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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dr. Machismo » Thu Jun 27, 2013 11:28 pm

I have an idea as to what's gonna happen next.

Vegerot: So ... I lost. Well, that really sucks, but I guess it was fair and square. Sorry for acting up, everyone.
Namekian: Erm ... Bardock and King Cold are dead.
*awkward silence*
Vegerot: *comical look* Guess I don't know my strength!
Vargas: Well, according to the rules, we'll have to disqualify the rest of Universe 16 and send them back to their universe!
Universe 16: WHAT?!
Gohan: Wait, what will become of Pan? She'll come back at the end of the tournament, right? *realizes she won't* NO! YOU RUINED EVERYTHING! *fires blast at Vegerot*
Vegerot: *deflects it, causing it to destroy the Vargas and wherever they were* ... oops.
Gohan: *charges at Vegerot, only to get choked*
Supreme Kais: Wait, since the Vargas are dead ... does this we'll back stuck here?
One Supreme Kai: This is outrageous! We must take revenge! *attempts to separate Vegerot*

And so, due to being fused for so long, Vegerot cannot be split. However, the technique that would have caused him to have split causes him to go mad.

What do you guys think?
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TheGmGoken » Thu Jun 27, 2013 11:50 pm

Dr. Machismo wrote:I have an idea as to what's gonna happen next.

Vegerot: So ... I lost. Well, that really sucks, but I guess it was fair and square. Sorry for acting up, everyone.
Namekian: Erm ... Bardock and King Cold are dead.
*awkward silence*
Vegerot: *comical look* Guess I don't know my strength!
Vargas: Well, according to the rules, we'll have to disqualify the rest of Universe 16 and send them back to their universe!
Universe 16: WHAT?!
Gohan: Wait, what will become of Pan? She'll come back at the end of the tournament, right? *realizes she won't* NO! YOU RUINED EVERYTHING! *fires blast at Vegerot*
Vegerot: *deflects it, causing it to destroy the Vargas and wherever they were* ... oops.
Gohan: *charges at Vegerot, only to get choked*
Supreme Kais: Wait, since the Vargas are dead ... does this we'll back stuck here?
One Supreme Kai: This is outrageous! We must take revenge! *attempts to separate Vegerot*

And so, due to being fused for so long, Vegerot cannot be split. However, the technique that would have caused him to have split causes him to go mad.

What do you guys think?
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dbzfan7 » Thu Jun 27, 2013 11:51 pm

Dr. Machismo wrote:I have an idea as to what's gonna happen next.

Vegerot: So ... I lost. Well, that really sucks, but I guess it was fair and square. Sorry for acting up, everyone.
Namekian: Erm ... Bardock and King Cold are dead.
*awkward silence*
Vegerot: *comical look* Guess I don't know my strength!
Vargas: Well, according to the rules, we'll have to disqualify the rest of Universe 16 and send them back to their universe!
Universe 16: WHAT?!
Gohan: Wait, what will become of Pan? She'll come back at the end of the tournament, right? *realizes she won't* NO! YOU RUINED EVERYTHING! *fires blast at Vegerot*
Vegerot: *deflects it, causing it to destroy the Vargas and wherever they were* ... oops.
Gohan: *charges at Vegerot, only to get choked*
Supreme Kais: Wait, since the Vargas are dead ... does this we'll back stuck here?
One Supreme Kai: This is outrageous! We must take revenge! *attempts to separate Vegerot*

And so, due to being fused for so long, Vegerot cannot be split. However, the technique that would have caused him to have split causes him to go mad.

What do you guys think?
I like how you wrote Vegetto, but I don't see Gohan lashing out at his father. Gohan would more likely just avoid him and maybe yell at him. I also don't see Vegetto chocking Gohan even if he lashed out (he would more likely just counter and slowly calm him down). Other then that i'm not sure things will escalate so quickly. My guess is things will play out more subtlety.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dr. Machismo » Thu Jun 27, 2013 11:55 pm

Well, Bardock's vision showed Vegerot choking Gohan. I could see Gohan lashing out at Vegerot if Vegerot caused Pan to not get resurrected.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dbzfan7 » Fri Jun 28, 2013 12:00 am

