Kai: Freeza's Met His Match [Fandub]

[El Diabeetus]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0xMLmCbIBAg

This is a quick fandub of Goku's rage toward Freeza. I wanted to try a scene with an angry Goku since I've mainly only done scenes where he's happy. Freeza, well, I wanted to do this scene as him since I like his dialouge here. A small clip.

Voices:
SSJ4 Furanki: Freeza and Goku

The music is Track 11 from the Battle of Gods OST.

Enjoy!

[OmegaRockman]

Great job, good sir! Your Freeza is always a treat to hear.

[TheAldella]

Likes: Saiyan pronounciation, Frieza's lower tone. The sound mixing.
Dislikes: The voices sound far too similiar. The deliveries are similiar as well. The tone of each line sounded the same as the next. The pronouncing issue you pulled to match flips irked me, too.

All in all, generally sloppy work, I felt.

[Mystic Buu]

Freeza sounded little weird,but Goku is good.

[El Diabeetus]

Great job, good sir! Your Freeza is always a treat to hear.

Thanks! Glad you like it!

Likes: Saiyan pronounciation, Freeza's lower tone. The sound mixing.
Dislikes: The voices sound far too similiar. The deliveries are similiar as well. The tone of each line sounded the same as the next. The pronouncing issue you pulled to match flips irked me, too.

All in all, generally sloppy work, I felt.

All seem to be very valid points. Yeah, they're similar pitches so I was hoping they'd be different enough. Generally try to avoid voicing both (at the same time anyway) for that reason. They both come from a similar part of my voice, so that's probably why the deliveries are similar. My deliveries were slightly different timing wise for one of Goku's lines and I reworded Freeza's line so he referred to himself as "Lord Freeza", should have double checked the Japanese version to make sure. But, him referring to himself in the 3rd person was probably a 'Freeza-sama' moment in the original Japanese version. The pronouncing issue, I didn't notice that one. I thought it worked just fine. Assuming you're talking about Freeza, but that may just be the slight influence from Ayres' Freeza. So, I may have picked some odd choices to keep it in character. Yeah, rewatching, I did have some lines in the same tone. But, for those I was trying to get the 'Freeza's being a total douche/snarky beyond belief.' tone across.

Luckily, the sound mixing wasn't too tough this time around (picked a track from BoG, I thought might work similarly to the Yamamoto piece that played in the original clip). I may do more clips with Freeza and Goku, but not together. Or I'll find somebody else to play Goku so that's not an issue.
Was something I threw together quickly, so that may explain the 'sloppy work'. Though, I did a few takes for each Freeza line 'til I felt it fit the animation. Goku, I only had to do about 2 each for his two lines.

I do welcome the criticism though, since I am trying to improve on this.

Freeza sounded little weird,but Goku is good.

I got'cha.