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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Malik_DBNA » Wed Apr 09, 2014 6:14 am

Skar wrote: We have the usual fanfic SSJ5. Rigor is another mutated Saiyan and essentially a smarter version of Broly who King Vegeta also tried to murder as a baby because he felt he was a threat.

Piccolo can now become a +SSJ4 tier "Sage Namek" which is a stronger variation of the "Super Namek" he was before. The way he achieved it was with an old Sage Namek manual that apparently Dende knew about this entire time. He didn't have enough time to read it all so Dende introduced him to a stronger variation of the Hyperbolic Time Chamber called the Transient Time Isolation Chamber. The Hyperbolic Time Chamber itself was a pretty cheap plot device since it was on the lookout all those years and Kami never brought it up. That still isn't a good excuse to use an even cheaper plot device based on it.

#18 has some kind of power inhibitor created by Gero that Bulma removes and this allows her to become Ascended SSJ4 tier. It didn't make sense that an Earth scientist could create human cyborgs stronger than Freeza and cyborg Freeza. That still isn't a good excuse to take it to the extreme and make her stronger than every canon villain.

As if Cell and 13-15 weren't enough we have Android 22 who is yet another android build by Gero's computer.

These ideas aren't that difficult to come up with. The most common fanfic themes are new Saiyans attacking the Earth and Gero's computer building another android. I've honestly lost count how many fanfics I've read that used a slight variation of these ideas.
About Super 18 and Piccolo, who ever said they were SSJ4+ tier? As for #22, that whole 'built by Gero's computer' thing was changed. The TTIC itself is the remnants of the ROST.

I won't argue about the whole of the story, because that's your opinion. There are plenty of people who like the art and story, just the story, and/or just the art. I do work hard on the story, but I won't be able to please everybody. Hell, even Toriyama himself can't please everyone (I see all the complaints about Majin Boo, the androids, Cell, and Dragon Ball Minus)

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Skar » Wed Apr 09, 2014 2:57 pm

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Skar wrote:If Toriyama did come up with the story for Battle of Gods then DBM was actually the closest to what he intended with the idea of other universes.
No, the Universes in BoG are nothing like the Universes in DBM.
Was that really the only point that stood out to you in my comment =P? I think it's clear that the universes in DBM are different than the universes of Battle of Gods since one goes with the Multiverse theory of there being an nearly-infinite number of alternate universes while the other has a set number of 12. I never said the actual universes are the same just the concept and reasoning for why they introduced more universes.
Malik_DBNA wrote:I won't argue about the whole of the story, because that's your opinion. There are plenty of people who like the art and story, just the story, and/or just the art. I do work hard on the story, but I won't be able to please everybody. Hell, even Toriyama himself can't please everyone (I see all the complaints about Majin Boo, the androids, Cell, and Dragon Ball Minus)
Well I understand some people like the story. I'm just saying that if Toriyama wrote a sequel he wouldn't recycle past villains and plot devices and look for something new at add to the story.

If you recall what he said in this interview from the Daizenshuu 2:

From there, the enemy characters rapidly began to escalate.
Having become the strongest on the Earth, Goku and co. had also beat the Saiyans who came from outside of Earth and then they went out into the universe. I came up with Freeza around the time of the Bubble2, and the land shark was the worst person of all. So I made him the #1 land shark in the universe.

The next to appear where the Artificial Humans and Cell.
Since they had become the strongest in even the universe, they next had to surpass time. So with that I did time-travel stuff, but it was really rough. Time paradox, is it? I quickly got bogged down.

After Piccolo Jr and Goku were the strongest on Earth he didn't go with another evil Namek or super strong tournament contestant. He decided to bring in fighters from other planets. After the Saiyan saga he never had another evil Saiyan attack the Earth. He decided to take it the next level and include the strongest (mortal) in the universe. That was something Toei never understood when writing GT. In the BS saga there were several super powerful aliens apparently stronger than Frieza. If Toriyama wanted other aliens stronger than Frieza he would have introduced them not move on to another type of villain. Toriyama was done with the android idea in the Cell saga but Toei and many fanfics thought it would be clever to reuse the same idea. In the Buu saga he introduced the concept of fusion and Buu who was the biggest threat in the history of the universe. Like I said it's a little hard to top that. If an author wants to create a stronger villain they should come up with something new not just a slight variation of a past villain. Even Bills and Whis who were stronger than Buu were more like neutral gods than villains.