Dr. Machismo wrote:Well, Bardock's vision showed Vegerot choking Gohan. I could see Gohan lashing out at Vegerot if Vegerot caused Pan to not get resurrected.
Gohan isn't someone who takes violence as a first resort. So I wouldn't see him just lash out at his dad. He would just get angry and probably avoid Vegetto. Gohan only fights if he absolutely needs to as he doesn't like fighting. It would be more emotional (and in character IMO) if he just called Vegetto not his father as he no longer is Goku (which is true as Vegetto is a combination of Goku and Vegeta's minds and bodies).
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TheGmGoken » Fri Jun 28, 2013 12:19 am

Dr. Machismo wrote:Well, Bardock's vision showed Vegerot choking Gohan. I could see Gohan lashing out at Vegerot if Vegerot caused Pan to not get resurrected.
It'll take some more time to see Bardock's vision of Vegetto choking Son Gohan. Vegetto could get U.16 DQed but Gohan won't lash out until something even more extreme happens like Vegetto insulting Gohan or Pan.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dr. Machismo » Fri Jun 28, 2013 12:22 am

dbzfan7 wrote: Gohan isn't someone who takes violence as a first resort. So I wouldn't see him just lash out at his dad. He would just get angry and probably avoid Vegetto. Gohan only fights if he absolutely needs to as he doesn't like fighting. It would be more emotional (and in character IMO) if he just called Vegetto not his father as he no longer is Goku (which is true as Vegetto is a combination of Goku and Vegeta's minds and bodies).
Well, when Gohan's really angry, he cuts loose and does violent stuff. Something causing him to not see his daughter again would definitely make him angry and cut loose.
Vegetto could get U.16 DQed but Gohan won't lash out until something even more extreme happens like Vegetto insulting Gohan or Pan.
I don't think words alone have ever drove Gohan mad.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TheGmGoken » Fri Jun 28, 2013 12:25 am

Dr. Machismo wrote:
dbzfan7 wrote: .
Vegetto could get U.16 DQed but Gohan won't lash out until something even more extreme happens like Vegetto insulting Gohan or Pan.
I don't think words alone have ever drove Gohan mad.
We never seen Gohan put into that position that word would insult him. If we count the anime then Buutenks mocked Gohan with words. But other than that. Gohan was never in the position that he was mocked to be honest.

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Post by dbzfan7 » Fri Jun 28, 2013 12:25 am

Dr. Machismo wrote:
dbzfan7 wrote: Gohan isn't someone who takes violence as a first resort. So I wouldn't see him just lash out at his dad. He would just get angry and probably avoid Vegetto. Gohan only fights if he absolutely needs to as he doesn't like fighting. It would be more emotional (and in character IMO) if he just called Vegetto not his father as he no longer is Goku (which is true as Vegetto is a combination of Goku and Vegeta's minds and bodies).
Well, when Gohan's really angry, he cuts loose and does violent stuff. Something causing him to not see his daughter again would definitely make him angry and cut loose.
That's kid Gohan, Adult Gohan has a lot more control over his emotions. Adult Gohan also doesn't have those rage moments his kid self has. During every fight he had in the Boo saga he never had the same level of uncontrollable emotion because he was an Adult. As an Adult he no longer has to be pushed into things he doesn't want to be. As an Adult he now doesn't have that feeling of being useless as he did as a kid.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dr. Machismo » Fri Jun 28, 2013 12:29 am

That's kid Gohan, Adult Gohan has a lot more control over his emotions. Adult Gohan also doesn't have those rage moments his kid self has. During every fight he had in the Boo saga he never had the same level of uncontrollable emotion because he was an Adult. As an Adult he no longer has to be pushed into things he doesn't want to be. As an Adult he now doesn't have that feeling of being useless as he did as a kid.
But if he found out that he had lost his chance to see his daughter again, he'd likely go mad. I mean, that's his daughter. Losing his daughter for good would be unlike anything to happen to Gohan.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dbzfan7 » Fri Jun 28, 2013 12:32 am

Dr. Machismo wrote:
That's kid Gohan, Adult Gohan has a lot more control over his emotions. Adult Gohan also doesn't have those rage moments his kid self has. During every fight he had in the Boo saga he never had the same level of uncontrollable emotion because he was an Adult. As an Adult he no longer has to be pushed into things he doesn't want to be. As an Adult he now doesn't have that feeling of being useless as he did as a kid.
But if he found out that he had lost his chance to see his daughter again, he'd likely go mad. I mean, that's his daughter. Losing his daughter for good would be unlike anything to happen to Gohan.
I can't see a pacifist like Gohan going mad and all emo. That's what I really like about him. Gohan even had the chance to have Cell inflict any kind of suffering onto Bojack (without any consequences) and turned it down.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Draken » Fri Jun 28, 2013 12:33 am

What happened to their own Dragon Balls anyway? ._.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dr. Machismo » Fri Jun 28, 2013 12:40 am

dbzfan7 wrote:'t see a pacifist like Gohan going mad and all emo. That's what I really like about him. Gohan even had the chance to have Cell inflict any kind of suffering onto Bojack (without any consequences) and turned it down.

