Cold World

[coola]

SPOILERS:
Very cool chapter, you actually made humans useful Nice Ginyu Force dialogue, and thank you for include False Super Saiyan, i still think that form is closest to legend, violent warrior who love fight and blood

[jjgp1112]

New chapter:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7381507/19/

Try to guess which two characters make unnamed cameos in this one

[coola]

SPOILERS:

Nice cameo of Mr.Satan and Videl, i was shocked to read, that Zarbon actually wanted to rape Videl, but Gohan maked him pay for everything Poor Arepa, i hope she`ll get revived

[Rawring Ninja]

So you had Freeza skip his third transformation..?

[jjgp1112]

New chapter:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7381507/20/Cold_World

Shit just got Super Real. Vegeta fans, beware.

[coola]

Oh my, if you thought, that Freeza was brutal for Vegeta before he killed him in Manga/Anime, dont ever read it, such brutality

[BlazingFiddlesticks]

"A terror beyond Hell" indeed? Dayum!

I have to say, I really don't understand how Vegeta is supposed to talk after that. And the "trigger" was certainly better analyzed and pulled off than the actual series, but that's the joy of fanfiction!

[jjgp1112]

GET READY FOE THE BIG PAYBACK:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7381507/21/Cold_World

There should be about 3 more chapters after this.

[jjgp1112]

I know there's been a pretty long delay for the next chapter...and sorry. I was on vacation last week and didn't really feel like sitting down and writing anything, lol. I'm starting to piece the chapter together now, though, so fear not.

[Rawring Ninja]

Woot. I've been watching this thread lately, and waiting for the next chapter. I really like this Fan-Fic.

[BlazingFiddlesticks]

No complaints here, I'd imagine it'd be harder to write the closing chapters of a... I guess it'd be AU(?) fanfic.

[coola]

Kinda sad it will be over after 3 chapters. It was one of my favorite DB fanfics.

[Insertclevername]

Hey, is this series over or what? I'd like to know what happens next

[jjgp1112]

Good Christ I've been such a lazy asshole. Every time I sit down and try to write the next chapter...it just doesn't happen. The sad part is I know EXACTLY how they're going to go and have had them planned out for ages now. I dunno. I'll get to it...some day.

[Insertclevername]

Good Christ I've been such a lazy asshole. Every time I sit down and try to write the next chapter...it just doesn't happen. The sad part is I know EXACTLY how they're going to go and have had them planned out for ages now. I dunno. I'll get to it...some day.

Hey don't beat yourself up about it Best to write your story when you feel the passion to do so. Don't just do finish it because you feel obligated.

Best of Luck on the next 3 chapters

[Kaboom]

Good Christ I've been such a lazy asshole. Every time I sit down and try to write the next chapter...it just doesn't happen. The sad part is I know EXACTLY how they're going to go and have had them planned out for ages now. I dunno. I'll get to it...some day.

Welcome to MY world!

[jjgp1112]

At long last, an update has come!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7381507/22/Cold-World

[Insertclevername]

At long last, an update has come!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7381507/22/Cold-World

Is this the last one or will there be more?

Also, good job with this chapter, the "cute" moment Gohan thinks was funny.

[coola]

Yay, i was afraid it will become another awesome, never finished story, fortunately, you`re back at it, very nice, and funny chapter, i like Gohan interaction with everyone, i have small question, will it be 2 more chapters only, like you said couple months ago?

[BlazingFiddlesticks]

At long last, an update has come!

*Scouter Explodes*

So Bulma acknowledges that she's cheated on Yamcha. Beast.

But now I want to see the next chapter; putting Goku and Gohan alone in a gravity chamber for two months when Gohan is the stronger one by a good margin would be interesting under any circumstances, let alone these.