That's what I liked about DBM because it was an attempt at something different. I think a good example would be Dissidia Final Fantasy which followed a similar concept. The characters in each Final Fantasy game are pretty much the strongest in their particular universe at the end of the game. It's going to hard to write a sequel for them and come up with a plausible villain stronger than Sepiroth for FF7 or Ultimecia for FF8 for example. They decided to have the characters team up and face a multiverse threat. I think there's a tournament option in the game so it does follow the same idea of the strongest heroes of one universe facing off against the strongest heroes of another. I remember in Power Rangers there was an episode where the Red Rangers from multiple universes teamed up which I thought was pretty cool.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by RandomGuy96 » Wed Apr 09, 2014 2:58 pm

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Hopefully, Buu lightly leaning on Tenshinhan will result in a OHKO, and then we can move on.

Also, Buu still looks about two heads too short.
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dbgtFO wrote: Please elaborate as I do not know what you mean by "pushing Vegeta's destruction"
He's probably referring to the Bardock special. Zarbon was the one who first recommended destroying Planet Vegeta because the saiyans were rapidly growing in strength.
It was actually Beerus disguised as Zarbon #StayWoke
Herms wrote:The fact that the ridiculous power inflation is presented so earnestly makes me just roll my eyes and snicker. Like with Freeza, where he starts off over 10 times stronger than all his henchmen except Ginyu (because...well, just because), then we find out he can transform and get even more powerful, and then he reveals he can transform two more times, before finally coming out with the fact that he hasn't even been using anywhere near 50% of his power. Oh, and he can survive in the vacuum of space. All this stuff is just presented as the way Freeza is, without even an attempt at rationalizing it, yet the tone dictates we're supposed to take all this silly grasping at straws as thrilling danger. So I guess I don't really take the power inflation in the Boo arc seriously, but I don't take the power inflation in earlier arcs seriously either, so there's no net loss of seriousness. I think a silly story presented as serious is harder to accept than a silly story presented as silly.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Malik_DBNA » Wed Apr 09, 2014 3:40 pm

Skar wrote: Well I understand some people like the story. I'm just saying that if Toriyama wrote a sequel he wouldn't recycle past villains and plot devices and look for something new at add to the story.

If you recall what he said in this interview from the Daizenshuu 2:

From there, the enemy characters rapidly began to escalate.
Having become the strongest on the Earth, Goku and co. had also beat the Saiyans who came from outside of Earth and then they went out into the universe. I came up with Freeza around the time of the Bubble2, and the land shark was the worst person of all. So I made him the #1 land shark in the universe.

The next to appear where the Artificial Humans and Cell.
Since they had become the strongest in even the universe, they next had to surpass time. So with that I did time-travel stuff, but it was really rough. Time paradox, is it? I quickly got bogged down.

After Piccolo Jr and Goku were the strongest on Earth he didn't go with another evil Namek or super strong tournament contestant. He decided to bring in fighters from other planets. After the Saiyan saga he never had another evil Saiyan attack the Earth. He decided to take it the next level and include the strongest (mortal) in the universe. That was something Toei never understood when writing GT. In the BS saga there were several super powerful aliens apparently stronger than Freeza. If Toriyama wanted other aliens stronger than Freeza he would have introduced them not move on to another type of villain. Toriyama was done with the android idea in the Cell saga but Toei and many fanfics thought it would be clever to reuse the same idea. In the Buu saga he introduced the concept of fusion and Buu who was the biggest threat in the history of the universe. Like I said it's a little hard to top that. If an author wants to create a stronger villain they should come up with something new not just a slight variation of a past villain. Even Bills and Whis who were stronger than Buu were more like neutral gods than villains.

