Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

[goku the krump dancer]

That's a classic Vegeta kick.

Which means Aladdjin is in full %100 control of his mind and body... Well maybe %98.

[Malik_DBNA]

[hulkty]

Me in the distance: "Fuse dumbass!!!!"

[TheGmGoken]

Gohan looks like Vegetto fused with Yamcha in all your chapters.

[Cetra]

That Vegedjinn panel is one badass picture.

[supacomboy]

I just wanted to say I just read all of the Rigor saga for the first time the other night (before that I hadn't read any DBNA). I really enjoyed it and look forward to reading the Aladjinn arc!! I'm really impressed by your dedication in redrawing some of the earlier stuff too, I was thinking when I read you redrew earlier stuff it would just be a few panels but checking through your DA I realised it was entire pages, and not just copying the page and improving the drawing, but actually rearranging the whole page and improving the over all composition too. Keep up the good work!!

[Malik_DBNA]

Sneak preview of The History of Rigor Special from DBNA Volume 1

[Flame Dragon]

My only problem with Aladjieta in this image

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is that he looks a bit too stiff.

[Malik_DBNA]

My only problem with Aladjieta in this image

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is that he looks a bit too stiff.

I agree to a point. Believe it or not, that's a tricky pose to get down correctly. For me, anyway.

[supacomboy]

I like the preview, I think it is nicely drawn!!
Just a small comment, I don't want to offend, but the Japanese text in the upper right corner doesn't really work though, in my humble opinion.
As far as I am aware 歴史 is generally used for the field of study, or history in general. I haven't come across it used to refer to someone's personal past/background, although my Japanese is only mediocre/intermediate so you may wanna check with some one whose Japanese skills are more proficient....Maybe if Herms isn't too busy (a big if??) you could ask for his opinion?? - Herms I don't mean to add to your workload though, just that your Japanese is far better than mine!!

Some alternative suggestions could be;

リゴルの......

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(の is the particle used to show possession, but in this case it would be translated as of)

リゴルの身元 （みもと）mimoto (person's background, identity)
リゴルの過去 （かこ）kako (the past, bygone days)
リゴルの前歴 （ぜんれき）zenreki (personal history, past)
リゴルの自分史 （じぶんし）jibunshi (personal history)
リゴルの身の上 （みのうえ）mino'ue (personal history, someone's story)
リゴルの生い立ち （おいたち）oitachi (personal history, early life, upbringing)
リゴルの履歴 （りれき）rireki (personal history, background)

Of course though, these are only suggestions and it is entirely up to yourself what you want to do. I only meant it as a helpful pointer so please don't be offended. In fact it is entirely possible that some of these might not work very well either, as some of them I fished from a dictionary, and although the context they were given in seems fine, I haven't personally used some of these words.

On a different point, I also just finished reading the Aladjinn saga, I enjoyed it too. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with Piccolo......
It's already more or less the same length as the Rigor saga but it doesn't feel too near to completion, maybe only half way through?? I don't know how long you intend it to be but it already feels like it is gonna be an epic saga, I look forward to reading more!!

[Malik_DBNA]

I like the preview, I think it is nicely drawn!!
Just a small comment, I don't want to offend, but the Japanese text in the upper right corner doesn't really work though, in my humble opinion.
As far as I am aware 歴史 is generally used for the field of study, or history in general. I haven't come across it used to refer to someone's personal past/background, although my Japanese is only mediocre/intermediate so you may wanna check with some one whose Japanese skills are more proficient....Maybe if Herms isn't too busy (a big if??) you could ask for his opinion?? - Herms I don't mean to add to your workload though, just that your Japanese is far better than mine!!

Some alternative suggestions could be;

リゴルの......

