Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

[TheGmGoken]

Welcome Skar. It's good to have someone who does funny comics with pretty good writing.

Thanks that means a lot =D! It's always nice to receive feedback. Critisism is always welcome too since it helps me improve and whatnot. So what does everyone think of these recent turn of events? It's nice to see Gast finally getting involved.

What's your comic?

[dbzfan7]

Welcome Skar. It's good to have someone who does funny comics with pretty good writing.

Thanks that means a lot =D! It's always nice to receive feedback. Critisism is always welcome too since it helps me improve and whatnot. So what does everyone think of these recent turn of events? It's nice to see Gast finally getting involved.

What's your comic?

He does Gast and Palz (if you don't like WeeklytubeShow you won't like it), DBM parodies like Y.O.U.R., and other stuff. I'm not a fan of the Tapion thing but everything else I like. Link below. The DBM stuff is just great.

http://scarfacedkomedy.blogspot.ca/

[TheGmGoken]

He does Gast and Palz (if you don't like WeeklytubeShow you won't like it), DBM parodies like Y.O.U.R., and other stuff. I'm not a fan of the Tapion thing but everything else I like. Link below. The DBM stuff is just great.

http://scarfacedkomedy.blogspot.ca/

I LOVE WEEKLYTUBESHOW!

[dbzfan7]

He does Gast and Palz (if you don't like WeeklytubeShow you won't like it), DBM parodies like Y.O.U.R., and other stuff. I'm not a fan of the Tapion thing but everything else I like. Link below. The DBM stuff is just great.

http://scarfacedkomedy.blogspot.ca/

I LOVE WEEKLYTUBESHOW!

Then you'll like this version of Gast. The DBM and GT parodies is where the writing is at it's best.

[Dr. Machismo]

So, like, anyway, adding onto my idea. Changes made are that when Gast meets Cooler, Cui attempts to explain to Cooler what happened and walks closer to him. Cooler kills Cui on the spot. Gast and Cooler fight, and Cooler is easily killed. Gast Carcohl also uses a technique that keeps Frieza's spaceship from being operated. Gast Carcohl later fights King Cold, who puts up a much better fight. During the battle, Vegeta uses King Cold's spaceship to escape to Earth. I'm still not sure when Gohan should turn into a Super Saiyan, though. I'm also considering making Gohan lose his arm in the battle against Vegeta.

Here's the idea in its entirety:

After defeating Frieza, Gast Carcohl leaves with Gohan, Vegeta and Cui to destroy the rest of the Planetary Trade Organization. He eventually meets with Cooler, who kills Cui. Gast easily kills Cooler, but uses a technique that prevents the ship from being operated to keep Vegeta from escaping. Gast Carcohl later fights King Cold, who is his strongest opponent yet. During the battle, however, Vegeta uses King Cold's spaceship to escape to Earth and meets Dr. Gero, and agrees to become an Android. The android Vegeta devastates the planet and even kills Goku, Krillin and Dr. Gero. Gast Carcohl and Gohan both realize that Vegeta has escaped and head to Earth, but are too late to stop Vegeta's destruction.

Vegeta's power initially overwhelms even Gast Carcohl, so Gast Carcohl and Gohan go into hiding for a while. Mr. Popo meets with them, and has them both train in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber. Eventually, Gast Carcohl kills Vegeta. Gohan would also turn into a Super Saiyan in the battle against Vegeta, although I'm not sure when.

After Vegeta's death, Gast Carcohl and Gohan leave Earth to continue training. On the tenth anniversary of Vegeta's death, Gohan decides to visit Earth. There, he finds Babidi's henchmen searching for Earthlings. He follows the henchmen into Babidi's ship, where Babidi decides to leave for another planet. Gohan, fearing the potential danger in letting them go, stops them and demands an explanation. Babidi, sensing Gohan's enormous power, decides to lure him in the ship. Gohan fights all of Babidi's henchmen and succeeds for the most part. When fighting Dabura, though, the two are evenly matched, but due to the energy Dabura took from Gohan in the fight, Majin Buu awakes.