That's what I liked about DBM because it was an attempt at something different. I think a good example would be Dissidia Final Fantasy which followed a similar concept. The characters in each Final Fantasy game are pretty much the strongest in their particular universe at the end of the game. It's going to hard to write a sequel for them and come up with a plausible villain stronger than Sepiroth for FF7 or Ultimecia for FF8 for example. They decided to have the characters team up and face a multiverse threat. I think there's a tournament option in the game so it does follow the same idea of the strongest heroes of one universe facing off against the strongest heroes of another. I remember in Power Rangers there was an episode where the Red Rangers from multiple universes teamed up which I thought was pretty cool.
All valid points, and your statement about DBM at least trying to go in a different direction than most is one reason why I personally like it so much. It really is something that hasn't been done before. It isn't without its flaws, but its a fanmanga, so there are bound to be some.

I made it a point to never use past villains like GT and Toyble's AF did (Cell, Freeza, resurrecting Broly, etc.), which seems to be the most common trope among DB fanmanga, and one I sought avoid. I can see where some plot points that get used would possibly annoy some people. The reason I used them wasn't because I wasn't trying, but because some of them were plot points that enamored the original series to me, and I incorporated into the original version of my story. I have since changed A LOT of my story.

For example, as of right now, Rigor and Aladjinn are the ONLY villains whose original power will be beyond SSJ4 tier, Rigor because he is the Legendary Saiyan and Aladjinn because he's one of the 4 Aspect Lords/ original gods. I have plans for Goku and Vegeta to become removed from the main roster later, which frees up for weaker villains that no longer have to be exceedingly more powerful than Omega Shenron. What you said about Bills and Whiss being neutral rather than flat out evil somewhat applies to Rigor as well. Sure he wants to kill Vegeta, but he has a valid reason to want to (the guy killed his mom). Other than that, he could care less about everyone else. Had he never even discovered Vegeta was alive, he'd have lived out the rest of his days in peace and no one would ever have seen hide nor hair of him again. Aladjinn, conversely, isn't just evil, but rather the PUREST and most powerful evil, who doesn't even reside within the confines of the Universe. As an Aspect Lord, he resides outside them in the Godly Realms.

The whole Super Androids Saga has been COMPLETELY rewritten, and I've debated that this particular Saga might not even happen. If it did, these particular Androids would NOT be Dr. Gero's creations.

But, like I said, we could sit here and nitpick things here and nitpick things there, but it wouldn't get us anywhere. Sorry to pull the thread off topic. I will scamper off now.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by RandomGuy96 » Wed Apr 09, 2014 3:44 pm

He decided to take it the next level and include the strongest (mortal) in the universe. That was something Toei never understood. In the BS saga there were several super powerful aliens apparently stronger than Freeza.
Replace "Freeza" with "Vegeta" and Toei with "Toriyama" in your post and you pretty much have the Freeza saga.
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dbgtFO wrote: Please elaborate as I do not know what you mean by "pushing Vegeta's destruction"
He's probably referring to the Bardock special. Zarbon was the one who first recommended destroying Planet Vegeta because the saiyans were rapidly growing in strength.
It was actually Beerus disguised as Zarbon #StayWoke
Herms wrote:The fact that the ridiculous power inflation is presented so earnestly makes me just roll my eyes and snicker. Like with Freeza, where he starts off over 10 times stronger than all his henchmen except Ginyu (because...well, just because), then we find out he can transform and get even more powerful, and then he reveals he can transform two more times, before finally coming out with the fact that he hasn't even been using anywhere near 50% of his power. Oh, and he can survive in the vacuum of space. All this stuff is just presented as the way Freeza is, without even an attempt at rationalizing it, yet the tone dictates we're supposed to take all this silly grasping at straws as thrilling danger. So I guess I don't really take the power inflation in the Boo arc seriously, but I don't take the power inflation in earlier arcs seriously either, so there's no net loss of seriousness. I think a silly story presented as serious is harder to accept than a silly story presented as silly.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by miguelnuva1 » Wed Apr 09, 2014 3:58 pm

I personally like the idea of more Androids because I always felt Gero should of had a backup plan. Basically if Cell or the Androids or destroyed there is one more computer that would start recording data only after everyone was beat.

