Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

[hulkty]

This makes it sound like Rigor obtained the SSJ5 form in an artificial way. Really interested to see how my theories hold up.

Anyway if you like an idea, like Goku or Oob possession, just do it!

Do whatever you like with your fanmanga, execution >>> originality.
Just my two cents..

Rigor's forms are unique due to being the Legendary Saiyan of the DBNA timeline, not Broly.

Goku being possessed was just a thought. The way things played out with Oob in DBNA was planned. I want Oob to be more than he was in GT. Thats why he's training with Kaiosama. The other reason Goku wasnt possessed was because (up until a few months ago) he was originally going to be the one to defeat Aladjinn.

I am doing what I like hence why I didnt follow some other people's "advice" to basically trash my whole doujinshi and restart from scratch, but almost completely copy off of DB Absalon.

Everything looks good to me so far, don't change.
Do you mean Broly doesn't even exist in DBNA, or just isn't the LSSj?
Your Aladjinn Saga is almost perfect so far, but I agree that the Rigor Saga needs work. ...I'm not a fan of him having a secret family of saiyans on a different planet either. :/ Maybe you can just edit them out somehow? Or do they really have an important role in the future?

[Malik_DBNA]

Everything looks good to me so far, don't change.
Do you mean Broly doesn't even exist in DBNA, or just isn't the LSSj?
Your Aladjinn Saga is almost perfect so far, but I agree that the Rigor Saga needs work. ...I'm not a fan of him having a secret family of saiyans on a different planet either. :/ Maybe you can just edit them out somehow? Or do they really have an important role in the future?

Broly does not exist.

They are VERY important in the future. And I don't think its that far of a stretch, especially compared to some of the other stories I've seen/ read (whole thriving populations of Saiyans, planets of Legendary Super Saiyans, etc.)

[dbzfan7]

(whole thriving populations of Saiyans, planets of Legendary Super Saiyans, etc.)

Oh GodKamiKingKaioshin

I can here them all shouting Kakarotto.

[Malik_DBNA]

(whole thriving populations of Saiyans, planets of Legendary Super Saiyans, etc.)

Oh GodKamiKingKaioshin

I can here them all shouting Kakarotto.

Oh believe me man, I think I've seen it all thanks to people sending me fan fics and doujinshi. Here's some of the toppers:

1 - Son Gohan, for some unknown reason, divorces Videl and marries an unknown powerless woman named Sarah. They have a son called "Son Nick". He was born a Super Saiyan 4. He can access 20 Super Saiyan forms, and beats all of his opponents in 1-5 moves (literally, the last 'boss' villain i saw him fight he killed with one move). He then gets a SSJ form with 4 angel wings, blue fur, green hair, and can basically do whatever he wants to reality.

2 - Broly is resurrected (again), becomes good, and marries a female Legendary Super Saiyan... named Tiffany... who has been living on Earth all her life They go to Planet where there are nothing but Super Saiyans (from where, IDK), and wind up becoming King and Queen of a Planet of Legendary Super Saiyans.

3 - Videl cheats on Gohan with Piccolo and has a half-human half-namek would can somehow become a Super Saiyan...

4 - Son Goku, Son Gohan, Son Goten, Trunks, Vegeta, Pan, and Bra all use some BIZARRE set of Potara earrings and form some weird ass fusion of all of them. They fight some demon god (who wipes out all life in the universe by thinking) and wind up destroying the universe, which they then just 'put back together' by unfusing (at will, I might add)

5 - Freeza is brought back to life by a machine that copies the powers of the Dragon Balls. He's now stronger than a SSJ4 for no other reason than he just is. He steals all 3 sets of dragon balls (the normal ones, the namek ones, and the black star balls) and absorbs them like Omega Shenron. He grants his own wishes and becomes omnipotent, and Goku and Vegeta permanently fuse into Gogeta (somehow) and use the same machine to wish themselves to have the same powers as Freeza has. Gogeta destroys Freeza (who becomes trapped in all the dragon balls), and Gogeta basically becomes god

[DBZGTKOSDH]

(whole thriving populations of Saiyans, planets of Legendary Super Saiyans, etc.)

