the net....we'll see.....

Saiga · Post by **Saiga** » Sat Mar 17, 2012 7:45 am

Michsi wrote:I see that people have commented on the art. This makes me happy. I did try to put more effort this time since it kinda started to bother me how the previous pages looked . I know there is plenty of room left to improve and I won't lie and say I'm good with backgrounds and perspective and so on, but I will try and be more professional from now on, since I also want to use this fancomic to practice..

Anyway, thank you very much for the comments .

Really? I think the backgrounds are good! The terrain in this instalment looks very good. I like your style the most of all the fan comics/manga I've seen, and I'm sincere about that.

Michsi · Post by **Michsi** » Sat Mar 17, 2012 5:43 pm

Really? I think the backgrounds are good! The terrain in this instalment looks very good. I like your style the most of all the fan comics/manga I've seen, and I'm sincere about that.

Thanks!

Well, the backgrounds here mostly consisted of rocks and boulders, so it was pretty easy. City backgrounds are a whole different level and that's what I'm going to have to draw for the next scenes.

Kingdom Heartless · Post by **Kingdom Heartless** » Sat Mar 17, 2012 7:07 pm

Actually, I was thinking more of accusing just Chichi. I kinda have this idea of how these two were "getting along" while he stayed with them. It's kind of another story I might do, after I finish this. Not really original though, since I think there I've seen another fancomic with this idea some years ago somewhere on the net....we'll see.....

Are you talking about that one based at Christmas?

Michsi · Post by **Michsi** » Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:18 am

Kingdom Heartless wrote:
Actually, I was thinking more of accusing just Chichi. I kinda have this idea of how these two were "getting along" while he stayed with them. It's kind of another story I might do, after I finish this. Not really original though, since I think there I've seen another fancomic with this idea some years ago somewhere on the net....we'll see.....
Are you talking about that one based at Christmas?

I'm not sure, it's been a while. I think there was something with gifts in it. I think it was on dev.art and it was coloured.

batistabus · Post by **batistabus** » Sun Mar 18, 2012 2:55 am

I seriously cannot get enough of this. More more more more! And yeah, the art on the crooks is really fantastic.

I didn't really get the Vegeta/worm joke, though. Can anyone clue me in?

Saiga · Post by **Saiga** » Sun Mar 18, 2012 3:01 am

batistabus wrote:I seriously cannot get enough of this. More more more more! And yeah, the art on the crooks is really fantastic.

I didn't really get the Vegeta/worm joke, though. Can anyone clue me in?

It's a reference to the filler scene of Vegeta and Goku meeting sentient worms in Boo's stomach. Vegeta says he hates slimy things and he thinks he's going to puke.

batistabus · Post by **batistabus** » Sun Mar 18, 2012 3:02 am

Ooooh, that's right! Aw man...

But seriously, more please.

funrush · Post by **funrush** » Sun Mar 18, 2012 2:37 pm

I love the rice cooker jokes! This comic is great!

Kiddo626 · Post by **Kiddo626** » Tue Mar 20, 2012 1:57 am

Oh God, I marathonned this entire series in one go. This is hilarious! Truly genius! And yes, I noticed an upgrade in the art in this chapter. Very neat!

Goku as a director was awesome! Didn't think he'd know the intricacies of a superhero movie.

Not to mention how he put Vegeta in his place with the worm bit. XD

Keep this going, it's amazing!

batistabus · Post by **batistabus** » Tue Mar 20, 2012 11:25 am

Is there any chance we could be getting some color panels?

Michsi · Post by **Michsi** » Tue Mar 20, 2012 12:01 pm

batistabus wrote:Is there any chance we could be getting some color panels?

I'm afraid that would take up too much time and I already don't have much of that to dedicate to this fancomic as it is.
Who knows, I might give it a shot with a one or two panels I really like, but don't count on it.

If anybody else would like to try though , they are welcomed to it

Sun-Wukong · Post by **Sun-Wukong** » Wed Mar 21, 2012 10:13 pm

Great as always, but the panel where the crook throws the rice cooker and the one that follows are kind of awkward. I mean, I know that it's supposed to be kind of a mystery as to what freaked him out, but it bugs me. The idea of him being afraid of rice cookers is one of the funniest things I've seen related to Dragon Ball in a long time, though (and I love me some Team Four Star).

Jodaku · Post by **Jodaku** » Sun Mar 25, 2012 6:09 pm

I know I'm late, but I've just stumbled on this, and just all the pages. Funny as hell, and you can definitely see the improvement on the art side the more you went on. Great job Michsi, can't wait to see more.

Kanzenshuu

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