Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by FrogTrigger » Sun Apr 20, 2014 11:35 pm

Gohan's rage should be on display

All those years of repression! Kick his ass Gohan!

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by goku the krump dancer » Mon Apr 21, 2014 12:05 pm

FrogTrigger wrote:Gohan's rage should be on display

All those years of repression! Kick his ass Gohan!
Why does this sound like an episode title :lol:
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Cetra » Mon Apr 21, 2014 12:33 pm

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Is there a site where your comic is better listed so I can read it easier?

EDIT: Oops, I reverted the hair colour in the sketch. I also let out the black eye balls as it would have not looked good on my sketch.
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Post by Malik_DBNA » Mon Apr 21, 2014 3:55 pm

Cetra wrote:Image

Is there a site where your comic is better listed so I can read it easier?

EDIT: Oops, I reverted the hair colour in the sketch. I also let out the black eye balls as it would have not looked good on my sketch.
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by FrogTrigger » Mon Apr 21, 2014 3:57 pm

goku the krump dancer wrote:
FrogTrigger wrote:Gohan's rage should be on display

All those years of repression! Kick his ass Gohan!
Why does this sound like an episode title :lol:
Would it be bad to admit that's how I was thinking?

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Malik_DBNA » Tue Apr 22, 2014 5:03 pm

Been debating recently about doing a more 'traditional' and straight-forward revamp of DBNA's SSJ5. What say you guys? Out of the designs below, I would likely use number 3 for Rigor (maintaining the current black/gold color scheme of his hair) and number 1 for Son Goku and Vegeta should they reach the form. I need some opinions on this before I do the revamps of the Chapters with the current SSJ5 design.
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Post by DragonBalllKaiHD » Tue Apr 22, 2014 5:22 pm

If you think inking his fur black in the manga will look good, then by all means go ahead. Personally I would prefer for Rigor to go with the fifth one. It's to make your drawing/inking easier.

For Goku and Vegeta, I pick 2nd one. Keep the fur red while changing from black hair to red one, so that it looks like they transcended directly from SSj4.
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Malik_DBNA » Tue Apr 22, 2014 5:44 pm

DragonBalllKaiHD wrote:If you think inking his fur black in the manga will look good, then by all means go ahead. Personally I would prefer for Rigor to go with the fifth one. It's to make your drawing/inking easier.

For Goku and Vegeta, I pick 2nd one. Keep the fur red while changing from black hair to red one, so that it looks like they transcended directly from SSj4.
The problem with the fifth design is that in a black and white manga, it'd be virtually impossible to differentiate that one from a normal SSJ4. As for the dark fur should I use that design, I would either use a dark grey for Rigor and no color for Goku/ Vegeta, or color it like Oozaru fur in the manga, as show below:

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Cetra » Tue Apr 22, 2014 5:52 pm

Of the 5 number 1.
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by KentalSSJ6 » Tue Apr 22, 2014 6:19 pm

Id just keep the hair all black and make the fur browish. Around SSJ4 Gogeta's fur if not a wee bit darker, like a Normal Oozaru Brown

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by TheGmGoken » Tue Apr 22, 2014 7:51 pm

1 and 3. 5 Would be like an alt design in video games

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by hulkty » Wed Apr 23, 2014 12:04 am

Sent you a Commission note on DA...
Anyway, can you try to explain why SSj4 is "magical" in your manga? :?

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Saiga » Wed Apr 23, 2014 12:24 am

I think I like 1 and 3 the most. Mainly because it most closely matches my SS4 design :3 but they also just look really good.
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Malik_DBNA » Wed Apr 23, 2014 5:53 am

hulkty wrote: Anyway, can you try to explain why SSj4 is "magical" in your manga? :?
Is there something specific about it that makes you think it is magical?

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by FrogTrigger » Wed Apr 23, 2014 6:09 am

I'd go with 1

appeals to me the most

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by DBZGTKOSDH » Wed Apr 23, 2014 6:12 am

Malik_DBNA wrote:
hulkty wrote: Anyway, can you try to explain why SSj4 is "magical" in your manga? :?
Is there something specific about it that makes you think it is magical?
He is talking about the transforming clothes.
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Superman is, and always has been, a symbol for truth, justice, and upstanding moral fortitude–a role model and leader as much as a fighter. The more down-to-earth Goku has no illusions about being responsible for maintaining social order, or for setting some kind of moral example for the entire world. Goku is simply a martial artist who’s devoted his life toward perfecting his fighting skills and other abilities. Though never shy about risking his life to save either one person or the entire world, he just doesn’t believe that the balance of the world rests in any way on his shoulders, and he has no need to shape any part of it in his image. Goku is an idealist, and believes that there is some good in everyone, but he is unconcerned with the big picture of the world…unless it has to do with some kind of fight. Politics, society, law and order don’t have much bearing on his life, but he’s a man who knows right from wrong.

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Flame Dragon » Wed Apr 23, 2014 6:38 am

Go with 1. Feels like the natural evolution of SSJ4.

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Malik_DBNA » Wed Apr 23, 2014 9:49 am

DBZGTKOSDH wrote:
Malik_DBNA wrote:
hulkty wrote: Anyway, can you try to explain why SSj4 is "magical" in your manga? :?
Is there something specific about it that makes you think it is magical?
He is talking about the transforming clothes.
Ah. That particular aspect of the GT SSJ4 is not applied to the DBNA timeline. The clothes the user is wearing are the clothes they are wearing as a SSJ4. The top of the clothes is either removed beforehand or destroyed during the transformation. You can see this at the end of the Rigor Saga when Goku and Vegeta defuse, their tops are missing. During the Aladjinn Saga, each time Aladjinn-Vegeta reverted back to his base state from SSJ4, he used his own Dark Magic to regenerate Vegeta's shirt.

So, in short, no magic SSJ4 clothes

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by sangofe » Wed Apr 23, 2014 10:48 am

Cetra wrote:Of the 5 number 1.
Ditto.

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by TheDevilsCorpse » Wed Apr 23, 2014 12:29 pm

Whatever color combination might get rid of the shorts and thigh-high spandex look?

Sorry, but I just find the outfit ridiculous. Nevermind the fact that he's not wearing shoes, but he looks like he's got on long underwear and ended up accidentally ripping them when he tried to pull it up too fast. :?
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