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Malik_DBNA
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by Malik_DBNA » Mon Aug 12, 2013 10:08 pm

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by TheGmGoken » Tue Aug 13, 2013 2:07 am
How long does it take you to draw?
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Malik_DBNA
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by Malik_DBNA » Tue Aug 13, 2013 6:02 am
TheGmGoken wrote:How long does it take you to draw?
depends on the page honestly. on average, one page takes 3-4 hours not including all the time I spend in Gimp, Photoshop, and Manga studio.
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by enjyu123 » Tue Aug 13, 2013 9:22 pm
how do i post my picture that is on paint onto this website
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by TheGmGoken » Tue Aug 13, 2013 9:24 pm
enjyu123 wrote:how do i post my picture that is on paint onto this website
Upload it to an image uploader website then right click it and it'll say open image in new tab. AND C/P the link
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by enjyu123 » Tue Aug 13, 2013 9:30 pm
Thanks bud, how do you like my sprite of aladdjin. How do I make it so he can punch and stuff like a regular sprite sheet without drawing him over and over.
http://postimg.org/image/9vj6hxoc5/
"There are many types of monsters that scare me: Monsters who cause troubles without showing themselves, monsters who abduct children, monsters who devour dreams, monsters who suck blood… and then, monsters who tell nothing but lies. Lying monsters are a real nuisance: They are much more cunning than others: They pose as humans even though they have no understanding of the human heart; they eat even though they’ve never experienced hunger; they study even though they have no interest in academics; they seek friendship even though they do not know how to love. If I were to encounter such monsters, I would likely be eaten by them… because in truth, I am that monster."
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by Kamiccolo9 » Tue Aug 13, 2013 9:33 pm
enjyu123 wrote:Thanks bud, how do you like my sprite of aladdjin. How do I make it so he can punch and stuff like a regular sprite sheet without drawing him over and over.
http://postimg.org/image/9vj6hxoc5/
Another tip, when you post your image, there is a button that says "Img". Highlight your link, and press that button, and it'll post the image on this site. Press "quote" to see how I do it for an example.
Edit: Or, that's usually how it would work. I guess that website isn't compatible with this one or something.
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by TheGmGoken » Tue Aug 13, 2013 9:35 pm
Kamiccolo9 wrote:enjyu123 wrote:Thanks bud, how do you like my sprite of aladdjin. How do I make it so he can punch and stuff like a regular sprite sheet without drawing him over and over.
http://postimg.org/image/9vj6hxoc5/
Another tip, when you post your image, there is a button that says "Img". Highlight your link, and press that button, and it'll post the image on this site. Press "quote" to see how I do it for an example.
Edit: Or, that's usually how it would work. I guess that website isn't compatible with this one or something.
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by goku the krump dancer » Tue Aug 13, 2013 11:43 pm
I didn't read the first story arc but from what I read so far of this AladJinn stuff its really cool! Another decent DB fanmanga added to the bunch

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Also wheres Goten? I know you said this take place in an alternate timeline so I guess he was never born?
Btw "Darker than night and older than light." awesome line man.
Fighting the Essence of Evil definitely seems like an "End of the series" type of thing I'm surprised you said you have four more story arcs to go.
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by DynasticHunter » Wed Aug 14, 2013 12:24 am
I'm up to Chapter 5, so far pretty good but I have some things I'd like to address. Why scouters again? I don't really need to know who has which power level, I like to determine that myself. And I wasn't huge on Rigor is Vegetas half-brother. I don't think he needed to be his brother. Maybe I missed something but how come Goten and Trunks didn't fuse while battling Rigor, that would've been cool to see. Also so far Separi is extremely useless and I feel like all she does is take up panels to tell us what power the fighters are at, again I don't need to know this. But overall so far I've enjoyed this. I really like that Rigor is a sympathetic villain. But reading this on deviantart is terrible can't wait to see if a site works out for you.
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Malik_DBNA
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by Malik_DBNA » Wed Aug 14, 2013 6:10 am
DynasticHunter wrote:I'm up to Chapter 5, so far pretty good but I have some things I'd like to address. Why scouters again? I don't really need to know who has which power level, I like to determine that myself. And I wasn't huge on Rigor is Vegetas half-brother. I don't think he needed to be his brother. Maybe I missed something but how come Goten and Trunks didn't fuse while battling Rigor, that would've been cool to see. Also so far Separi is extremely useless and I feel like all she does is take up panels to tell us what power the fighters are at, again I don't need to know this. But overall so far I've enjoyed this. I really like that Rigor is a sympathetic villain. But reading this on deviantart is terrible can't wait to see if a site works out for you.
Separi was never raised on being able to sense energy, and therefore requires one. Even Rigor, who has some aptitude for sensing chi, can't focus and sense it as clearly as the earth warriors. Rigor being Vegeta's brother was something from the original plot, and seeing as Tarble is not canon to THIS universe, you can look at him as Tarble's larger replacement. Goten and Trunks never fused because they are extremely out of practice, and almost EVERY fanmanga I read brings Gotenks in during the first arc. I didn't want to do that. Separi's purpose in arc 1 was limited, I admit. Look at her almost like Whis from BoG. Whis did almost nothing but talk and eat pudding through that whole movie lol. Separi talks and observes, then cares for her injured husband at the end of the arc. Then we see that they had children, which sets up arc 3.
goku the krump dancer wrote:I didn't read the first story arc but from what I read so far of this AladJinn stuff its really cool! Another decent DB fanmanga added to the bunch

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Also wheres Goten? I know you said this take place in an alternate timeline so I guess he was never born?
Btw "Darker than night and older than light." awesome line man.
Fighting the Essence of Evil definitely seems like an "End of the series" type of thing I'm surprised you said you have four more story arcs to go.
Goten was killed in the first story arc by Rigor shortly after he transformed into an SSJ5
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by enjyu123 » Wed Aug 14, 2013 8:57 am
Guys, I have a question you see how i made a sprite for aladdjinn above although is their away i can move his joints to make a sprtite sheet or do i have to do each move on the sprite sheet. Thanks, I know this is off topic but I am doing this for my sprite animated series of dragonball new age. Once I am done i'll show you my final product.

