Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

[Malik_DBNA]

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[Malik_DBNA]

The script for the next page is really difficult to write... I hate knowing what I want to say but not knowing how to say it. *crumbles up bad version of script and throws on huge scrap pile*

[KentalSSJ6]

PM it to me? I may be able to help.

[Malik_DBNA]

PM it to me? I may be able to help.

Spoilers?! For shame sir! lol. Besides, I finally got it. Took 3 or 4 drafts, but I got it

[KentalSSJ6]

Funny thing is I have no shame or pride sure a lot of people hate me for it but thats their problem not mine

[Malik_DBNA]

Funny thing is I have no shame or pride sure a lot of people hate me for it but thats their problem not mine

I don't hate ya. No, I had to do it on my own. I knew excatly what I wanted to say, I just couldn't get it to sound right. It either sounded like I was repeating what I said earlier or contradicting myself. I now have 3 pages of script done XD

[omegalucas]

Cool, implementing Battle of Gods material into the story already. Me likes it

[KentalSSJ6]

As long as the BOG stuff stops here I'm fine. I dont wanna see SSJG.

[Malik_DBNA]

As long as the BOG stuff stops here I'm fine. I dont wanna see SSJG.

That's the only spoiler I divulged for this arc. NO SSJG

[KentalSSJ6]

Yay.

[Malik_DBNA]

Yay.

Maybe I'm in a minority, but I don't like the form or its premise. It'll get mentioned, but no one has to worry about it making an appearance in DBNA

[TheGmGoken]

Yay.

Maybe I'm in a minority, but I don't like the form or its premise. It'll get mentioned, but no one has to worry about it making an appearance in DBNA

THANKS KAMI! I fucking hate that form. Mainly cause I hate BoG. But I hate the form as well. Lastly I HATE the 12 universes idea.

Page Review: Nice. Like the explanation(Cept for the 12 universe). The art is getting MUCH better. Way more consistent than...most fanmanga

[dbzfan7]

Yay.

Maybe I'm in a minority, but I don't like the form or its premise. It'll get mentioned, but no one has to worry about it making an appearance in DBNA

I didn't like how it was obtained or how it looks so plain on Goku. Though I find it hard to see any SSJ form above what is called a god form.

[DBZGTKOSDH]

Is Enma Daio related to the Shinigami? Because officially, he is the god between the Kami of each planet and the 4 Kaio. And since there isn't any Shinigami officially in Dragon Ball, I guess he will play some role in the future?

Also, is Planet Kaishin supposed to be bigger than the 12 Universes? Because it sounds too big for a planet with a population of only 80 people.

[TheGmGoken]

Yay.

Maybe I'm in a minority, but I don't like the form or its premise. It'll get mentioned, but no one has to worry about it making an appearance in DBNA

I didn't like how it was obtained or how it looks so plain on Goku. Though I find it hard to see any SSJ form above what is called a god form.

Saiyan God would have made MORE sense. I think Supa SAIYAJIN was for advertising and so people won't say "SSJ looks better than Saiyan God. Psh it doesn't have Super for a reason."

[Malik_DBNA]

Is Enma Daio related to the Shinigami? Because officially, he is the god between the Kami of each planet and the 4 Kaio. And since there isn't any Shinigami officially in Dragon Ball, I guess he will play some role in the future?

Also, is Planet Kaishin supposed to be bigger than the 12 Universes? Because it sounds too big for a planet with a population of only 80 people.

Enma Daio IS Universe 7's Shinigami as he is the Judge of the Dead.

That was mostly done for visual effect. Originally, I wanted to have the twelve Universes with a smaller Planet Kaishin hovering above them, but I couldn't get it to translate well into the image. So, I just made Planet Kaishin a little bigger and surrounded it with the 12 Universes. Plus, I don't see why it couldn't be big. I mean, the Supreme Kai Planet has a population of 2 and is gigantic.

[DBZGTKOSDH]

Well, the Kaioshin Planet normally has a population of 5, but I see your point.

[dbzfan7]

Saiyan God would have made MORE sense. I think Supa SAIYAJIN was for advertising and so people won't say "SSJ looks better than Saiyan God. Psh it doesn't have Super for a reason."

I agree that Saiyan God makes more sense. There's nothing SUPER about the look of this form. Too be honest if they had to be this plain with the design, I would have prefered if his SSJ hair was red and had the same aura as displayed in the movie. I know it's cliche and the SSJ Goku design has been done to death, but base Goku hair does not give off any sort of sign of power. I know Toriyama loves to go with making powerful looking guys weak and weak looking guys powerful, but Goku's SSJG just doesn't stand on it's own. It's just so boring looking as if they just didn't care to think up anything else.

[Malik_DBNA]

Well, the Kaioshin Planet normally has a population of 5, but I see your point.

True lol But no, its not bigger than a Universe. Just a visual thing

[TheGmGoken]

Saiyan God would have made MORE sense. I think Supa SAIYAJIN was for advertising and so people won't say "SSJ looks better than Saiyan God. Psh it doesn't have Super for a reason."

I agree that Saiyan God makes more sense. There's nothing SUPER about the look of this form. Too be honest if they had to be this plain with the design, I would have prefered if his SSJ hair was red and had the same aura as displayed in the movie. I know it's cliche and the SSJ Goku design has been done to death, but base Goku hair does not give off any sort of sign of power. I know Toriyama loves to go with making powerful looking guys weak and weak looking guys powerful, but Goku's SSJG just doesn't stand on it's own. It's just so boring looking as if they just didn't care to think up anything else.

Honestly. It looks like they went on Paint and just use the bucket fill app and tried different colorstill it looked somewhat decent. I mean it's better than a Gold SSJ4 but that's not saying much.