Mr. Satan's Maybe Excellent Adventure, Who Knows? (W.I.P)

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Mr. Satan's Maybe Excellent Adventure, Who Knows? (W.I.P)

Post by El Diabeetus » Tue Dec 04, 2012 9:08 pm

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This is going to be a South Park / Dragon Ball Z parody, it'll be more like South Park in terms of story and humor although Dragon Ball jokes will be littered in there too. So far, this is a work in progress. It's currently in scripting stages. The plot begins in the Dragon World where an avid hater of Mr. Satan manages to find all 7 Dragon Balls and wishes for Mr. Satan's death. Shen Long denies that wish, but, is happy at the same time to find that the Z Warriors were not the ones to summon him. With quick thinking the guy changes his wish to have Mr. Satan sent to a different dimension. Mr. Satan confused walks around through South Park and tries to figure out what is going on and even proclaiming his "I'm savior of the world" shtick and after seeing a woman get hit by a car that he tried to make a move on. He then goes to the only known counceler in town, Mr. Mackey.

Mr. Mackey after some talking with Mr. Satan then gets him hired as a subsitute teacher, due to the fact there's a shortage on substitutes. Mr. Satan was also looking for a 'good time', so Mr. Mackey suggests he go out with Cartman's mom, but to try and avoid Cartman at all costs. All in all, it's a more of a light hearted parody making fun of both shows and Mr. Satan tries to rebuild a life since as far as he knows, he's stuck there forever. But, in the Dragon World Goku and Co. are still trying to find a way to bring him back. (He doesn't remain a substitue teacher the whole time, that wouldn't be very Mr. Satan-like, haha).

In a Toriyama-like fashion, this will be written as I go along. I only have the general concept plot so far, and written the dialouge to the point where Mr. Mackey and Mr. Satan's dialouge concludes. There will be small segments looking like Dragon Ball but, is going to be done in South Park's simplistic style, for the most part. I'm also writing it with the intention of keeping characters in character from both Dragon Ball Z and South Park.

I've posted this here, 'cause I'm exicited that this might turn out well and it's an idea some people wouldn't mind see happening. Especially since there's a bunch of dark-toned fan projects (animated or movie wise) that have sprouted up lately.
I will also post info on needed voices and such as I write certain parts in.
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Post by Big Momma » Tue Dec 04, 2012 10:24 pm

Seems interesting, I'll be keeping my eye on this! :wink:
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Post by El Diabeetus » Wed Dec 05, 2012 2:33 am

Big Momma wrote:Seems interesting, I'll be keeping my eye on this! :wink:
I hope it does end up being interesting, otherwise that'd be pretty bad. In terms of progress, I've written when Cartman catches Mr. Satan and his Mom in the act (audio only, he doesn't see anything nor will I make anyone have to see it), then him getting advice from Butters since he doesn't know how to handle it. I'm about to write the subsititue teacher scene.

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Post by songohan619 » Wed Dec 05, 2012 6:35 pm

*raises up his hand* Can I play Mister Satan? *gets blasted away by Abridged Vegeta*
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Post by El Diabeetus » Wed Mar 13, 2013 4:57 am

songohan619 wrote:*raises up his hand* Can I play Mister Satan? *gets blasted away by Abridged Vegeta*
Haha, not sure yet. For the most part, I'm not sure who being doing what voices. I know I'll need more voices, so it's possible, haha. So far, for sure I'm only doing Cartman, Mr. Mackey, Randy (the Trey voices for the most part since those were the ones I mangaged to learn to imitate, haha).

Voices like Butters, female voices, the occasional background character, Mr. Satan, etc. odds are I won't attempt to voice them since I know I could find people who'd be able to do it better than me.

This is what the animation will be like, although in this, I will attempt to have more movement than just the mouths, haha:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BSda_TxXTZc

EDIT: 3/13 - I'm still currently working on this scripting wise. I'm planning on working in some of the info that came from Battle of the Gods/Chozenshuu into it. Haha, so basically you'll get the cop-out answer that one of the 12 universes is the South Park universe.

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