As for an evil Super Saiyan that idea was awesome because super saiyan power is our heroes ultimate trump card and to see that turned against them is interesting to me.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Flame Dragon » Wed Apr 09, 2014 4:45 pm

How come everybody always makes Vegeta the one to be possessed? It would be much more interesting if Goku was possessed, since he's supposedly the strongest, and it would be great character development for Gohan and Vegeta. Gohan fightning his father, his idol, and Vegeta fightning Goku like in the Saiyan Saga, except the roles being reversed, so Vegeta defending the earth and Goku trying to destroy it.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by DBZGTKOSDH » Wed Apr 09, 2014 4:48 pm

Skar wrote:I think it's clear that the universes in DBM are different than the universes of Battle of Gods since one goes with the Multiverse theory of there being an nearly-infinite number of alternate universes while the other has a set number of 12. I never said the actual universes are the same just the concept and reasoning for why they introduced more universes.
You mean that there is one universe with Goku, another with Future Trunks, etc? It's not like that. They are completely different worlds with different planets, aliens, gods, etc. It's like a different galaxy, not an alternative version of another.
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Superman is, and always has been, a symbol for truth, justice, and upstanding moral fortitude–a role model and leader as much as a fighter. The more down-to-earth Goku has no illusions about being responsible for maintaining social order, or for setting some kind of moral example for the entire world. Goku is simply a martial artist who’s devoted his life toward perfecting his fighting skills and other abilities. Though never shy about risking his life to save either one person or the entire world, he just doesn’t believe that the balance of the world rests in any way on his shoulders, and he has no need to shape any part of it in his image. Goku is an idealist, and believes that there is some good in everyone, but he is unconcerned with the big picture of the world…unless it has to do with some kind of fight. Politics, society, law and order don’t have much bearing on his life, but he’s a man who knows right from wrong.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Malik_DBNA » Wed Apr 09, 2014 5:04 pm

Flame Dragon wrote:How come everybody always makes Vegeta the one to be possessed? It would be much more interesting if Goku was possessed, since he's supposedly the strongest, and it would be great character development for Gohan and Vegeta. Gohan fightning his father, his idol, and Vegeta fightning Goku like in the Saiyan Saga, except the roles being reversed, so Vegeta defending the earth and Goku trying to destroy it.
I had originally thought of that, the Goku being possessed thing I mean. I have a few reasons why I went with Vegeta instead:

1) When I originally saw Majin Vegeta, I did not know what occurred during the Boo Saga. I had no internet at home and was limited to hearsay. I had originally thought that Vegeta was possessed by Majin Boo.

2) I see Goku like Heath Ledger's Joker saw Batman: "Completely, and truly, incorruptible." After a while, the thought of Goku being evil just didn't sit right with me for some reason.

3) In the original Aladjinn Saga plot, Aladjinn jumped from host to host. He possessed Vegeta, then Gohan, then Trunks, then Piccolo. It was too drawn out, and when I revised Aladjinn's backstory, I made him hop from a few alien bodies into just Vegeta.
4) Vegeta looks so bad ass with Aladjinn's markings on him :P

5) Dragon Ball EX's main arc involves Goku being possessed by some evil being. I didn't want people to think I was jockeying off his story
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Skar wrote:I think it's clear that the universes in DBM are different than the universes of Battle of Gods since one goes with the Multiverse theory of there being an nearly-infinite number of alternate universes while the other has a set number of 12. I never said the actual universes are the same just the concept and reasoning for why they introduced more universes.
You mean that there is one universe with Goku, another with Future Trunks, etc? It's not like that. They are completely different worlds with different planets, aliens, gods, etc. It's like a different galaxy, not an alternative version of another.
That was what I gathered from the official explanation of the alternate Universes for BoG. They were all their own unique Universes. Universe 7 is the only one with Saiyans/ Goku, and there are numerous PARALLEL TIMELINES to each Universe. Each Universe has countless alternate timelines, but individually, there are only 12 distinct Universes.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Skar » Wed Apr 09, 2014 5:30 pm

Malik_DBNA wrote:I made it a point to never use past villains like GT and Toyble's AF did (Cell, Freeza, resurrecting Broly, etc.), which seems to be the most common trope among DB fanmanga, and one I sought avoid.
To be honest almost all the New Age villains I read about in the original version just seemed like slight variations of past villains.
Rigor - A smarter mutated Saiyan like Broly with a very similar backstory.
Ketchappu - A scientist and last member of nearly extinct race who wants revenge on the last remaining Saiyans.
-Vegeta getting possessed for the third time. He was semi-possessed in the Buu saga and fully possessed in the Baby saga. This is a pretty common trope.