Majin Buu kills Dabura and nearly does the same to Gohan. Babidi leaves Earth with Majin Buu, but not before destroying the Earth. Fortunately, Gohan was saved by the Supreme Kai right before Earth's destruction, and after Kibito heals him, Supreme Kai decides to have Gohan train with the Zeta Sword. The Zeta Sword eventually breaks, but Old Kai appears and awakens Gohan's potential. Meanwhile, Majin Buu and Babidi are busy destroying planets, but Gohan shows up and kills them both, saving the Universe.

Also, about Universe 16, it's unnecessary to have Chi-Chi and Bulma compete over Vegerot or Vegerot having some disliking for Chi-Chi. Chi-Chi should have just refused to settle for Vegerot, not considering him to be the same man she married.

[miguelnuva1]

Say what you what I still think Vegito should have been a polygamist or refused to be with Bulma or Chi-Chi due to some honor code. Bra could have been the result of a one night stand.

[dbzfan7]

Say what you what I still think Vegito should have been a polygamist or refused to be with Bulma or Chi-Chi due to some honor code. Bra could have been the result of a one night stand.

I didn't really like how he turned his back on Chi Chi, and that she seemed okay with it. If one of them died first then maybe I would be okay with it. But that would probably be too dark.

[Hades]

So, like, anyway, adding onto my idea. Changes made are that when Gast meets Cooler, Cui attempts to explain to Cooler what happened and walks closer to him. Cooler kills Cui on the spot. Gast and Cooler fight, and Cooler is easily killed. Gast Carcohl also uses a technique that keeps Freeza's spaceship from being operated. Gast Carcohl later fights King Cold, who puts up a much better fight. During the battle, Vegeta uses King Cold's spaceship to escape to Earth. I'm still not sure when Gohan should turn into a Super Saiyan, though. I'm also considering making Gohan lose his arm in the battle against Vegeta.
Also, about Universe 16, it's unnecessary to have Chi-Chi and Bulma compete over Vegerot or Vegerot having some disliking for Chi-Chi. Chi-Chi should have just refused to settle for Vegerot, not considering him to be the same man she married.

Here's vegetto's solution: Give them both an earring and tell them to put them on.

[rereboy]

Ever considered that Chichi might have been the one who refused to even consider being with Vegetto, since he was no longer Goku? And this before Vegetto had even decided on anything?

[Hellspawn28]

Say what you what I still think Vegito should have been a polygamist or refused to be with Bulma or Chi-Chi due to some honor code. Bra could have been the result of a one night stand.

I didn't really like how he turned his back on Chi Chi, and that she seemed okay with it. If one of them died first then maybe I would be okay with it. But that would probably be too dark.

Bluma is rich, I always had a feeling that Vegito would pick her over Chi Chi.

[Sshadow5001]

[TheGmGoken]

What the hell!? That was...to be honest. EPIC.

[Kamiccolo9]

Huh. Didn't see that coming.

[goku the krump dancer]

Holy Shit!

[TheGmGoken]

Times like this when I wish J.R when do commentary one everything. That was truely the best thing ever in DBM. I can't wait till the haters say "bulllcrap" -_-.

[dbzfan7]

I'll wait for the verdict on this. I want to know how he is capable of subduing Boo before I make a decision.

Too the people in the last page, read on why how he picks Bulma in the U16 novel (I think it was early on as I didn't read to far into it). Maybe that way won't count when we see a manga version.

[testing223]

Told you guys that Gast would use his freezing telekinesis!!!

It makes sense too since Gast is one of the only fighting competitors that Majin Buu would never have encountered in his universe!!!

Sorry for my poor English if that is not clear!

[DBZGTKOSDH]

Piccolo said in Bardock's visions that it's his will that is keeping Vegeta & Bra alive... I guess that Piccolo will merge with Gast?

[omegalucas]

SERIOUSLY? The one time there's apparently an awesome page the website goes down before I see it? WHYYYYYYYY?????

[RandomGuy96]

Buuuuuulllllcraaaaaaaaapp.

This is just the chapter of anti-climaxes, isn't it?