Dragon Ball F: Abridged Manga (Chapter 16 is up!)

[funrush]

Loved the Tullece references! Keep it up!

[hleV]

Almost done with the god damn Freeza arc.

Spoiler:

[Saiga]

Best. Chapter. Yet.

"My wife is a bitch!"
"How does that answer my..." ELBOWED

The way he reacted to Piccolo being shot made it sound more like he was dodging deliberately, waiting for one to hit him.

[Wobbuffet]

Thanks for the chapter!

[dbgtFO]

hleV I commend you for making the funniest chapter yet! With the other ones I had my small chuckles, but this time you got me laughing real good.
Keep up the good work!

[Bejiita]

Lol!! This is really good stuff, it's making me want to give it a go but I won't. A lot of it's making me laugh, I like the part when Goku says my wife's a bitch, and you're use of speech throughout the whole thing is well good. The best part without a doubt is Goku dodging the beams and Piccolo getting hit, that was done well and I had to laugh where you wrote 'alright, no more dodging'. Pure class. Make some more.

[hleV]

Spoiler:

[Saiga]

Oh wow, that was great. Goku's stupidity towards Trunks and the "Oh shut up, bitch!!" to Chi-Chi were priceless.

[Attitudefan]

Piccolo's one line was pure gold!

[Kiddo626]

Funny as always! Keep it up!

[hleV]

Spoiler:

[Saiga]

Poor Piccolo.

I love it, keep it up.

[DNA]

Really cool chapter man! Keep it up.
But I must say, go easy on the image tags, I had to quote you, copy the links and watch it one by one because it takes ages to load this page due to all the images.

[dbgtFO]

But I must say, go easy on the image tags, I had to quote you, copy the links and watch it one by one because it takes ages to load this page due to all the images.

Huh? It took 5 seconds tops for me.

[Goten Forever]

Chapter 9.

I am LOVING this parody - everything is just so funny!
'Tullece...'
The Trunks thing...
Bulma raped/rapist
and Dr Gero's LIKE A BOSS

The reason I chose to quote these two is because the frame with the poor man's head is SOOO gory... never seen anything like that in Dragonball.
The second one? Just loved 'Like a BOSS' so much.

[DNA]

But I must say, go easy on the image tags, I had to quote you, copy the links and watch it one by one because it takes ages to load this page due to all the images.

Huh? It took 5 seconds tops for me.

Well it all depends on the speed of your internet connection, you can't expect everyone that have the same speed.

[gohan2k]

When's the new chapter of this gonna be up? Looking forward to it! Has been really good so far. Keep it up!!

[hleV]

Spoiler:

[Saiga]

Good chapter, hleV! Favourite bit was Gero going back for his hat.

[ChahikoDBZ]

Really enjoying the manga. (: Keep it up.