"There are many types of monsters that scare me: Monsters who cause troubles without showing themselves, monsters who abduct children, monsters who devour dreams, monsters who suck blood… and then, monsters who tell nothing but lies. Lying monsters are a real nuisance: They are much more cunning than others: They pose as humans even though they have no understanding of the human heart; they eat even though they’ve never experienced hunger; they study even though they have no interest in academics; they seek friendship even though they do not know how to love. If I were to encounter such monsters, I would likely be eaten by them… because in truth, I am that monster."
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by enjyu123 » Wed Aug 14, 2013 10:09 am
For anyone who did not see my sprite of aladjinn before.

"There are many types of monsters that scare me: Monsters who cause troubles without showing themselves, monsters who abduct children, monsters who devour dreams, monsters who suck blood… and then, monsters who tell nothing but lies. Lying monsters are a real nuisance: They are much more cunning than others: They pose as humans even though they have no understanding of the human heart; they eat even though they’ve never experienced hunger; they study even though they have no interest in academics; they seek friendship even though they do not know how to love. If I were to encounter such monsters, I would likely be eaten by them… because in truth, I am that monster."
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by enjyu123 » Wed Aug 14, 2013 10:14 am
Malik I have a suggestion for arc 3, can you give the minor characters a bigger role like Yamcha, and the others they could maybe take the younger siblings of Rigor so your manga would seem more professional, just a suggestion, but anyways the best manga I have read I can't wait until I read more.

"There are many types of monsters that scare me: Monsters who cause troubles without showing themselves, monsters who abduct children, monsters who devour dreams, monsters who suck blood… and then, monsters who tell nothing but lies. Lying monsters are a real nuisance: They are much more cunning than others: They pose as humans even though they have no understanding of the human heart; they eat even though they’ve never experienced hunger; they study even though they have no interest in academics; they seek friendship even though they do not know how to love. If I were to encounter such monsters, I would likely be eaten by them… because in truth, I am that monster."
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by Malik_DBNA » Wed Aug 14, 2013 10:35 am
enjyu123 wrote:Malik I have a suggestion for arc 3, can you give the minor characters a bigger role like Yamcha, and the others they could maybe take the younger siblings of Rigor so your manga would seem more professional, just a suggestion, but anyways the best manga I have read I can't wait until I read more.

I appreciate the compliments. Arc 3 is the 32nd World Tournament Saga. Yamcha has been retired from fighting since the Boo Saga of DBZ, but an old Z Warrior is slated to return.
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by TheGmGoken » Wed Aug 14, 2013 3:22 pm
Malik_DBNA wrote:enjyu123 wrote:Malik I have a suggestion for arc 3, can you give the minor characters a bigger role like Yamcha, and the others they could maybe take the younger siblings of Rigor so your manga would seem more professional, just a suggestion, but anyways the best manga I have read I can't wait until I read more.

I appreciate the compliments. Arc 3 is the 32nd World Tournament Saga. Yamcha has been retired from fighting since the Boo Saga of DBZ, but an old Z Warrior is slated to return.
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by Malik_DBNA » Wed Aug 14, 2013 3:54 pm
TheGmGoken wrote:Malik_DBNA wrote:enjyu123 wrote:Malik I have a suggestion for arc 3, can you give the minor characters a bigger role like Yamcha, and the others they could maybe take the younger siblings of Rigor so your manga would seem more professional, just a suggestion, but anyways the best manga I have read I can't wait until I read more.

I appreciate the compliments. Arc 3 is the 32nd World Tournament Saga. Yamcha has been retired from fighting since the Boo Saga of DBZ, but an old Z Warrior is slated to return.
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by enjyu123 » Wed Aug 14, 2013 8:59 pm
Any new page today?
Also. could you guys answer my question above.

"There are many types of monsters that scare me: Monsters who cause troubles without showing themselves, monsters who abduct children, monsters who devour dreams, monsters who suck blood… and then, monsters who tell nothing but lies. Lying monsters are a real nuisance: They are much more cunning than others: They pose as humans even though they have no understanding of the human heart; they eat even though they’ve never experienced hunger; they study even though they have no interest in academics; they seek friendship even though they do not know how to love. If I were to encounter such monsters, I would likely be eaten by them… because in truth, I am that monster."
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by TheGmGoken » Wed Aug 14, 2013 9:06 pm
enjyu123 wrote:Any new page today?
Also. could you guys answer my question above.

I don't see how a suggestion is a question.....
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by enjyu123 » Wed Aug 14, 2013 9:15 pm
No the comments two questions above, my bad.

"There are many types of monsters that scare me: Monsters who cause troubles without showing themselves, monsters who abduct children, monsters who devour dreams, monsters who suck blood… and then, monsters who tell nothing but lies. Lying monsters are a real nuisance: They are much more cunning than others: They pose as humans even though they have no understanding of the human heart; they eat even though they’ve never experienced hunger; they study even though they have no interest in academics; they seek friendship even though they do not know how to love. If I were to encounter such monsters, I would likely be eaten by them… because in truth, I am that monster."
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