Spoiler:

(の is the particle used to show possession, but in this case it would be translated as of)

リゴルの身元 （みもと）mimoto (person's background, identity)
リゴルの過去 （かこ）kako (the past, bygone days)
リゴルの前歴 （ぜんれき）zenreki (personal history, past)
リゴルの自分史 （じぶんし）jibunshi (personal history)
リゴルの身の上 （みのうえ）mino'ue (personal history, someone's story)
リゴルの生い立ち （おいたち）oitachi (personal history, early life, upbringing)
リゴルの履歴 （りれき）rireki (personal history, background)

Of course though, these are only suggestions and it is entirely up to yourself what you want to do. I only meant it as a helpful pointer so please don't be offended. In fact it is entirely possible that some of these might not work very well either, as some of them I fished from a dictionary, and although the context they were given in seems fine, I haven't personally used some of these words.

On a different point, I also just finished reading the Aladjinn saga, I enjoyed it too. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with Piccolo......
It's already more or less the same length as the Rigor saga but it doesn't feel too near to completion, maybe only half way through?? I don't know how long you intend it to be but it already feels like it is gonna be an epic saga, I look forward to reading more!!

Yeah my chinese translator (who knows Japanese) informed me about the error. It was fixed in the final version.

[supacomboy]

Yeah my chinese translator (who knows Japanese) informed me about the error. It was fixed in the final version.

Cool, hope you wasn't offended, I didn't mean any disrespect. The coloured pages by bejita135 are absolutely gorgeous. Do you think you would you consider a "Full Colour" release sometime in the future, in addition to the prints you are currently getting done??

[Malik_DBNA]

Yeah my chinese translator (who knows Japanese) informed me about the error. It was fixed in the final version.

Cool, hope you wasn't offended, I didn't mean any disrespect. The coloured pages by bejita135 are absolutely gorgeous. Do you think you would you consider a "Full Color" release sometime in the future, in addition to the prints you are currently getting done??

If bejita135 would be interested, I don't see why not. He makes the pages seriously look like the anime, he always does an amazing job.

[L·Lawliet]

I like the preview, I think it is nicely drawn!!
Just a small comment, I don't want to offend, but the Japanese text in the upper right corner doesn't really work though, in my humble opinion.
As far as I am aware 歴史 is generally used for the field of study, or history in general. I haven't come across it used to refer to someone's personal past/background, although my Japanese is only mediocre/intermediate so you may wanna check with some one whose Japanese skills are more proficient....Maybe if Herms isn't too busy (a big if??) you could ask for his opinion?? - Herms I don't mean to add to your workload though, just that your Japanese is far better than mine!!

Some alternative suggestions could be;

リゴルの......

Spoiler:

(の is the particle used to show possession, but in this case it would be translated as of)

リゴルの身元 （みもと）mimoto (person's background, identity)
リゴルの過去 （かこ）kako (the past, bygone days)
リゴルの前歴 （ぜんれき）zenreki (personal history, past)
リゴルの自分史 （じぶんし）jibunshi (personal history)
リゴルの身の上 （みのうえ）mino'ue (personal history, someone's story)
リゴルの生い立ち （おいたち）oitachi (personal history, early life, upbringing)
リゴルの履歴 （りれき）rireki (personal history, background)

Of course though, these are only suggestions and it is entirely up to yourself what you want to do. I only meant it as a helpful pointer so please don't be offended. In fact it is entirely possible that some of these might not work very well either, as some of them I fished from a dictionary, and although the context they were given in seems fine, I haven't personally used some of these words.

On a different point, I also just finished reading the Aladjinn saga, I enjoyed it too. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with Piccolo......
It's already more or less the same length as the Rigor saga but it doesn't feel too near to completion, maybe only half way through?? I don't know how long you intend it to be but it already feels like it is gonna be an epic saga, I look forward to reading more!!

Yeah my chinese translator (who knows Japanese) informed me about the error. It was fixed in the final version.

[TheGmGoken]

[xmysticgohanx]

That's amazing I think Aladdjin's aura and sparks should've been black tho

[Malik_DBNA]

[Cetra]

Who is that? Rigor, Frost, Gohan and the others?

[Flame Dragon]

Why is Aladjeta in Base form again in the last image?

[TheGmGoken]

Why is Aladjeta in Base form again in the last image?

You mean the colour pages