Oh GodKamiKingKaioshin

I can here them all shouting Kakarotto.

Oh believe me man, I think I've seen it all thanks to people sending me fan fics and doujinshi. Here's some of the toppers:

1 - Son Gohan, for some unknown reason, divorces Videl and marries an unknown powerless woman named Sarah. They have a son called "Son Nick". He was born a Super Saiyan 4. He can access 20 Super Saiyan forms, and beats all of his opponents in 1-5 moves (literally, the last 'boss' villain i saw him fight he killed with one move). He then gets a SSJ form with 4 angel wings, blue fur, green hair, and can basically do whatever he wants to reality.

2 - Broly is resurrected (again), becomes good, and marries a female Legendary Super Saiyan... named Tiffany... who has been living on Earth all her life They go to Planet where there are nothing but Super Saiyans (from where, IDK), and wind up becoming King and Queen of a Planet of Legendary Super Saiyans.

3 - Videl cheats on Gohan with Piccolo and has a half-human half-namek would can somehow become a Super Saiyan...

4 - Son Goku, Son Gohan, Son Goten, Trunks, Vegeta, Pan, and Bra all use some BIZARRE set of Potara earrings and form some weird ass fusion of all of them. They fight some demon god (who wipes out all life in the universe by thinking) and wind up destroying the universe, which they then just 'put back together' by unfusing (at will, I might add)

5 - Freeza is brought back to life by a machine that copies the powers of the Dragon Balls. He's now stronger than a SSJ4 for no other reason than he just is. He steals all 3 sets of dragon balls (the normal ones, the namek ones, and the black star balls) and absorbs them like Omega Shenron. He grants his own wishes and becomes omnipotent, and Goku and Vegeta permanently fuse into Gogeta (somehow) and use the same machine to wish themselves to have the same powers as Freeza has. Gogeta destroys Freeza (who becomes trapped in all the dragon balls), and Gogeta basically becomes god

You forgot that the Z-Warriors moved to New York.

[dbzfan7]

Oh believe me man, I think I've seen it all thanks to people sending me fan fics and doujinshi. Here's some of the toppers:

1 - Son Gohan, for some unknown reason, divorces Videl and marries an unknown powerless woman named Sarah. They have a son called "Son Nick". He was born a Super Saiyan 4. He can access 20 Super Saiyan forms, and beats all of his opponents in 1-5 moves (literally, the last 'boss' villain i saw him fight he killed with one move). He then gets a SSJ form with 4 angel wings, blue fur, green hair, and can basically do whatever he wants to reality.

2 - Broly is resurrected (again), becomes good, and marries a female Legendary Super Saiyan... named Tiffany... who has been living on Earth all her life They go to Planet where there are nothing but Super Saiyans (from where, IDK), and wind up becoming King and Queen of a Planet of Legendary Super Saiyans.

3 - Videl cheats on Gohan with Piccolo and has a half-human half-namek would can somehow become a Super Saiyan...

4 - Son Goku, Son Gohan, Son Goten, Trunks, Vegeta, Pan, and Bra all use some BIZARRE set of Potara earrings and form some weird ass fusion of all of them. They fight some demon god (who wipes out all life in the universe by thinking) and wind up destroying the universe, which they then just 'put back together' by unfusing (at will, I might add)

5 - Freeza is brought back to life by a machine that copies the powers of the Dragon Balls. He's now stronger than a SSJ4 for no other reason than he just is. He steals all 3 sets of dragon balls (the normal ones, the namek ones, and the black star balls) and absorbs them like Omega Shenron. He grants his own wishes and becomes omnipotent, and Goku and Vegeta permanently fuse into Gogeta (somehow) and use the same machine to wish themselves to have the same powers as Freeza has. Gogeta destroys Freeza (who becomes trapped in all the dragon balls), and Gogeta basically becomes god

So the "writer" basically took a shit and this came out. Or more likely his shit took a shit and this came out.

