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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by RandomGuy96 » Sun Oct 26, 2014 3:34 pm

coola wrote:I don't know why, but i just smile when DNA say, that "He only kills half Earth population, so he is not evil" is crappy writing, i smile sadly, because that's how our world works "So what if he is genocide maniac, he is still better than that other one, let's help him" so it's not really shitty writing, but Realpolitik. As for this page, am i only one who find Gast smiling like that very creepy?
It's supposed to be creepy. That's the point.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dbzfan7 » Sun Oct 26, 2014 3:35 pm

Someone pointed out that Daimao could be used to repopulate the Namekians as he's a Dragon's Clan Namekian and not a fighting type. Maybe that's why Gast doesn't obliterate him? Still...I have no words for this right now...just wow.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TonyTheTiger » Sun Oct 26, 2014 3:59 pm

The perspective flip here is great. An evil character being taunted by someone threatening them with the prospect of becoming good. But I wonder if this is an actual prediction or just a really clever gambit. Maybe Gast doesn't actually know that Daimao will turn good but is instead deliberately planting the seed in Daimao's head to induce a self-fulfilling prophecy.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Marco Polo » Sun Oct 26, 2014 4:11 pm

WTF Gast looks evil as shit. What the fuck is going on

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Post by jjgp1112 » Sun Oct 26, 2014 4:11 pm

So in essence, Gast is pulling a reverse Palpatine.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TheDevilsCorpse » Sun Oct 26, 2014 4:16 pm

dbzfan7 wrote:Someone pointed out that Daimao could be used to repopulate the Namekians as he's a Dragon's Clan Namekian and not a fighting type. Maybe that's why Gast doesn't obliterate him? Still...I have no words for this right now...just wow.
I may be remembering wrong, but isn't almost everything we've seen of Gast less about him wanting to start a new community of Namekians, and more about him wanting the Dragon Balls to restore the ones that were lost to his merger in the first place? His base was Nail and the Eldest, and all those who fused with him were the latter's children. I'm sure the "loss" of them is a source of pain for the character, despite them technically being with him.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dbzfan7 » Sun Oct 26, 2014 4:25 pm

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dbzfan7 wrote:Someone pointed out that Daimao could be used to repopulate the Namekians as he's a Dragon's Clan Namekian and not a fighting type. Maybe that's why Gast doesn't obliterate him? Still...I have no words for this right now...just wow.
I may be remembering wrong, but isn't almost everything we've seen of Gast less about him wanting to start a new community of Namekians, and more about him wanting the Dragon Balls to restore the ones that were lost to his merger in the first place? His base was Nail and the Eldest, and all those who fused with him were the latter's children. I'm sure the "loss" of them is a source of pain for the character, despite them technically being with him.
Well I don't remember much of the early story...can ya blame me with what they've been doing?
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Post by FrogTrigger » Sun Oct 26, 2014 4:30 pm

jjgp1112 wrote:So in essence, Gast is pulling a reverse Palpatine.
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Post by goku the krump dancer » Sun Oct 26, 2014 4:35 pm

Well I guess that's one way to turn someone to the good side.. Daimaoh tryna be cool and repress his heart of Gold lol..
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by FoolsGil » Sun Oct 26, 2014 6:04 pm

Daimao, Surrender to Gast with all your friendship, and your path to the light side will be complete. :angel:

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Sun Oct 26, 2014 6:25 pm

coola wrote:I don't know why, but i just smile when DNA say, that "He only kills half Earth population, so he is not evil" is crappy writing, i smile sadly, because that's how our world works "So what if he is genocide maniac, he is still better than that other one, let's help him" so it's not really shitty writing, but Realpolitik. As for this page, am i only one who find Gast smiling like that very creepy?
Except that Gast's point was not that he is not evil. but that he is not absolute evil like he claimed because he has good in him (and that his good can be nurtured). So, I don't see your point.

And Gast's smile is obviously supposed to be creepy. This page is a play on the cliche of a character luring another character into evil and temptation, but reversed. Therefore we have Gast with the cliche creepy appearance while the other struggles.
Marco Polo wrote:WTF Gast looks evil as shit. What the fuck is going on
Same answer as above. And, no, he doesn't look like "shit", all panels have quality.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Marco Polo » Sun Oct 26, 2014 6:40 pm

rereboy wrote:And Gast's smile is obviously supposed to be creepy. This page is a play on the cliche of a character luring another character into evil and temptation, but reversed. Therefore we have Gast with the cliche creepy appearance while the other struggles.
Except that doesn't make any sense. If he's luring him into goodness he should look good and kind. Why would looking evil make the Great Demon King uncomfortable?

When Dabra was punished in the afterlife he was sent to Heaven, not Hell, since Hell wouldn't have any punishing effect on him.
rereboy wrote:Same answer as above. And, no, he doesn't look like "shit", all panels have quality.
"(Adjective) as shit" just means "very (adjective)", it has nothing to do with quality or literal shit. You're misunderstanding this English expression.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by ParkerAL » Sun Oct 26, 2014 7:02 pm

The forced (no pun intended) Star Wars quote is unbelievably lame, as is much of Gast's dialogue. I just don't get a Dragon Ball vibe from any of it. Maybe it feels off because we've gone from Gast slaughtering Cold and Cooler mercilessly last chapter, and now we see him spouting a bunch of "love and friendship conquers all" niceties. It's rather jarring.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Gyt Kaliba » Sun Oct 26, 2014 10:22 pm

Well this was...unexpected. And I can't help but laugh at the way it's going (not in a vindictive way as some are though), just because...well, it's hilarious to see someone tortured with the prospect of turning good. :lol: Beyond that though, I'm not really sure how to feel about it yet.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Kamiccolo9 » Sun Oct 26, 2014 10:31 pm

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by ParkerAL » Sun Oct 26, 2014 10:49 pm

Gyt Kaliba wrote:Well this was...unexpected. And I can't help but laugh at the way it's going (not in a vindictive way as some are though), just because...well, it's hilarious to see someone tortured with the prospect of turning good. :lol: Beyond that though, I'm not really sure how to feel about it yet.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Mon Oct 27, 2014 6:50 am

Marco Polo wrote: Except that doesn't make any sense. If he's luring him into goodness he should look good and kind. Why would looking evil make the Great Demon King uncomfortable?
Because its a obvious play on the cliche. Its there to make it extremely obvious to the reader, kind of like a pun or a 4th wall joke. And what makes Piccolo struggle is not Gast's look but the thought that Piccolo might have goodness in him.

What actually doesn't make sense is to expect something like that to be perfectly explainable in-universe. You might as well ask what was the in-universe logic of Piccolo Daimao claiming that this was supposed to be his chapter.
Marco Polo wrote: "(Adjective) as shit" just means "very (adjective)", it has nothing to do with quality or literal shit. You're misunderstanding this English expression.
I didn't misunderstand it. That expression is usually an hyperbole, but I usually prefer when people are fair in their criticism so I usually comment even on the hyperboles.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Doctor. » Mon Oct 27, 2014 8:34 am

Is Gast really trying to Talk no Jutsu Piccolo? Seriously?

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Post by mAcChaos » Mon Oct 27, 2014 9:21 am

This seems like a gag chapter.
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Post by rereboy » Mon Oct 27, 2014 9:31 am

mAcChaos wrote:This seems like a gag chapter.
It kinda is. Piccolo's statement about this being his chapter and Gast making fun of a corruption cliche make it clear. Its not taking itself very seriously, which is good since the power difference between the two is too much for this to be effectively serious.

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