I'm not sure how much of the story you have planned to change. Honestly the first question I ask myself before reading a DBZ sequel fic is "I wonder what new android or evil Saiyan would be attacking the Earth in this story?" I used to enjoy the idea when I was younger but now I've read it so many times that I'm actually more surprised if I don't see them.
RandomGuy96 wrote:Replace "Freeza" with "Vegeta" and Toei with "Toriyama" in your post and you pretty much have the Freeza saga.
I think the only things they have in common is that they were both strong aliens. Vegeta was one of the last members of Goku's race and turned out to be just an employee of the next villain. Just because they were similar doesn't really give Toei the excuse to ignore the fact that Frieza was declared strongest in the universe. It wasn't even a point to contradicting that idea since all the BS saga villains were defeated by Goku with ease. They could have all been weaker than Frieza and it would have been the same result.
DBZGTKOSDH wrote:You mean that there is one universe with Goku, another with Future Trunks, etc? It's not like that. They are completely different worlds with different planets, aliens, gods, etc. It's like a different galaxy, not an alternative version of another.
No I never said that. I even said DBM was going with the multiverse theory while Battle of Gods apparently isn't. The only connection I made was there being other universes so the heroes could face other threats. I hope that clears up any confusion.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by DBZGTKOSDH » Wed Apr 09, 2014 5:41 pm

Skar wrote:No I never said that. I even said DBM was going with the multiverse theory while Battle of Gods apparently isn't. The only connection I made was there being other universes so the heroes could face other threats. I hope that clears up any confusion.
Oops, my bad then, sorry... :oops:
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Superman is, and always has been, a symbol for truth, justice, and upstanding moral fortitude–a role model and leader as much as a fighter. The more down-to-earth Goku has no illusions about being responsible for maintaining social order, or for setting some kind of moral example for the entire world. Goku is simply a martial artist who’s devoted his life toward perfecting his fighting skills and other abilities. Though never shy about risking his life to save either one person or the entire world, he just doesn’t believe that the balance of the world rests in any way on his shoulders, and he has no need to shape any part of it in his image. Goku is an idealist, and believes that there is some good in everyone, but he is unconcerned with the big picture of the world…unless it has to do with some kind of fight. Politics, society, law and order don’t have much bearing on his life, but he’s a man who knows right from wrong.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by RandomGuy96 » Wed Apr 09, 2014 5:42 pm

I think the only things they have in common is that they were both strong aliens. Vegeta was one of the last members of Goku's race and turned out to be just an employee of the next villain. Just because they were similar doesn't really give Toei the excuse to ignore the fact that Freeza was declared strongest in the universe. It wasn't even a point to contradicting that idea since all the BS saga villains were defeated by Goku with ease. They could have all been weaker than Freeza and it would have been the same result.
Freeza and Vegeta are the same person. They're both alien princes, they both commit genocide for profit, they both want immortality, they're both crazy durable, they're both arrogant as hell, they're both the strongest in the universe pre-retcon, they're both terrible bosses, they both slaughter villages of Nameks for no real reason, they're both spoiled brats, they both try to blow up the planet when they get pissy, they both throw a tantrum when outclassed, et cetera.

You mean like how Toriyama ignored that he already declared Vegeta the strongest in the universe when he pulled Freeza out of his ass?
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He's probably referring to the Bardock special. Zarbon was the one who first recommended destroying Planet Vegeta because the saiyans were rapidly growing in strength.
It was actually Beerus disguised as Zarbon #StayWoke
Herms wrote:The fact that the ridiculous power inflation is presented so earnestly makes me just roll my eyes and snicker. Like with Freeza, where he starts off over 10 times stronger than all his henchmen except Ginyu (because...well, just because), then we find out he can transform and get even more powerful, and then he reveals he can transform two more times, before finally coming out with the fact that he hasn't even been using anywhere near 50% of his power. Oh, and he can survive in the vacuum of space. All this stuff is just presented as the way Freeza is, without even an attempt at rationalizing it, yet the tone dictates we're supposed to take all this silly grasping at straws as thrilling danger. So I guess I don't really take the power inflation in the Boo arc seriously, but I don't take the power inflation in earlier arcs seriously either, so there's no net loss of seriousness. I think a silly story presented as serious is harder to accept than a silly story presented as silly.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Malik_DBNA » Wed Apr 09, 2014 5:53 pm