[Malik_DBNA]

Oh believe me man, I think I've seen it all thanks to people sending me fan fics and doujinshi. Here's some of the toppers:

1 - Son Gohan, for some unknown reason, divorces Videl and marries an unknown powerless woman named Sarah. They have a son called "Son Nick". He was born a Super Saiyan 4. He can access 20 Super Saiyan forms, and beats all of his opponents in 1-5 moves (literally, the last 'boss' villain i saw him fight he killed with one move). He then gets a SSJ form with 4 angel wings, blue fur, green hair, and can basically do whatever he wants to reality.

2 - Broly is resurrected (again), becomes good, and marries a female Legendary Super Saiyan... named Tiffany... who has been living on Earth all her life They go to Planet where there are nothing but Super Saiyans (from where, IDK), and wind up becoming King and Queen of a Planet of Legendary Super Saiyans.

3 - Videl cheats on Gohan with Piccolo and has a half-human half-namek would can somehow become a Super Saiyan...

4 - Son Goku, Son Gohan, Son Goten, Trunks, Vegeta, Pan, and Bra all use some BIZARRE set of Potara earrings and form some weird ass fusion of all of them. They fight some demon god (who wipes out all life in the universe by thinking) and wind up destroying the universe, which they then just 'put back together' by unfusing (at will, I might add)

5 - Freeza is brought back to life by a machine that copies the powers of the Dragon Balls. He's now stronger than a SSJ4 for no other reason than he just is. He steals all 3 sets of dragon balls (the normal ones, the namek ones, and the black star balls) and absorbs them like Omega Shenron. He grants his own wishes and becomes omnipotent, and Goku and Vegeta permanently fuse into Gogeta (somehow) and use the same machine to wish themselves to have the same powers as Freeza has. Gogeta destroys Freeza (who becomes trapped in all the dragon balls), and Gogeta basically becomes god

So the "writer" basically took a shit and this came out. Or more likely his shit took a shit and this came out.

oh these are 5 DIFFERENT writers/ stories

[dbzfan7]

oh these are 5 DIFFERENT writers/ stories

I know. But maybe they all got in contact so they could join the Nirvana of Shit. All hail their lameness.

[Malik_DBNA]

oh these are 5 DIFFERENT writers/ stories

I know. But maybe they all got in contact so they could join the Nirvana of Shit.

XD

[TheGmGoken]

(whole thriving populations of Saiyans, planets of Legendary Super Saiyans, etc.)

Oh GodKamiKingKaioshin

I can here them all shouting Kakarotto.

Oh believe me man, I think I've seen it all thanks to people sending me fan fics and doujinshi. Here's some of the toppers:

1 - Son Gohan, for some unknown reason, divorces Videl and marries an unknown powerless woman named Sarah. They have a son called "Son Nick". He was born a Super Saiyan 4. He can access 20 Super Saiyan forms, and beats all of his opponents in 1-5 moves (literally, the last 'boss' villain i saw him fight he killed with one move). He then gets a SSJ form with 4 angel wings, blue fur, green hair, and can basically do whatever he wants to reality.

2 - Broly is resurrected (again), becomes good, and marries a female Legendary Super Saiyan... named Tiffany... who has been living on Earth all her life They go to Planet where there are nothing but Super Saiyans (from where, IDK), and wind up becoming King and Queen of a Planet of Legendary Super Saiyans.

3 - Videl cheats on Gohan with Piccolo and has a half-human half-namek would can somehow become a Super Saiyan...