Aw, come on, dude, are you really saying you couldn't see Gohan getting angry and depressed over the loss of his only daughter?
What happened to their own Dragon Balls anyway? ._.
True ... maybe their Shenron can't ressurect those who die in the tournament?
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dbzfan7 » Fri Jun 28, 2013 12:45 am

Dr. Machismo wrote:
dbzfan7 wrote:'t see a pacifist like Gohan going mad and all emo. That's what I really like about him. Gohan even had the chance to have Cell inflict any kind of suffering onto Bojack (without any consequences) and turned it down.

Aw, come on, dude, are you really saying you couldn't see Gohan getting angry and depressed over the loss of his only daughter?
Of course he will be angry and depressed. But he won't become a psycho like he did as a kid. Gohan is an mature Adult and knows how to control himself. Being a pacifist at heart he would no longer want to see Vegetto and would probably disconnect himself from Vegetto. The only person who might attack Vegetto is Bra as she is pig headed and doesn't have nearly the amount of maturity as Gohan.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dr. Machismo » Fri Jun 28, 2013 12:47 am

Eh, nah, something like losing Pan would probably make Gohan go psycho. That's his only daughter. But we can agree to disagree.
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Post by dbzfan7 » Fri Jun 28, 2013 12:50 am

Dr. Machismo wrote:Eh, nah, something like losing Pan would probably make Gohan go psycho. That's his only daughter. But we can agree to disagree.
I can't see Gohan doing that. He might do that if an enemy broke the Dragon Balls and stopped Pans resurrection. But we are talking about his father. Gohan would never lash out against his own father. He loves his dad too much to do that.
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Post by Dr. Machismo » Fri Jun 28, 2013 1:01 am

dbzfan7 wrote: I can't see Gohan doing that. He might do that if an enemy broke the Dragon Balls and stopped Pans resurrection. But we are talking about his father. Gohan would never lash out against his own father. He loves his dad too much to do that.
I don't think Gohan sees Vegerot the same way he sees Goku.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Draken » Fri Jun 28, 2013 1:03 am

You saw how level-headed he was when she died. Besides the fact that it's DBM and they forgot like everything about regular DBZ and then took some liberties, nothing besides PIS is stopping her revival. He won't go crazy and attack his own half father thousands of times stronger than him.

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Post by dbzfan7 » Fri Jun 28, 2013 1:04 am

Dr. Machismo wrote:
dbzfan7 wrote: I can't see Gohan doing that. He might do that if an enemy broke the Dragon Balls and stopped Pans resurrection. But we are talking about his father. Gohan would never lash out against his own father. He loves his dad too much to do that.
I don't think Gohan sees Vegerot the same way he sees Goku.
According to the DBM stories he accepts him as his dad. Even so Vegetto is his dad. He still cares for his dad and would never attack him out of anger.
Draken wrote:You saw how level-headed he was when she died. Besides the fact that it's DBM and they forgot like everything about regular DBZ and then took some liberties, nothing besides PIS is stopping her revival. He won't go crazy and attack his own half father thousands of times stronger than him.
Also this. But I prefer the character stand point over the obvious thousands of times stronger one.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TheGmGoken » Fri Jun 28, 2013 1:05 am

Dr. Machismo wrote:
dbzfan7 wrote: I can't see Gohan doing that. He might do that if an enemy broke the Dragon Balls and stopped Pans resurrection. But we are talking about his father. Gohan would never lash out against his own father. He loves his dad too much to do that.
I don't think Gohan sees Vegerot the same way he sees Goku.
Here's how I layer it.

Vegetto fucks up U16 by getting Dq. Gohan gets mad. Not ready to attack.
Vegetto does something else that pushes GOhan over the edge and he attacks. I honestly don't see Gohan attacking as soon as Vegetto DQ U16. That will be to fast. They will wait and make Vegetto do something else.

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