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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by hleV » Sun Jul 22, 2012 2:25 pm

A panel for "We're getting near?"? Great.
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Post by Rocketman » Sun Jul 22, 2012 3:01 pm

I call bullshit on Raditz even knowing the word "conscientious".
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Post by FlpShimizu » Sun Jul 22, 2012 3:40 pm

hleV wrote:A panel for "We're getting near?"? Great.
I have no problem with it, they can sense ki and Raditz uses a scouter to discover their location.
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Post by Piccolo Daimao » Sun Jul 22, 2012 4:09 pm

Rocketman wrote:I call bullshit on Raditz even knowing the word "conscientious".
Why?
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Kaboom » Sun Jul 22, 2012 4:34 pm

It does seem unfitting for low-class Saiyan thugs to use such big words. It's also just makes the dialogue sound overly wordy and unnatural.

"Awfully sloppy of you, Kakarrot."

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Post by Insertclevername » Sun Jul 22, 2012 4:44 pm

FlpShimizu wrote:
hleV wrote:A panel for "We're getting near?"? Great.
I have no problem with it, they can sense ki and Raditz uses a scouter to discover their location.
I think he just likes the panel.
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Post by Piccolo Daimao » Sun Jul 22, 2012 4:49 pm

Kaboom wrote:It does seem unfitting for low-class Saiyan thugs to use such big words. It's also just makes the dialogue sound overly wordy and unnatural.

"Awfully sloppy of you, Kakarrot."

Ta-da.
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Post by Gyt Kaliba » Sun Jul 22, 2012 5:28 pm

Isn't this the same Raditz that made the weird...lamp things, or whatever they were described as...into his eyes so that he could transform into an Oozaru at will? The same one that fought Bardock in the Tournament I mean.

If it's that same Raditz, he's clearly a lot smarter than our canon Raditz was anyway, so I don't find it too problematic that he's using bigger words.
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Post by Saiga » Sun Jul 22, 2012 11:58 pm

Gyt Kaliba wrote:Isn't this the same Raditz that made the weird...lamp things, or whatever they were described as...into his eyes so that he could transform into an Oozaru at will? The same one that fought Bardock in the Tournament I mean.

If it's that same Raditz, he's clearly a lot smarter than our canon Raditz was anyway, so I don't find it too problematic that he's using bigger words.
Why is he smarter though? The universes aren't meant to be different "just because".
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Post by Blackstripe » Mon Jul 23, 2012 2:55 am

Saiga wrote:
Gyt Kaliba wrote:Isn't this the same Raditz that made the weird...lamp things, or whatever they were described as...into his eyes so that he could transform into an Oozaru at will? The same one that fought Bardock in the Tournament I mean.

If it's that same Raditz, he's clearly a lot smarter than our canon Raditz was anyway, so I don't find it too problematic that he's using bigger words.
Why is he smarter though? The universes aren't meant to be different "just because".
Both that version of Raditz AND Nappa seem to be quite a bit more clever at the very least.
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Post by DBZGTKOSDH » Mon Jul 23, 2012 4:33 am

Gyt Kaliba wrote:Isn't this the same Raditz that made the weird...lamp things, or whatever they were described as...into his eyes so that he could transform into an Oozaru at will? The same one that fought Bardock in the Tournament I mean.
Was it ever said that Raditz himself created these?
One Raditz can't be smarter than the other Raditz. If he is, then it's a plot hole.
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Post by TrunksTrevelyan0064 » Mon Jul 23, 2012 4:54 am

Clearly in this universe, Bardock was a brilliant scientist and passed some of his knowledge on to his son.
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Post by Scarz » Mon Jul 23, 2012 8:36 am

TrunksTrevelyan0064 wrote:Clearly in this universe, Bardock was a brilliant scientist and passed some of his knowledge on to his son.
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Post by Gyt Kaliba » Mon Jul 23, 2012 2:42 pm

DBZGTKOSDH wrote:
Gyt Kaliba wrote:Isn't this the same Raditz that made the weird...lamp things, or whatever they were described as...into his eyes so that he could transform into an Oozaru at will? The same one that fought Bardock in the Tournament I mean.
Was it ever said that Raditz himself created these?
One Raditz can't be smarter than the other Raditz. If he is, then it's a plot hole.
Well...I can't remember for sure, but I think that the exchange between Bardock and Raditz had something like this -

Bardock: If you created something like that back in our universe, we might have beat the Tsufurians.

Didn't it? And Raditz didn't really do anything to rebut the idea that he himself made them...but I guess that's not really proof that he made them.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Kaboom » Mon Jul 23, 2012 2:50 pm

Panel 4: How Do I Used Perspective?!
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Post by Gyt Kaliba » Mon Jul 23, 2012 2:54 pm

Hope Raditz isn't going in for a headbutt. At his current forehead size, that would hurt like hell. :lol:

It's weird though, even with the forehead (which is still a bit much but not as bad as in a few previous pages), his actual face looks okay.
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Post by Michsi » Tue Jul 24, 2012 1:14 am

Kaboom wrote:Panel 4: How Do I Used Perspective?!
It would look okay if the torso was bigger. I think that's what makes this panel weird.
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Post by Scarz » Tue Jul 24, 2012 2:30 am

Michsi wrote:
Kaboom wrote:Panel 4: How Do I Used Perspective?!
It would look okay if the torso was bigger. I think that's what makes this panel weird.
It would also look better if the hand was bigger as well.
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Post by Saiga » Tue Jul 24, 2012 2:32 am

Scarz wrote:
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Kaboom wrote:Panel 4: How Do I Used Perspective?!
It would look okay if the torso was bigger. I think that's what makes this panel weird.
It would also look better if the hand was bigger as well.
Or if the head wasn't so huge.
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