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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dbzfan7 » Wed Sep 04, 2013 3:02 pm

I find it funny how the fight was boring as all hell and should have ended in 5 seconds or less, but this is where the story finally gets interesting. They probably should have just started from here or had a shot of him killing Kid Boo then have this as page 2. Still don't get how the "Birth of Vegetto" is the title when this has nothing to do with that.
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Post by TonyTheTiger » Wed Sep 04, 2013 4:39 pm

"I love you as much as he did."
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Post by Dr. Machismo » Wed Sep 04, 2013 4:48 pm

TonyTheTiger wrote:"I love you as much as he did."
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Post by TheGmGoken » Wed Sep 04, 2013 4:59 pm

Wow. Bad chapter(IMO) but good ending and is getting cool to read again.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Son Edo » Thu Sep 05, 2013 1:05 am

That's gogetas line.
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Post by miguelnuva1 » Thu Sep 05, 2013 6:32 pm

Has there ever been any power comparisons between Gohan and Cell so far?
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Post by Marco Polo » Thu Sep 05, 2013 7:40 pm

Son Edo wrote:That's gogetas line.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Saiga » Thu Sep 05, 2013 9:49 pm

"I am neither Goku nor Vegeta. I am the one who will love you!"
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Post by KentalSSJ6 » Thu Sep 05, 2013 9:51 pm

Saiga wrote:"I am neither Goku nor Vegeta. I am the one who will love you!"
Seeing how Bra was born from Vegito in this universe, seems Bulma got a whole lot of lovin.
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Post by Dr. Machismo » Thu Sep 05, 2013 11:49 pm

KentalSSJ6 wrote:
Saiga wrote:"I am neither Goku nor Vegeta. I am the one who will love you!"
Seeing how Bra was born from Vegito in this universe, seems Bulma got a whole lot of lovin.
All that talk reminds me of this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B8FTyEdLjqA lol
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Post by coola » Fri Sep 06, 2013 2:06 pm

Poor Chi-Chi, also, next chapter will be about fights that happened when Vegetto was gone.
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Post by Scarz » Fri Sep 06, 2013 2:07 pm

I am happy and yet unsatisfied with this... A proper hentai comic must be made!
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Post by DannyDBZfanforever » Fri Sep 06, 2013 2:22 pm

Big Fail is Fail. This special looks more like a soap opera :oops: . What comes next? Bulma is getting married again. And then she cheats Vegeto with Yancha. :crazy: Vegeto has a fatal disease and he leaves his money for his illegitimate son (he had an affair with #18 in the countryside on a day in the middle of summer :thumbdown: ). Now talking seriously about this Special, it has nothing to do with DB. This Special = Cheap soap opera of drama :eh:. Just my opinion.
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Post by FoolsGil » Fri Sep 06, 2013 2:27 pm

In the comic Chi Chi backs down with somewhat sound logic. In the novel Vegetto makes a choice, saying that Both Goku and Vegeta like Bulma, but only Goku likes Chi Chi, thus making a choice for Bulma. I think I like the comic version better. OF COURSE the best version would be taking both of them as wives and living in sin. Just saying.
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Post by DBZGTKOSDH » Fri Sep 06, 2013 2:35 pm

Nice page.

Also, the next chapter will show us the fights Vegetto (and we) missed.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Gyt Kaliba » Fri Sep 06, 2013 2:38 pm

Huh. I'm actually getting 'feels' for Chi Chi here. This is actually kind of sad in a way. I mean, her logic makes sense and all, and we already knew that Vegito at least went back to Bulma long enough to make Bra, but...
DannyDBZfanforever wrote:Big Fail is Fail. This special looks more like a soap opera :oops: . What comes next? Bulma is getting married again. And then she cheats Vegeto with Yancha. :crazy: Vegeto has a fatal disease and he leaves his money for his illegitimate son (he had an affair with #18 in the countryside on a day in the middle of summer :thumbdown: ). Now talking seriously about this Special, it has nothing to do with DB. This Special = Cheap soap opera of drama :eh:. Just my opinion.
Yes, because adding any sort of dramatic effect at all is automatically a soap opera. :P

I'm excited to see what the fights we missed were like too, woot.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by jjgp1112 » Fri Sep 06, 2013 2:46 pm

Chi-Chi's reasoning makes complete sense. Cool page.
DannyDBZfanforever wrote:Big Fail is Fail. This special looks more like a soap opera :oops: . What comes next? Bulma is getting married again. And then she cheats Vegeto with Yancha. :crazy: Vegeto has a fatal disease and he leaves his money for his illegitimate son (he had an affair with #18 in the countryside on a day in the middle of summer :thumbdown: ). Now talking seriously about this Special, it has nothing to do with DB. This Special = Cheap soap opera of drama :eh:. Just my opinion.
It was ONE DAMN PAGE and the rest of the special was action. Absolutely nothing warranted this post.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Marco Polo » Fri Sep 06, 2013 2:57 pm

The storytelling is pretty strange in this page and the last one. We had 16 pages of Vegetto fighting Buu (i.e. one single plot point), and now we have 2 pages where we're bombarded with at least four different plot points in one or two panels each.

Add to this the fact that almost all panels in these last two pages are just simple face shots and that they've almost totally dropped the ball on drawing backgrounds, and this makes this seems like some sort of visual plot draft instead of an actual comic.

They should have either expanded these two pages (but I guess that would be too much "soap drama" for some readers) or just have the narrator summarizes this in one short text block (like Akira Toriyama would have done).
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Post by miguelnuva1 » Fri Sep 06, 2013 5:07 pm

The Chi Chi Vegito thing is handled much better here to me than the novel.
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