4 - Son Goku, Son Gohan, Son Goten, Trunks, Vegeta, Pan, and Bra all use some BIZARRE set of Potara earrings and form some weird ass fusion of all of them. They fight some demon god (who wipes out all life in the universe by thinking) and wind up destroying the universe, which they then just 'put back together' by unfusing (at will, I might add)

5 - Freeza is brought back to life by a machine that copies the powers of the Dragon Balls. He's now stronger than a SSJ4 for no other reason than he just is. He steals all 3 sets of dragon balls (the normal ones, the namek ones, and the black star balls) and absorbs them like Omega Shenron. He grants his own wishes and becomes omnipotent, and Goku and Vegeta permanently fuse into Gogeta (somehow) and use the same machine to wish themselves to have the same powers as Freeza has. Gogeta destroys Freeza (who becomes trapped in all the dragon balls), and Gogeta basically becomes god

You know I just lost 30% of DBZ knowledge because of this and yea. What's a SSJ again? Sorry I forgot because this was so stupid. So Half Namek/Human (Does Piccolo have balls?) can turn SSJ? Sorry. What do people of the DBZ community be thinking some times? Do they watch lifetime and put it in DB?

[dbzfan7]

Are we allowed a shitty fanfic thread? Or is that too negative?

[TheGmGoken]

Are we allowed a shitty fanfic thread? Or is that too negative?

I barely got away with the Funny but stupid things fan topic. So I think it would be to negative. You got to word it right like I did. You could say Ridiculous Fanfic plots or something like that.

[hulkty]

No new page today?

[Malik_DBNA]

No new page today?

Its about half inked, but I was running behind today. It'll be up tomorrow

[dbzfan7]

No new page today?

Its about half inked, but I was running behind today. It'll be up tomorrow

How come Mr. Satan is dead. Was he too OP so he had to be put down before he kicked the crap out of Rigor and Aladjinn. The universe doesn't allow Mr. Satan to die.

[TheGmGoken]

No new page today?

Its about half inked, but I was running behind today. It'll be up tomorrow

How come Mr. Satan is dead. Was he too OP so he had to be put down before he kicked the crap out of Rigor and Aladjinn. The universe doesn't allow Mr. Satan to die.

Chuck Norris finally broke into the DB Universe. Not even Satan can beat that

[dbzfan7]

Chuck Norris finally broke into the DB Universe. Not even Satan can beat that

BULLSHIT. Mr. Satan can't die. He's the only character who has never died besides Kibitoshin. The Universe won't allow him to die. If trouble happens then Chuck would be sent into the sun somehow.

[TheGmGoken]

Chuck Norris finally broke into the DB Universe. Not even Satan can beat that

BULLSHIT. Mr. Satan can't die. He's the only character who has never died besides Kibitoshin. The Universe won't allow him to die. If trouble happens then Chuck would be sent into the sun somehow.

Chuck Norris scarred the sun away. The Universe fears Chuck Norris. Who you think taught Satan all his skills. Chuck Norris did. Chuck realized that Satan is getting to strong so he killed him before he could surpass the Great one.

[dbzfan7]

Chuck Norris scarred the sun away. The Universe fears Chuck Norris. Who you think taught Satan all his skills. Chuck Norris did. Chuck realized that Satan is getting to strong so he killed him before he could surpass the Great one.

Chuck Norris is a bitch and a fraud. Mr. Satan is he real deal.

[TheGmGoken]

Chuck Norris scarred the sun away. The Universe fears Chuck Norris. Who you think taught Satan all his skills. Chuck Norris did. Chuck realized that Satan is getting to strong so he killed him before he could surpass the Great one.

Chuck Norris is a bitch and a fraud. Mr. Satan is he real deal.

It's okay. He cheated Satan of his life. We the DBz fans must riot. Where you think his beard came from? Mr. Satan's hair. That's why he lost his hair ith age. Age can't beat Satan. But Chuck "The Bitch" Norris shaved Satan's head and put on his chin so he could kick Satan's ass.