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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Marco Polo » Tue Jan 14, 2014 2:10 pm

Gyt Kaliba wrote:...Though I guess it is kind of unnecessary either way, since the main point is they wanna eat him, not what they want to cook him up as.
Well, this is the problem. The note is completely unnecessary and almost overwhelms the mini-comic by how verbose it is. Imagine someone telling you a hilarious joke and then immediately afterwards that same person tries to tell you very plain facts about cooking terminology while you're still laughing.

When a standup comedian tells jokes, they let the audience some time to laugh between each sequence.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Kamiccolo9 » Wed Jan 15, 2014 3:12 pm

Is it just me, or did the guy draw Nail in that top panel by mistake? I mean, is Piccolo ever seen with his cape, but without his turban at any point?
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Gyt Kaliba » Wed Jan 15, 2014 3:13 pm

For a split second there, I wondered why Guru had a picture of Nail on his wall. Then I wondered why Nail was looking in grumpily through a window. Then I actually got what was going on.

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Post by coola » Wed Jan 15, 2014 3:24 pm

It was same in manga actually, Piccolo was without turban.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Marco Polo » Wed Jan 15, 2014 8:03 pm

What?
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Post by Gyt Kaliba » Fri Jan 17, 2014 3:36 pm

Oh wow, brain fart. Somehow it didn't even click in my head that Kuririn hadn't gotten the same power-up in this version yet.
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Post by Mystic Buu » Sun Jan 19, 2014 3:08 pm

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Zarbon's face looks kinda weird.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by coola » Mon Jan 20, 2014 3:07 pm

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Something is wrong with Gohan face at 2nd panel, but, i can`t tell exactly what, Gohan is little OOC, until he became SSJ2 in Cell Saga, he never was so cocky. I'm sorry for keeping quoting Abridged, but, seeing Appule prisoned in that village remind me of Radditz "That`s why dad said i couldn`t keep Appule"
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Post by TheOverlyMadHatter » Mon Jan 20, 2014 3:27 pm

coola wrote:Something is wrong with Gohan face at 2nd panel, but, i can`t tell exactly what, Gohan is little OOC, until he became SSJ2 in Cell Saga, he never was so cocky. I'm sorry for keeping quoting Abridged, but, seeing Appule prisoned in that village remind me of Radditz "That`s why dad said i couldn`t keep Appule"
I wouldn't say he's cocky, just confident. And even then, he's just eager to save lives like he was with Dende. He DID intend to fight Dodoria before Kuririn reigned him in. But hey, we're finally starting to see what could be major deviations as a result of Vegeta's death.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by DBZGTKOSDH » Mon Jan 20, 2014 4:11 pm

I hope we won't see Gohan kicking Zarbon's ass... Gohan's BP in the manga was stated to be above 10.000, and Zarbon's was between 24.000 & 18.000, and he is above 24.000 after transforming (I only take into account the manga since it's the only thing Salagir follows, along with some movies). So, if that happens, we have a plot-hole.
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Superman is, and always has been, a symbol for truth, justice, and upstanding moral fortitude–a role model and leader as much as a fighter. The more down-to-earth Goku has no illusions about being responsible for maintaining social order, or for setting some kind of moral example for the entire world. Goku is simply a martial artist who’s devoted his life toward perfecting his fighting skills and other abilities. Though never shy about risking his life to save either one person or the entire world, he just doesn’t believe that the balance of the world rests in any way on his shoulders, and he has no need to shape any part of it in his image. Goku is an idealist, and believes that there is some good in everyone, but he is unconcerned with the big picture of the world…unless it has to do with some kind of fight. Politics, society, law and order don’t have much bearing on his life, but he’s a man who knows right from wrong.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Kaboom » Mon Jan 20, 2014 4:15 pm

DBZGTKOSDH wrote:I hope we won't see Gohan kicking Zarbon's ass... Gohan's BP in the manga was stated to be above 10.000, and Zarbon's was between 24.000 & 18.000. So, if that happens, we have a plot-hole.
It also kept steadily rising. He was somewhere between 10,000 and 15,000 against the Ginyu Force, but was able to fight Ginyu-Goku's 23,000 very well just a little later. Then by the time the fight with Freeza happened, he was in the hundreds of thousands. Granted that some of this growth was thanks to Saiyan healing boosts, but not all of it. Kuririn doesn't get those and even he ended up pushing 100 thousand.

So, uh... point being that based on how much time the author here has had pass, it's not unbelievable that Gohan could kick Zarbon or Dodoria's ass.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by DBZGTKOSDH » Mon Jan 20, 2014 4:23 pm

Kaboom wrote:It also kept steadily rising. He was somewhere between 10,000 and 15,000 against the Ginyu Force, but was able to fight Ginyu-Goku's 23,000 very well just a little later. Then by the time the fight with Freeza happened, he was in the hundreds of thousands. Granted that some of this growth was thanks to Saiyan healing boosts, but not all of it. Kuririn doesn't get those and even he ended up pushing 100 thousand.
I'm aware, but the steady rising wasn't so fast. He got to over 23.000 after both a lot of time passed and a near-death power-up.
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Superman is, and always has been, a symbol for truth, justice, and upstanding moral fortitude–a role model and leader as much as a fighter. The more down-to-earth Goku has no illusions about being responsible for maintaining social order, or for setting some kind of moral example for the entire world. Goku is simply a martial artist who’s devoted his life toward perfecting his fighting skills and other abilities. Though never shy about risking his life to save either one person or the entire world, he just doesn’t believe that the balance of the world rests in any way on his shoulders, and he has no need to shape any part of it in his image. Goku is an idealist, and believes that there is some good in everyone, but he is unconcerned with the big picture of the world…unless it has to do with some kind of fight. Politics, society, law and order don’t have much bearing on his life, but he’s a man who knows right from wrong.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dario03 » Mon Jan 20, 2014 6:01 pm

Maybe unlocking Gohan first will make his power unlock faster. I think its said that unlocking power doesn't worsen the elders condition but maybe that ability itself weakens so in the regular story Gohan's unlock took longer but since he is stronger, him and Krillin stayed close for a while. Or maybe they will just run off or the story will go similar to the main and there will be a round 2 and Gohan's zenkai will make him stronger than Zarbon.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by mAcChaos » Mon Jan 20, 2014 7:07 pm

Gohan is probably just excited from his powerup and overestimating his strength. He's going to get a wakeup call.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by RandomGuy96 » Mon Jan 20, 2014 7:09 pm

I don't have a problem with the art style overall, but Zarbon always looks derp.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by mAcChaos » Mon Jan 20, 2014 7:48 pm

He needs to look even more fabulous.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Marco Polo » Mon Jan 20, 2014 11:09 pm

coola wrote:Something is wrong with Gohan face at 2nd panel
He looks unlike a manga character and more like this guy:

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Mystic Buu » Tue Jan 21, 2014 3:29 pm

Marco Polo wrote:
coola wrote:Something is wrong with Gohan face at 2nd panel
He looks unlike a manga character and more like this guy:

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