Skar wrote: To be honest almost all the New Age villains I read about in the original version just seemed like slight variations of past villains.
Rigor - A smarter mutated Saiyan like Broly with a very similar backstory.
Ketchappu - A scientist and last member of nearly extinct race who wants revenge on the last remaining Saiyans.
A lot changed with those two specifically.

Rigor - Rigor is the Legendary Saiyan of DBNA as Broly does not exist. He is Vegeta's half-vrother (King Vegeta is their father, while the Queen is Vegeta's mother and another female elite saiyan is Rigor's). He was born with a PL identical to Vegeta's at birth (for this story, 538). Rigor's power grows abnormally compared to other Saiyans, which leads his mom to believe he's the Legendary Saiyan (he's done half the missions and training exercises Vegeta has but is almost as strong as Vegeta when they are 3 years old). His mom tells the King, who demands she keep quiet else they bring down Freeza's wrath upon them. When the King refuses to acknowledge Rigor as his son, Peppra (Rigor's mom) threatens to out him. Fearing the political backlash and the wrath of Freeza, King Vegeta orders Peppra and Rigor to be killed (under the guise of Treason). Peppra is betrayed by her own squad and an assassin goes to her home to murder Rigor. Peppra barely kills her assailants, and Rigor kills the assassin on his own. She puts Rigor off into a Saiyan Pod and launches him from Planet Vegeta to keep him safe, but as he is flying off, he sees Prince Vegeta, along with the king, murder his mom. He's raised on a planet stricken in an eternal war (which helps him grow so powerful), but eventually destroys its inhabitants and leaves. He lands on Planet Bebit, where he and Separi have their children, and is content to live a quiet life on the outskirts of the Universe until he hears that Vegeta survived their Planet's destruction, so he heads to Earth for revenge against the one who killed his mother.

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Post by miguelnuva1 » Wed Apr 09, 2014 7:11 pm

Unlike Broly, Rigor actually had a reason to hunt down Vegeta.

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Post by RandomGuy96 » Wed Apr 09, 2014 7:42 pm

And Buu is still two heads too short...

What is that on his finger in the second panel?
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He's probably referring to the Bardock special. Zarbon was the one who first recommended destroying Planet Vegeta because the saiyans were rapidly growing in strength.
It was actually Beerus disguised as Zarbon #StayWoke
Herms wrote:The fact that the ridiculous power inflation is presented so earnestly makes me just roll my eyes and snicker. Like with Freeza, where he starts off over 10 times stronger than all his henchmen except Ginyu (because...well, just because), then we find out he can transform and get even more powerful, and then he reveals he can transform two more times, before finally coming out with the fact that he hasn't even been using anywhere near 50% of his power. Oh, and he can survive in the vacuum of space. All this stuff is just presented as the way Freeza is, without even an attempt at rationalizing it, yet the tone dictates we're supposed to take all this silly grasping at straws as thrilling danger. So I guess I don't really take the power inflation in the Boo arc seriously, but I don't take the power inflation in earlier arcs seriously either, so there's no net loss of seriousness. I think a silly story presented as serious is harder to accept than a silly story presented as silly.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TheGmGoken » Wed Apr 09, 2014 7:46 pm

RandomGuy96 wrote:And Buu is still two heads too short...

What is that on his finger in the second panel?
I guessing its parts of his body coming off from his fingie.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Kamiccolo9 » Wed Apr 09, 2014 7:47 pm

RandomGuy96 wrote:And Buu is still two heads too short...

What is that on his finger in the second panel?
I think it's just "swish" marks.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by goku the krump dancer » Wed Apr 09, 2014 10:34 pm

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Puto » Wed Apr 09, 2014 11:22 pm

The English dialogue is unusually good in this page.
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